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| 24 Jun 2014 09:23 AM |
(pms are for the weak)
It was SUPPOSE to be a jacket, but it ended up looking like a shirt, so I just rolled with it.
LuDSqPA
thoughts? what can I do better on?
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:24 AM |
pfft, no apathy so i dislike...
jk.
Good attempt tho :3
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:25 AM |
it looks nice
Integritas: Familia, Perinacia, et Fortitudo. |
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:26 AM |
i'll make a horrible apathy t-shirt just for you jack <3
and thanks
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:27 AM |
AS LONG AS ITS APATHY
IDC
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:27 AM |
That's not half bad to be honest.
The only thing I think you need to work on is making your shading work with your outlines, say your shading has a really nice shape to it, indicating creases and shadows or w/e you want to call them.
But the outlines like the collar thing and pockets are more straight and blocky, even making them slightly curved and not making them straight would be nice.
I think if you made the outer layer of shading ever so brighter and made your shading thinner so it doesn't go too far into the shirt would be nice, If you understand
Doing that would make your shading pretty damn good.
Is that all you require, master? |
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:27 AM |
thanks ashi
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:29 AM |
Sorry I write too much when it comes to designing >.<
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:29 AM |
Hai! @ Diglet
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:30 AM |
Hi
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:31 AM |
the l2d spam now these days is annoying -_-
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:34 AM |
You read my advice right?
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:35 AM |
| sorry dead ill get you a robloxian plushie |
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:38 AM |
@dig
"hai" means "yes" in japanese.
i should not have said that, lol
i meant for it to mean thanks
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:38 AM |
Oh lol.
Thought you were saying hi >.<
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:43 AM |
the pink probably murdered a few of my eye cells but
it looks good.
only thing i would recommend is decreasing the width of the creases in the shading
the smaller they are the cooler imo
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| 24 Jun 2014 09:46 AM |
haha eminem k
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