DashaDD
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| 22 Jun 2014 02:00 PM |
[Hook: Miya Canela] So much hatred, I cannot take it. I'm stressing, don't know if I'll be fine, but I'm sure that I will make it, Can I live, can I live, can I li-eh-ive. [x2]
[Verse 1: Miya Canela] They don't know I'm trying to get this sickness shaken, You didn't know the effects of the comments you were making, Two types in the world; the takers and taken, And both sides were mistaken for thinking my heart could be played with. No [N]s by your side until you proved the others wrong, All the love statements is evidence that I was corrupt and plain wrong, And on this road that's too long, I'll try and remain strong, Cause I know in my heart that my happiness is just prolonged. Where's the realness, where's the healness, Not made of steelness, but where's my feelness. They know no difference when your lyrics are trying to be revealness, They target and fire, but they still miss, I just let hateness go down my spine, As my heart rate declines, I know one day I'll be fine...
[Hook: Miya Canela] So much hatred, I cannot take it. I'm stressing, don't know if I'll be fine, but I'm sure that I will make it, Can I live, can I live, can I li-eh-ive. [x2]
[Verse 2: Miya Canela] It may be morning, but I still can't see the bright lights, They say you go to hell if you don't live by Christ, [N]s be treating humans like they're worthless animals, that's just not alright, They got ya' life on plate ready to be cannibalize and feed they appetite, They treating them as if they're different, cause they are, but that don't catch my sight, They getting mad when I leave them for lying to me, In the chatroom having fake frenzies. I see envy, they don't know what's in me, But in me, I see the true enemy, but they just don't know, They don't know, I would take a hole for them. No love now, not for the whole of them.
[Hook: Miya Canela] So much hatred, I cannot take it. I'm stressing, don't know if I'll be fine, but I'm sure that I will make it, Can I live, can I live, can I li-eh-ive. [x2]
[Bridge: Miya Canela] I can't stand the negativity. [x3] But I rise. When I rise, I'll be fine.
[Hook: Miya Canela] So much hatred, I cannot take it. I'm stressing, don't know if I'll be fine, but I'm sure that I will make it, Can I live, can I live, can I li-eh-ive. [x2] |
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Aetion
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| 22 Jun 2014 02:04 PM |
| Hi, hey there friend how are you? |
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ChanelG
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RandyMD
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| 22 Jun 2014 02:18 PM |
Dasha, I enjoyed this song... Here is my short review
This song sounds like a very thought out, like you wrote from the heart and not just what came to mind. My favorite lines in the first verse were "They don't know I'm trying to get this sickness shaken, You didn't know the effects of the comments you were making, Two types in the world; the takers and taken"
Could this possibly refer to Yasss Bish Yasss? Or possibly any other thing people left a bad comment on? Hmmmm...
Now, the hook was very omg. The Hook was perfect for both verses, I feel like it was short and powerful and had more meaning than it looks. Kudos on that.
And now the 2nd Verse, I enjoyed EVERYTHING about it. I didn't have just ONE favorite line, the entire thing was splendid. Very well done.
I got a pills N Potions vibe from this, but it was completely different from that song and the style was different, it was your own. I can honestly say, you did not write like Nicki Minaj in this song. I can't wait to see more of your work :) |
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DashaDD
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| 22 Jun 2014 02:22 PM |
"Two types in the world; the takers and taken"
Was a quote made in my favorite book "Raisin' in the Sun". #WalterLee |
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altar30
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| 22 Jun 2014 02:39 PM |
| This was amazing! I applaud the brilliant mind that put this together :) |
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Vandolve
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| 23 Jun 2014 08:20 PM |
| Radio worthy. Check out some of mine, if you get the chance :) |
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RandyMD
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| 23 Jun 2014 08:47 PM |
| I cant wait to see more of Dasha's work here. |
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shonyshon
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| 14 Jul 2014 09:57 PM |
| i'm tryna bust a load in natalya on god |
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| 19 Oct 2014 11:35 AM |
I only like songs that I can think of the music to.
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| 06 May 2015 07:22 PM |
| The reason why her song is explicit because it has a bad words "[N]" that make inappropriate but anyways her song is great. 9/10! |
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| 06 May 2015 07:24 PM |
| Miya Canela - Panic Attack (Jinix's Dubstep Remix) |
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