sdghtII
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| 22 Jun 2014 01:58 PM |
I am happy to show all of you guys the Beta version of my SpC Entry, Lorem Memorial Park.
You are probably thinking this right now: SDGHT IN SpC?!? LOL NO CHANCE IN HELL
Well, my building skills have progressed a lot since NFU.
I have went from this crap: http://www.roblox.com/Fort-Borealis-the-Great-The-Ruins-place?id=140116569
To this: http://www.roblox.com/RAT-Lorem-Park-Memorial-SpC-Project-BETA-place?id=151694760
I need you to not look at this as you currently see me and judge it as you are judging me. I need you to judge it like you would judge someone else. |
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| 22 Jun 2014 01:58 PM |
| I can't tell the difference. |
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sdghtII
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| 22 Jun 2014 01:59 PM |
| Rekt, go back into your dang hole. |
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| 22 Jun 2014 02:08 PM |
There's a severe lack of detail.
The room where you spawn in is very empty and needs things build on or into the walls, as well as some detailed structures around inside the building as well.
The statue as it wasn't created by you would either not be factored into the grading or harm the overall grade of the place.
In a nutshell, add more things. Add very detailed structures or objects. Right now it's a very basic, empty place that isn't being utilized very well. |
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| 24 Jun 2014 12:01 AM |
| Moo, thanks for actually posting something that might help me. |
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