Aetion
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| 20 Jun 2014 04:45 PM |
Instrumental| https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QC0mKzgCKvE
(rap starts at 0:37)
Dear god I think it's time we have a conversation These nights are getting lonely so my mind is racing Where were you when my dads medical issues were multiplying Where were you when my dog was dying Where were you in the times I needed you My parents didn't own a house so we were with a relative Was that your work? You couldn't have something better to give? Well I don't mean to be spoiled But after a while you got my blood boiled I know I could be in a even worse situation But why do you give people pain and discrimination? World War Two, North Korea, and Eviction That's why I don't believe in you I'm just having a conversation with myself Unless you respond I can't believe in you Cause you sure as [H] didn't solve my families health Infact, you let sickness grew But what do you care you just want to be worshiped You really give us this cause someone obeyed a serpent Just respond, cause this is urgent Or is there something I seem to misinterpret |
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| 20 Jun 2014 04:56 PM |
| I like it, but you should have kept going, like chorus and another verse. 8.5/10. |
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iaw35
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| 20 Jun 2014 05:01 PM |
| ^ Agreed 9.5, i was liking it, keep telling these stories, it seems like channels song has changed how we rap.... |
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Aetion
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| 20 Jun 2014 05:08 PM |
| Chanel's* and no, it wasn't because of that. |
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| 20 Jun 2014 06:17 PM |
| Kidding? I produced the first song like this this week see i get no credit for what i do Thats why i ask you all to look at my songs because you always seem to think the second person to make it is the creator. |
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| 20 Jun 2014 06:20 PM |
| Golden you're hating on everyone's skill because you don't have any, gtfo of radix, learn to make a rap and brush your teeth. |
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| 20 Jun 2014 06:22 PM |
| I left radix a long time ago im signed to RCRD you argument is irrelevant so leave. |
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Aetion
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Aetion
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| 22 Jun 2014 09:25 AM |
| 7.7/10. Golden why must you always bring your petty problems and complain. If credit was needed it would've been due. |
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Aetion
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keyyon
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| 23 Jun 2014 03:14 PM |
Mind if i do a remix called Dear Satan |
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Aetion
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keyyon
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| 23 Jun 2014 08:53 PM |
| Use this verse or send me onet |
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