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| 18 Jun 2014 11:36 AM |
Most of the time so I'm supposed to be wise Supposed to be closer to posting this right, but grow what it be Honest to me I can't see what I need when my focus is weak One day I'm tryna say the word or verse at a time Next day I feel I gotta kill these enemy lines Next day I'm tryna trap but this [n]'s a brick Next day I'm on a school boy tip Who gets his edict, But I ain't tripping if you want it [N]'s I think quick never quicker than a sonic A head G hogging up the mic I got it My friends be asking if I write Um, honestly I'm slacking better picked it up from popping this attey Singing pitty to the girls who ain't got em' a daddy
Talking: Well what is your ambition of vision my [n]? The saddest thing in life is wasting talent. Some have so much potential, but what you do with it is up to you.
I keep on straying down the wrong way These long days just set me back, and I know for important things I find a way If not then [h] all of my good excuses go My consequences for slacking off well, I'm back to a fraction a decent negative No matter where I go no patience Though I am the first one to preach it |
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| 18 Jun 2014 11:43 AM |
Thanks dood ^
A head G hogging up the mic I got it. |
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| 18 Jun 2014 11:48 AM |
Standin ovation this is really good. My rate is 8.5/10 |
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KyleRilyx
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| 18 Jun 2014 11:50 AM |
For freestyle, it's good.
You might want to fix up this little line. I don't know really. It just seemed a bit off. Maybe it's the way I read it.
"One day I'm tryna say the word or verse at a time Next day I feel I gotta kill these enemy lines Next day I'm tryna trap but this [n]'s a brick Next day I'm on a school boy tip"
Other then that; 7.8/10 |
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| 18 Jun 2014 11:52 AM |
Yea you probably didn't do it right because this is like a fast freestyle, and when I say school boy tip you say who gets his edict right after.
A head G hogging up the mic I got it. |
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