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LilBobbyPorter is not online. LilBobbyPorter
Joined: 09 Jul 2012
Total Posts: 548
18 Jun 2014 11:36 AM
Most of the time so I'm supposed to be wise
Supposed to be closer to posting this right,
but grow what it be
Honest to me
I can't see what I need when my focus is weak
One day I'm tryna say the word or verse at a time
Next day I feel I gotta kill these enemy lines
Next day I'm tryna trap but this [n]'s a brick
Next day I'm on a school boy tip
Who gets his edict,
But I ain't tripping if you want it
[N]'s I think quick never quicker than a sonic
A head G hogging up the mic I got it
My friends be asking if I write
Um,
honestly I'm slacking better picked it up from popping this attey
Singing pitty to the girls who ain't got em' a daddy

Talking: Well what is your ambition of vision my [n]?
The saddest thing in life is wasting talent.
Some have so much potential,
but what you do with it is up to you.

I keep on straying down the wrong way
These long days just set me back,
and I know for important things I find a way
If not then [h] all of my good excuses go
My consequences for slacking off well,
I'm back to a fraction a decent negative
No matter where I go no patience
Though I am the first one to preach it
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drake17dude is not online. drake17dude
Joined: 27 Oct 2011
Total Posts: 1842
18 Jun 2014 11:37 AM
Dope
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LilBobbyPorter is not online. LilBobbyPorter
Joined: 09 Jul 2012
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18 Jun 2014 11:43 AM
Thanks dood ^

A head G hogging up the mic I got it.
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kenzie12345555 is not online. kenzie12345555
Joined: 05 Nov 2012
Total Posts: 3557
18 Jun 2014 11:48 AM



Standin ovation this is really good. My rate is 8.5/10
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KyleRilyx is not online. KyleRilyx
Joined: 06 Jul 2009
Total Posts: 409
18 Jun 2014 11:50 AM
For freestyle, it's good.

You might want to fix up this little line. I don't know really. It just seemed a bit off. Maybe it's the way I read it.

"One day I'm tryna say the word or verse at a time
Next day I feel I gotta kill these enemy lines
Next day I'm tryna trap but this [n]'s a brick
Next day I'm on a school boy tip"

Other then that; 7.8/10
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LilBobbyPorter is not online. LilBobbyPorter
Joined: 09 Jul 2012
Total Posts: 548
18 Jun 2014 11:52 AM
Yea you probably didn't do it right because this is like a fast freestyle, and when I say school boy tip you say who gets his edict right after.

A head G hogging up the mic I got it.
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