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Smough is not online. Smough
Joined: 06 Dec 2011
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16 Jun 2014 09:08 PM
it doesn't have a real plot, it's a super, super rough RP idea that's still being developed. what do you guys think?

RP IDEAS THING COLLAB

RP IDEA 1:
Ancient Sinner (placeholder title til i get another one)
essentially, there's this big ol' land that's ancient and stuff that's been ravaged by this queen lady thing that was all greedy and sapped from her king, essentially draining him of his former glory and his subjects -- stuff like that. after a while, a group called "King Wardens" comes along and imprisons the king because they think the king is the one making the land all screwed and not his wife.

after a while, a revolt occurs and people capture the queen and send her away to a bastille, locking her deep within it and encasing her in a penal mask, manacles, and a straightjacket with a blade in front of her out of her reach. basically always had four elite guards that are always guarding the passage to the queen's cell which is really a huge cylindrical room. she's strung upside-down by two chains on her ankles, except she's on the ground somewhat and can't die from whatever it is that kills people from being help upside down.

after a while, she's murdered by a knight who basically purged the entire bastille and murdered the queen -- this guy was known by two names: The Pursuer and The Mad Knight. these are both well-earned titles as he pursues anything he sees fit to pursue. a notorious phrase always uttered by him when somebody encounters him and survives him the first time, which is rare, is this:

"No matter where you walk upon this earth, no matter where you hide, I will find you. I will hunt you down to ends of this accursed world until your last breath. I will never stop pursuing you."

Countless victims were claimed by this Mad Knight's blade and several faces are carved into his armor. Some say these are the souls of kings he consumed, others say these are the faces of his family that he held dearly and murdered so they could forever be immortalized in his armor, close by him. (That's just The Pursuer -- major baddie, but not the main one)


PEOPLE OF IMPORTANCE:

Father Faror, known for his holy benevolence and "guidance" for all those poor and needy, his true intentions are to cull the weak and pave the way for the strong. He's a God-King in a sense, ruling many people under him. This is all to earn the devotion of a Goddess he believes in so dearly: Juvileo. He believes because he is unable to see her, he thinks the weaker are hindering his perception to truly see the holy benediction of Juvileo.

But people don't see through the ugly truth of Father Faror and are swayed by his speeches depicting a man of true holy status and following him blindly -- as is with light. Light can deceive ones perception and lead them astray. This is how Father Faror gains his followers. People consider him a king, although he is not truly one himself.

His magic powers grow beyond even the limits of the greatest sorcerers, his power seems to go to infinity. A snap of the finger, and portions of the earth are lit. A simple gesture with two fingers and he lifts up a building alone with this. Nobody compares to Father Faror in terms of power. Some say that he comes from an ancient race of the gods and he is the only one left... an Olprt Sage. Nobody knows this to be true, though, as nobody dared question his ancestry. They just know to follow his orders.


Political Puppeteer:

A man by the name of Kaeth Drondr is a notorious political man within several kingdoms. Serving as an ambassador, nobleman, archduke, and many other high ranks within kingdoms. Because of this, he had the ear of every king, queen, and emperor. With this power, he controlled every kingdom practically and subtley influenced the leaders. Military upon military upon military guards him, assassins could not touch him. Even the greatest assassin, Ghalfando, could not kill him. He was virtually untouchable.

But alas, even fires die out eventually. Some are just snuffed out quicker, as may be with this man's greed.


Military Commander:

Vorssk Jintur is a ruthless military commander, serving underneath Kaeth Drondr and commanding thousands of soldiers ready to fight. He is Kaeth's right-hand man and is personally considered one of the most brutal military generals there are. He calls his army 'The Royal Aegis' since his army is tasked with protecting Kaeth and his resources. Efficient, brutal, and unrelenting, this man rivals many military powers.

There is one fatal flaw, though: he's reckless. Due to this, he is often careless with his resources and resorts to lightning war often-times. It's not to say it's not effective, he's just left defenseless once he wages lightning war. He and the last two remaining Witch Princesses have bad relations with each other. For what reason, though? Sometimes, some questions are best left unanswered, especially when it comes to the Witch Princesses.

CREATURES:


~The Aethonius
Ancient beings of yore, these people are rarely known by their true name. Most people call them 'Old Ones', for no other fitting name comes of them. Few people know the name, and even fewer know of their true form. However, there is proof they exist or have existed, as many of their technology exists. Nobody has ever been able to figure them out, not even the great sorcerers.

The Aethonius are very tall, slender people with a pale skin that's almost white. To accompany this already unsettling appearance, they lack a face completely and have no distinctive way of telling any of their emotions. They are often silent and do nothing, even when spoken to. These people were the very first to ever exist on this plane of existence, thus served as templates.

~The Douradus

A sub-species of humans. They are hideous creatures in terms of human beauty, and also lack intelligence and proper judgment. Their advantage over humans however; is their great strength and endurance, which is why they are used as slave workers, and sometimes as servants.

~Behemoths

Colossal beings that shelter themselves deep in forest-like areas, praying on wandering travelers. Behemoths are huge and horrific beings, yet they can be hard to find at the same time due to their cloaking ability.

Behemoths are skulky creatures with an abomniable appearance. They can be identified by their oversized head and enormous mouth. Their head isn't the only thing oversized, their d-
ark extensive hands are a great tool for snatching petty humans.

These creatures are... well.... undead! They are shambling wrecks that used to be living creatures, they can be any race. But humans are the most common type.

Lost Soldiers:

A sub-species of the undead, these Soldiers have been reanimated to keep the other undead in line. These soldiers can remember some of their old manouveurs, like marching in a line, some basic formations, etc.

Lost Sinners:

Another sub-species of the undead. The Lost Sinners were once in the same Bastille as the queen that was murdered by the Mad Knight. These sinners are very few, but they exist and are the ones that managed to escape his wrath. Some of them are being hunted down by The Pursuer for their survival of the purge. These people have little recollection of their memories and even fewer defense mechanisms. Often, they wear penal clothing that ranges from torture devices to straight-jackets, anything to hinder them.

Encountering a Lost Sinner may assist one, as they often have useful information -- especially on The Pursuer... That is, if you find one that has not gone mad.



Characters of Mention:

Random NPCS: You loot their houses, because they can't move from the single spot they're standing on.

Witch Princess Aru: One of the two remaining Witch Princesses, this Witch Princess often clashes with her clansister, Aryll. Whether these two are related or not is a mystery, but people often leave them alone. It's best to, anyhow, it's risky enough to deal with one in the first place. Aru is often depicted as a young woman with short hair, a tuft sticking out the top of her hair. She's also depicted with a dress that goes from being revealing, to a ball-gown, all sorts of dresses. In essence, a succubus if one is familiar with what those are.

Witch Princess Aryll: One of the two remaining Witch Princesses, this Witch Princess often clashes with her clansister, Aru. Often, this one is responsible for summoning her own abominations. It's not quite clear what her clothing is made of, but it's extremely difficult to slice it, in fact making a scratch on it is a novelty. She's often depicted with longer hair and a full skin-tight bodysuit, also with two curve blades at both sides of her hips. A rosemary is planted in her hair, also, though for what reason isn't too clear.

Throne Knight Vornarr: A legendary knight that defends Father Faror, this man is his right-hand. Armed with a powerful, lightning-imbued greatsword, he is incredibly fast and decorated in golden armor with red cloth, including a red cape. Loyal to Father Faror, he fiercely protects him and his ideals. Anybody he considers a heretic is smited by his mighty blade. Some people say this man is reminiscent of an old knight from ancient times. What knight, though, is a mystery, as nobody can seem to remember what it was.

The Old Merchant: A merchant that sells wears of great fortune and power. He is very quiet, and only talks when he must. It is unknown of how he had gained them, nor is his backstory established fully. The Old Merchant sits in his cave, waiting for people to buy his wares. He can described to appear large, hunch-backed and crusty. He wears a mask toshroud his face. Another depressing soul of these unforgiving lands.

{You dare raise your sword against God himself? You shall burn in his LIGHT!}
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vamking12 is not online. vamking12
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16 Jun 2014 09:09 PM
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Smough is not online. Smough
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16 Jun 2014 09:47 PM
that's it?

{You dare raise your sword against God himself? You shall burn in his LIGHT!}
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davidman202 is not online. davidman202
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16 Jun 2014 10:03 PM
I like this, but I have one question.

Could I have a char like Frankenstein in the movie Frankenstein. I mean, you can essentially make your own soul while retaining smarts. And Feankenstein's face looks cool.
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