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| 09 Jun 2014 03:41 PM |
"Are you sure about this?" he asked.
"Y-yes," I said, shaking.
I was being held captive in this terrible, rotting cell. I never get fed. He only gives me a small cup of water every day. It was horrible. I was afraid that I would never see my family again. I just wanted the horror to end.
He was infront of the door. Then, he slid an object to me through a slot in the door. I reached for it. It was the knife. The blade was cold and the handle was firm.
Then, he slid another object to me. I didn't know what it was, but I could hear it breathing.
I held the knife firmly in my hand. I shut my eyes, even though I couldn't see in the darkness. Then, I threw down my arm. It screamed. I dropped the knife and scooted into the corner. I brought my blood-ridden hands to my face and cried. I was devastated at what I did. He slid the object I just killed out of the cell.
"I hope it was worth it," he said. Then, he slid through the slot a Klondike bar. |
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| 09 Jun 2014 03:43 PM |
Creative, but check your grammar.
"I never get fed. ... I was afraid. ... Then, he slid another object to me"
check yo tenses bro |
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| 09 Jun 2014 03:43 PM |
| Its over a year old and I typed it fast |
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| 09 Jun 2014 03:45 PM |
such a twist at the end!!!!!!!!
originally fantasticdarkwolf | AND SHANIQUA DIDNT EVEN GET ME STARBUCKS |
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| 09 Jun 2014 03:50 PM |
@spreck:
good
@Zaru:
genius amirite
@astro:
idk
@korc:
i know :) |
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| 09 Jun 2014 03:51 PM |
"I held the knife firmly in my hand. I shut my eyes, even though I couldn't see in the darkness. Then, I threw down my arm. It screamed."
what? |
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| 09 Jun 2014 03:52 PM |
this messed me up [2]
its a flying jimmy | ot youngling |
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| 09 Jun 2014 03:55 PM |
Now I'm imaging a movie where someone goes on a big adventure to find a Klondike bar
and in the trailer it says, "what would you do...for a Klondike bar?" |
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| 09 Jun 2014 03:56 PM |
| they should make a whole movie about how this guy tries to obtain the most beloved thing on earth so he kills a crap load of people and at the end the BIGGEST PLOT TWIST OF THEM ALL is the item is a klondike bar |
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| 09 Jun 2014 04:03 PM |
" It screamed."
i don't understand this part either. |
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| 09 Jun 2014 04:03 PM |
| if it was an animal it would have made a highpitched noise as it died or something |
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| 09 Jun 2014 04:06 PM |
| was it animal what was it u wrote this story |
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| 09 Jun 2014 04:15 PM |
| what animal was it why was it kill why did he make u kill it and not kill it himself |
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| 09 Jun 2014 04:17 PM |
idk i couldnt see [2]
hes sick |
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