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Re: Short story I wrote over a year ago

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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 03:41 PM
"Are you sure about this?" he asked.

"Y-yes," I said, shaking.

I was being held captive in this terrible, rotting cell. I never get fed. He only gives me a small cup of water every day. It was horrible. I was afraid that I would never see my family again. I just wanted the horror to end.

He was infront of the door. Then, he slid an object to me through a slot in the door. I reached for it. It was the knife. The blade was cold and the handle was firm.

Then, he slid another object to me. I didn't know what it was, but I could hear it breathing.

I held the knife firmly in my hand. I shut my eyes, even though I couldn't see in the darkness. Then, I threw down my arm. It screamed.

I dropped the knife and scooted into the corner. I brought my blood-ridden hands to my face and cried. I was devastated at what I did. He slid the object I just killed out of the cell.

"I hope it was worth it," he said. Then, he slid through the slot a Klondike bar.
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Spreck is not online. Spreck
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09 Jun 2014 03:43 PM
this messed me up
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Impostor22 is not online. Impostor22
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09 Jun 2014 03:43 PM
Creative, but check your grammar.

"I never get fed. ... I was afraid. ... Then, he slid another object to me"


check yo tenses bro
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 03:43 PM
Its over a year old and I typed it fast
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Zarutary is not online. Zarutary
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09 Jun 2014 03:45 PM
such a twist at the end!!!!!!!!


originally fantasticdarkwolf | AND SHANIQUA DIDNT EVEN GET ME STARBUCKS
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AstroPickles is not online. AstroPickles
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09 Jun 2014 03:46 PM
It was a little puppy :O
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Korc is not online. Korc
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09 Jun 2014 03:47 PM
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 03:50 PM
@spreck:

good

@Zaru:

genius amirite

@astro:

idk

@korc:

i know :)
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Jaylii is not online. Jaylii
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09 Jun 2014 03:51 PM
"I held the knife firmly in my hand. I shut my eyes, even though I couldn't see in the darkness. Then, I threw down my arm. It screamed."

what?
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 03:51 PM
i stabbed it
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GenexLord is not online. GenexLord
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09 Jun 2014 03:52 PM
this messed me up [2]

its a flying jimmy | ot youngling
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 03:52 PM
good [2]
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XTGNecro is not online. XTGNecro
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09 Jun 2014 03:55 PM
Now I'm imaging a movie where someone goes on a big adventure to find a Klondike bar

and in the trailer it says, "what would you do...for a Klondike bar?"
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RubyStatue is not online. RubyStatue
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09 Jun 2014 03:56 PM
but what was thing???
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 03:56 PM
they should make a whole movie about how this guy tries to obtain the most beloved thing on earth so he kills a crap load of people and at the end the BIGGEST PLOT TWIST OF THEM ALL is the item is a klondike bar
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 03:57 PM
@ruby:

idk i couldnt see
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 04:01 PM
bump of scarring
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RubyStatue is not online. RubyStatue
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09 Jun 2014 04:03 PM
how object scream
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Jaylii is not online. Jaylii
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09 Jun 2014 04:03 PM
" It screamed."

i don't understand this part either.
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 04:03 PM
if it was an animal it would have made a highpitched noise as it died or something
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RubyStatue is not online. RubyStatue
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09 Jun 2014 04:06 PM
was it animal what was it u wrote this story
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 04:09 PM
it was an animal
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RubyStatue is not online. RubyStatue
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09 Jun 2014 04:15 PM
what animal was it why was it kill why did he make u kill it and not kill it himself
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TheEpicHobo is not online. TheEpicHobo
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09 Jun 2014 04:17 PM
idk i couldnt see [2]

hes sick
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