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| 07 Jun 2014 09:13 PM |
(Verse 1/2Crucial) I don't understand the lies between people and power, dollars an hour [N] straight honoring cowards All I understand is loot and leaving food on the counter Stress kill me so hard I'm blowing oz of the sour Yesterday I was the little man throwing the rock Now I gotta be the one to start calling the shots Man I didn't learn yes, I didn't grow with pops In life I've had my ups, but I done settled with drops I must be spitting true [s], man my eyes are real bold Ever since I was a youngin' I been doing what I'm told I'm really to young to be feeling this old, so baby girl don't break my heart again you made me real cold Feeling like a used car that can't be sold, (Rest) but my intensity will keep me strong I got a aisle full of dreams where I belong Never felt like I needed to be accepted, so if you tell me differently then best believe you'll be corrected
(Chorus) I been dreaming about this since I was 6 years old I'm in love with counting chips and pretty chicks that smoke, and in case you ain't been informed I spit that dope I represent the 8 6 O until the day I'm a ghost x1
(Verse 2/Enormity) Got these politicians with a bonus and bigger pay day about ten times than a soldiers pay grade. E1 to O9 dodging more bullets than the school of columbine So sad, a ship leaves to battle they get bombed for US weapons testing told the family they died in combat what a baffle Those same victims were US troops protecting Corrupt Cowards Honored and in great powers From Mafia Leaders, Presidents and Prime Ministers Take the innocents and diminish this I remember when I guy punched me and ran at school They MADE me apologize for insulting, school principle's are a fool he got lunch detention and I got lunch detention and an apology What a [F]'ed up ideology Fights for equality In the home of the FREE Not like you can't protest in the streets of violent priority A guy called me a [N]er and nothing happened I say anything I get silenced made to be quiet Like who in this vicinity gave you this entity of power when you can't sensibly control it to a degree to where you can pleasantly consistently make a right choice? I would say the devil is up to this But I'm leaning towards Atheist Me saying that? oh who gives a crap So am I bad? Stupid? misunderstood Need more bible study, Get burned like wood Just cause I'm not a believer? I don't believe that Nor do most people, but we still fight that Discrimination, Segregation, Violence and retaliation PTSD, in the city of Compton Corrupt police, can we even stop them?
(Chorus) I been dreaming about this since I was 6 years old I'm in love with counting chips and pretty chicks that smoke, and in case you ain't been informed I spit that dope I represent the 8 6 O until the day I'm a ghost x1
(Verse 3/2Crucial) I remember trading Pokemon on my best friends porch Now I'm poking T Moms against my favorite sport Teachers told my mom by now I'd be dead in court Man, this the type of flow to make you nod until your neck hurt Bad women quote on they favorite social networks When it's grind time every [n] in my set work My road to success is anything but scenic I hope that France looks exactly how I dreamed it Lord, watch over me, and make sure the devil never gets a hold of me, and keep my seat out of a gold diggers ovaries May I be the father my pops is suppose to be I promised my mama I'd be her boyfriend Back when I was 8 It's crazy I was just a boy then Never was dealing with problems I am now avoiding |
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| 07 Jun 2014 09:17 PM |
| That's a 10/10 Right there. Nice consistent song. It didn't seem to fall off at any moment. |
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| 07 Jun 2014 09:49 PM |
| Thanks appreciate it! Instrumental- http://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=ll+cool+j+love+you+better+instrumental&FORM=VIRE1#view=detail&mid=4ACA8B78EA6F4203AA354ACA8B78EA6F4203AA35 Rap starts 0.22 |
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| 08 Jun 2014 07:17 AM |
| 2Crucial + Enormity = GREATNESS! |
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| 08 Jun 2014 09:55 AM |
| @BriannaPrice Haha thanks appreciate it a lot! @Drake thanks homie! |
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| 08 Jun 2014 11:19 AM |
| I LOVED it. Absolutely marvelous. Steady flow and had meaning behind every single verse. |
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| 08 Jun 2014 11:55 AM |
| First song on ROBLOX that I would rate 10 out of 10. Good job guys, you show those fakes. |
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| 08 Jun 2014 12:30 PM |
| Wow. Amazing #2CrucialTakeOver |
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| 08 Jun 2014 12:50 PM |
| Nice bro. Not too long, not too short, just perfect, good rhymes and verses, perfect 10/10 bro. I love this song, maybe you could sing and edit it and get it published, and get famous. |
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| 08 Jun 2014 02:35 PM |
Ew This is better: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hqIsc8ooXug
Emos are idiots |
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| 08 Jun 2014 03:24 PM |
| 10/10 now stop spamming my inbox. |
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| 08 Jun 2014 03:30 PM |
| Bobby you're legend right? |
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| 08 Jun 2014 05:21 PM |
| 9/10 That's some real stuff right there. |
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| 08 Jun 2014 05:57 PM |
10/10 This is really good. This is why I like your raps. They look like the come from your experiences that actually happened to you instead of rappers who speculate on what is going on in the world. The rhymes were good, nothing seemed out of place and the flow was also very good. Try more wordplay and clever verses like double entendres, where the verse can be taken into two meanings. This is some A+ stuff man! |
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