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| 04 Jun 2014 01:36 PM |
(Set in the 1800's, free roam RP. There is no main definite story, though with your own characters, you can create side plots of your own. Your destiny is yours to command.)
The Overview is a long read for those who would like a little more information about New York. You ARE NOT required to read it, its simply there as a helpful guide and source of information
Overview
In the 1800's, New York the most populated city is thriving in trade and a new goverment with plans of equality and liberty for all. It is home to merchants, sailors, goverment leaders and military's. You can role-play in any position you'd like.
Character Sheet:
Name: Age: Gender: Eye color: Height (Optional): Weight (Optional): Hair/Hair Color: Bodily: Clothing: Biography (At least three sentences): Occupation: Ethnic Race (Optional): Other (Optional): Inventory (Optional): Personality:
Rules:
#1 Ignore the spam? #2 Respect Each Other #3 PM me if any complaints
Administrators:
MarkPalmer krow37676 epikman395
Notes:
Notes:
You can make any plot on your story. The place where we are all living is New York. You can kill and associate with other's but please ask for permission first. |
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| 04 Jun 2014 01:42 PM |
(Guess I'll start)
Name: James T. Daniels Age: 24 Gender: Male Eye color: Blue Height (Optional): 6'4 Weight (Optional): 177 Hair/Hair Color: Blonde Bodily: Athletic Clothing: Redcoat, white pants and a Tricorn Biography (At least three sentences): James was born to a military father in London. His mother died from sickness when he was only four. His father would regularly take him out to hunt and he became accustomed to being out in the wild. He became a great marksman. When he was fifteen his father left to New York and never returned, finally, they confirmed he had died from drowning aboard a lost ship. Sad, he joined the ranks of the British army, he travelled the sea's to Boston. Then he was assigned duty in New York, he has lived there ever since. Occupation: British Sergeant Ethnic Race (Optional): White Other (Optional): None Inventory (Optional): Musket with bayonet, flintlock, cutlass sword Personality: Funny and rude at times
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Riducule
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| 04 Jun 2014 02:31 PM |
It looks good, but you need to do more information, a detailed intro, explaining what it is in full-depth, then maybe a back-story, we need a twist, then do the plot, teaching you how to play and so on.
The Conservative Brony who's only 10 |
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Millicus
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| 04 Jun 2014 02:33 PM |
killed self:
"The Overview is a << long >> read for those who would like a little more information about New York. You ARE NOT required to read it, its simply there as a helpful guide and source of information"
if i could, i'd highlight the word 'long' above. now read below
Overview
In the 1800's, New York the most populated city is thriving in trade and a new goverment with plans of equality and liberty for all. It is home to merchants, sailors, goverment leaders and military's. You can role-play in any position you'd like.
jesus christ my eyes died due to it's length
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| 05 Jun 2014 06:38 PM |
| There needs to be a big problem that connects everyone somehow. This story doesn't have that |
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Xyrial
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| 05 Jun 2014 07:25 PM |
Character Sheet:
Name: James Treville Age: 27 Gender: Male Eye color: Light Green Height (Optional): 6' 4" Hair/Hair Color: Light brown Bodily: Average --------------- Clothing: Hat (Something like Washington's hat), long overcoat, with vest and white dress shirt underneath. For full detail, these are his clothes: Hat: http://www.roblox.com/Washingtons-Hat-item?id=12565866 Shirt: http://www.roblox.com/Admiral-dress-coat-item?id=101862304 Pants: http://www.roblox.com/RAdm-Adm-dress-pants-item?id=101862450 --------------- Biography (At least three sentences): James Treville was born to Martin and Laritha Treville in Dublin, Ireland, in 1773, March 19. His dad wanted him to work as the King's servant, but Treville found his own path and joined the navy. His parents were unhappy with Treville for this, but soon after, Treville rose through the ranks and eventually became a Lieutenant, pleasing his parents. He eventually worked his way up to Rear Admiral and is now considered to be one of the greatest naval commanders of all time. His flagship is the HMS Honour. Occupation: British Rear-Admiral ---------------- Ethnic Race (Optional): White Other (Optional): He keeps a flintlock and a cutlass on him much of the time, especially when on board a ship. He sometimes wears an Undress coat, instead of his Dress coat. Inventory (Optional): Flintlock, Sword, Locket (Retrieved from a pirate ship.) Personality: Serious but has a good sense of humour. Strict with his men, has very high expectations, but is also nice to them when needed. When it comes to Naval commanding, Treville is very serious and will try everything to decimate his opponent. |
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