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I WROTE A STORY :D

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Yogi552 is not online. Yogi552
Joined: 24 May 2011
Total Posts: 3123
02 Jun 2014 09:29 PM
Here we go:

Fire starter

I've lost it all.....Everything....Everything I could ever love....Everything I will ever love...But Im still strong..I will fight this... I will be brave..I can make it....But I can't....My life is mess....No one will help me....But I better explain my story..

My names Merida, by the way. On with the story.... I was born on 16th of January, During a horrible fire..a Spark touched me, but it didn't hurt. But My Mother died while giving birth to me... I have a sister, Rare. shes a normal child, But Im a Fire Sorceress.. All because a spark hit my heart, mutating all my DNA to cause this..But it was for the worst..

When I was young, I thought I could control it and not hurt the people I love. Boy was I dead wrong..I struck my uncle in his veins with it...He died shortly after...My father tried to stand up for me "She doesn't know how to control it!" I apologized to him over and over...while Rare watched in horror...

When I was around 16-17, My father tried to make me wear gloves..But I kept burning them. He never said anything like "IT ALL YOUR FAULT, MERIDA! I WISH YOU DIED INSTEAD OF YOUR MOTHER!" He was extremely supportive of my power. Rare was afraid of me, she never went near me and stayed close next to our father. Of course, I understood this. But then...One night.. I was practising some of my powers to see if I could have any beauty in them. I Made a flame horse that ran around me before it just became a pile of embers.. but one of the embers touched our house...5 seconds later, The House was burning...Father Tried to get Rare out the window, By saying " Rare, You life depends on this. You must jump into Merida's arms..." I held them out and tried so hard not to focus on fire...I though of water.
But, of course, Rare would never trust a fire sorceress like me..She refused until Father had to push her.. She fell on the grass, Green stained her dress and all... But father was not as lucky...The attic fell down because of the flames...Crushing him. When the flames had destroyed everything we had, I ran into the wreckage, Trying to see if he was alive.
I had to pull out alot of wood just to find him..He didn't survive...I knew that the closest person to me would have to die...His cloak was the only thing that survived. I grabbed it before throwing it over Rare. "Run Rare, Your safe from me now...Run before I destroy you..." Rare looked at me, Tears in her eyes and said "Goodbye, Merida." Running away, Cloak flying in the win.

I just sat there...ash on my dress, flames dead. I cried..I never thought this would have happened. I should have learned how to control it....But I didn't. Causing everyone I love to burn or run away from me...Im a monster...I can't fight it anymore....This is my story and I can't do anything else about it. Im done. My powers are evil....Im not a blessing...Just a curse...


Please don't 'Flame' on it, As I acctually worked hard on this, However, I do need some form of feedback.
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