Aetion
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| 31 May 2014 09:01 PM |
Enormity| New God Flow Trials and tribulations But I got my afterglow Disses after disses sending careers on deathrow After all I got reputations And if I mess up, everyone will know Putting these rappers to sleep call it sedation This is Aetion in Meditation AFter a while I get tired of complications Between rappers and their 2 faces So I split their faces in half and glue them together You call it sick I call it fashion - stellar I'm an oldie, even Drake calls me professor But then again everyone knows I could kill 'em at pleasure I remade RCRD, and made my own moves You signed to Radix? Oh that's cool We're RCRD, Legacy Our competition? TDE Not GBE World Peace
NaRuTo| Writing words with a pen Killing rappers; a sin Everyone around me stays consumed by the din But my voice clears the room Everybody wants to listen to the rapper that cascades lyrics like monsoons Sweep foes with 3 brooms Lyrics getting you higher than tides of the moon Having you curling up like insects in cocoons People said that I sucked but then I'm not a vacuum That's what she said I've been trying my very hardest Not trying to come off as an inept rapper But no lie, took writing three cyphers to make it dapper Spent all day perfecting my word diction Nary a word left that I haven't used So make sure you read carefully and peruse A lot of hidden punchlines One or two words to define Definitions shocking you worse than some Cannon's in Drumline But then again, some say this whole thing might be atrocious I think it's super-cali-fragi-listic-expi-ali-docious
ChanelG| Slick missin, Sneak dissin, [A] kissin Ohh here we go again with Mufasa's usual [BS] He's lucky I'm not near him, or else he would've been hit OH NO WAIT, I CAN'T! I'LL GET DISSED! I'M SO SCARED! But if only there was somebody here who actually cared. Oh boo hoo- What're you gonna do? Say I [F] you? Haha keep on rambling about what you know is untrue You ask for respect but you've clearly never earned it For the record, we're not cool until I confirm it Don't come crying to me, save your apologies and get a tissue Instead of just saying sorry, actually FIX your issues. You called me a "Chihuahua", so we can settle this like dogs, You don't want these paws, nor the claws- hold on lemme pause, Relax and unwind, rewind then play the words in my mind. "Chanel can choose a side and still get dusted like an ash tray" Fix it Jesus, I wish you knew the words that you say. Heed MY words then, because for you this is a preliminary To my itinerary for my honorary commentary of your career. Damn- hang on, I'll let you borrow my dictionary You can read it when you Bizz are out of the missionary Go run and tell him like you always do, like a little [B] Even the one you praise, Chief Keef doesn't like a little snitch. You DARE diss the Goddess? I see you're not too cautious... I mean I'm not being rude, I'm just being honest Your rhymes are too modest, I thought you were a novice My English is better than yours, and that language wasn't my first Having a [B] fit again? PLEASE grab a t*mpon out your mom's purse. My bars are on fire, they're hotter than a radiator I am a Gladiator, a single handed annihilator I'm here to let all these [N] know that Chanel G is back Before you know it I'll have you sufferin from a cardiac attack Call me Cholesterol, for your pain take pills and sip ethanol They told me to like Mortal Kombat: "FINISH HIM", so I did as told Now I'm done with you, I don't have the time to argue with a two year old. If you think you can call me out like that, you must be insane I have no time for hate, scoot over and get the h3ll outta my fast lane.
ShadyBrute| My rhymes are packing heat, military issued, My rhymes stick to you, like your used tissue, Came out of no where, I'm like Casper, Except not as friendly, but does that matter? Watch for the blizzard, my rhymes will keep you frozen, I'm more like Eminem, if no one could even hold him, I'm on that new god-flow, You're on that fake ghetto gos-pel, I tried to stay Mandella, Never tried to be harmful, But you've awoken a monster, This is the greatest book by the worlds greatest author, You say you love real rap, and yet you sneak diss Altar? Watch as I put the cow out to slaughter, I show you R.A. the Rugged man and you think it's coming from a flying saucer, You should be ashamed, Your father probably though he had a son, I take volcano flows, and make it even hotter, Now he's dissapointed that he has a daughter, Severing your legs, do you need a walker?
Jubril| I go hard in the bank, Other mfers say they got green but they hungry in the tank All they can really do is go hard when they hate Nikka thought he could get bishes, without bait Im on that upper echleon rich, can you speak my language? Who the fk are you,Old news? yeah you the same bish That was, talking sht but you not in my lane bish My lyrics are like storms and you cannot name it My mind is running wild and you cannot contain it I mean, Im out here gettin my money and more I body some nikkas, its time to mop the floor Came back to help the lost ones, I have opened the door I hope they learn to stay true and hardcore I hear all those raps and they really a bore Like its a lullaby, its make me want to snore Talking bout you a legend? Well look at the score! I mean like you could only get hot out in singapore! Anyways
KingHurricane| Well, Apparently my own mask is scaring me And why does everyone complain about vocabulary? I'm a Murderer I should be in jail or the military. I killed Legacy then threw up a million berries. People are about to get destroyed Cause I'm so annoyed Ate all my food now I'm eating chips ahoy People complaining about toys And boys on st3roids I'm about to grab the knife again cause of the noise. Other people murder everything but mics though. And when you look up KH/Tornado the results say "Psycho." Trading in a tent, And just take a look at my mask and you'll see why I'm never innocent. When I ask when something happens it says "all soon." And thanks to Phantom every day I'm listening to Funk Volume. When it comes to comics I'm evil from DC. And of course KH is in this cypher this is RCRD. That's all you need to know Information has been stated. Always hated and motivated and Phantom and I are Funk Volume recreated. East Coast.
Aristios|Spit Billzardous action No encouraging lyrics not compassion a fashion of this elastic Drastic fascist crashing. Collabing lashing out the maddest verbal fasting. Lions a kitten mixed fables more than misfits love critics Gatis and Floaters I'll run over lions skull with my rover. Cereal serial Killing ain't feeling these fetuses I illustrate my past like garard Synthetic epidemic replenish paramedics generic rap's seem genetic. Let me tend to those wounds peace resolution. Violence revolution special exclusion. Intrusion destroying these fools and swallowing. Foolishness. Elusions giving confusions a spoon full of conclusions.
Enormity| Wait [F] that peace Kill Ro Rappers like factories kill tree's Tell lion to keep lying before his career is dying This is a contribution To another Ro Rap dead and RCRD revolution So sit back and listen student The professor is grabbing the mic and you don't need to use it Ro Rap contradictary reading music No Audio, strict peotry contradictionary art Real from the start got you flying like a broomstick All these boys trying to figure me out like a cube rubix None of these rappers meet the rubric I guess because of these stupid rubrics you'll never solve the rubix I'm dropping this harder than peoples wish for an apocalypse Dayz are going killing lunatics I used to keep Lion as my pet since he wasn't a good student And he knew it So I'mma take his career, you could say I blew it Just as much as he Blew Bizz to get lyrics for music I guess you can call that relation ship abusive Think it's a tie breaker? I don't got my suit and tie Break the tie his career fell like a skydive from a G5 while 9 lives were falling out of heaven I think it is the goddesses I see future Ro Rap deaths from Nostradamus's I'm dropping this Like napalm bombs Vietnam this [S] Self Destruct like 1slam Hit ya like chinese hit a gong RCRD, and the others we don't get along |
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Aetion
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| 31 May 2014 09:02 PM |
Forgot to post the instrumental. Silly me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j1P71hDSFzM
Meow I'm a cow |
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| 31 May 2014 09:03 PM |
Hottest MCs.
#RCRD
Everyone else at the bottom of the barrel, scrapping. |
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| 31 May 2014 09:27 PM |
| Damn it's long but it's great, 9.5/10 |
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| 31 May 2014 09:29 PM |
I'm sorry but my mind ain't in full blast right now so I can't rate it to the best of my abilities. I WILL though summarize it.
First off the flow, it was great, only the last three verses had small issues on it.
The meaning, well this is a cypher for RCRD. That can not be more clearer xD.
The impact was perfected, since only three rappers didn't diss lionhart. I'm only counting this category for the ones who did diss lionhart. This would be my favorite line out of the whole cypher:
"I used to keep Lion as my pet since he wasn't a good student And he knew it So I'mma take his career, you could say I blew it Just as much as he Blew Bizz to get lyrics for music I guess you can call that relation ship abusive"
Those lines would certainly wow me xD.
The whole cypher must have been edited on for a long time. It was all most perfected, barley any errors. In my view, this song more than earned a 9.7/10, 8.5-10/10 for everyone else's views.
I'm gona introduce something new, and give this song THE LYRICAL SEAL OF APPROVAL! Woo!
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| 31 May 2014 09:33 PM |
| Thanx buddy, all of us were waiting for this to release. We hope it um... served some music appeal to the starving lyrical savages out there |
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minniem
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| Joined: 03 Nov 2010 |
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| 31 May 2014 09:35 PM |
o___o 10/10... This was amazing! I need to give you guys credit separately:
Aetion- Nice multi's, PERFECT metaphors, and wonderful rhyming. What I like most about your verses is that they always have the best flow out of them all. Job EXRETEMLY well done.
Best line: " Real from the start got you flying like a broomstick All these boys trying to figure me out like a cube rubix"
Naruto- Still a rising artist, but you really outdid yourself here. This is better than the usual work I've seen from you. Keep up the great work!
Best line: "But then again, some say this whole thing might be atrocious I think it's super-cali-fragi-listic-expi-ali-docious"
Chanel- Oh. My. God. Whoever you are dissing, their career is OVER. This is even better than your appearance on the Radix cypher! FLAWLESS multi's and vocabulary. Perfect job. Keep it up, Chanel.
Best line: "I'm here to let all these [N] know that Chanel G is back Before you know it I'll have you sufferin from a cardiac attack Call me Cholesterol, for your pain take pills and sip ethanol"
Shady- Welcome back Shady! Your verse was great, and I can tell you hardly even tried at all. That's what I like about your lyrics. Great job!
Best line: "Came out of no where, I'm like Casper, Except not as friendly, but does that matter?"
Jubril- I like your verse. You give off a "Nicki Minaj" kinda vibe to me (I hope that doesn't come off as insulting). Great rhymes and metaphors!
Best line: "Talking bout you a legend? Well look at the score! I mean like you could only get hot out in singapore!"
Hurricane- Your getting good at this, Hurricane. REALLY good. Your vocabulary is increasing, plus your metaphors are so much better. Keep up the great work.
Best line: "Other people murder everything but mics though. And when you look up KH/Tornado the results say "Psycho."
Aristios: Um. Tbh I've seen you do better, but this was good. Write a littleee more next time. Good work!
Best line: "Intrusion destroying these fools and swallowing. Foolishness. Elusions giving confusions a spoon full of conclusions."
WHEW. THAT WAS ALOT OF TYPING. Now you know how much I loved this Lol. Great job to all of you once again! |
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| 31 May 2014 09:50 PM |
| Thank you for your feedback minnie!! I remember you too! |
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| 31 May 2014 09:52 PM |
| Wish I had more time on my verse, but thanks anyway lol |
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Aetion
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| 31 May 2014 09:53 PM |
Sorry bout that Naruto LOL
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| 31 May 2014 10:03 PM |
Y O U A R E N O T R E A L M U S I C I A N S
♫ I'd chime in with a "Haven't you people ever heard of / Closing the god damn door?" ♫ |
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minniem
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| 31 May 2014 10:08 PM |
| When did Chanel get that good with schemes? |
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| 31 May 2014 10:10 PM |
| RIGHT I had no idea she was on that level.. #ThaGoddessPutMeInCHECK |
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ChanelG
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minniem
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| 31 May 2014 10:34 PM |
| Np Chanel, you destroyed Lion like Keke destroyed Golden. *Claps* |
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Aetion
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| 31 May 2014 10:37 PM |
Ty for the ratings guys. :D
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Aristios
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| 01 Jun 2014 09:38 AM |
| I wish these other ro rapper's would stop attacking lion just to get fame. There's beef and some of you are not included. |
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ChanelG
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| 01 Jun 2014 11:59 AM |
| omg and Bizz* There we go c: |
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Aetion
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Jeitoni
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| 01 Jun 2014 02:33 PM |
9.3/10
~Shøut øut tø tripple 6~ |
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Aetion
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