jjdp
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| 29 May 2014 05:42 PM |
4 hours of editing and a whole lotta popsicles later, I finished my video.
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lgz-F-bUfPY
Likes and opinions are souper appreciated here :3 |
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jjdp
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| 29 May 2014 05:46 PM |
| Remove the "m" in the link if you dont wanna see it on mobile. |
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routess
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| 29 May 2014 06:01 PM |
Funny.
Bloxy Video!: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ms3JPg_zMK4 |
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jjdp
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| 30 May 2014 03:21 PM |
You obviously watched a Bloxy entry, silly.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=lgz-F-bUfPY |
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law628
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| 30 May 2014 03:27 PM |
you're a great video maker ,but i simply dont like the stories and the voices... otherwise because of creation and editing I give you 6/10 points |
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jjdp
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| 30 May 2014 03:29 PM |
@law628
This is actually a recreation of a video I made last....October..?
Anyways, the voices are my interpretation on what noob's voices would sound like, and the plot is not that great.
But hey, it has "Turn down for what" in it, so that would make it an 11/10. Right?
http://youtube.com/watch?v=lgz-F-bUfPY |
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jjdp
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| 30 May 2014 05:05 PM |
*burp*
I, uh, mean bump
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgz-F-bUfPY |
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| 30 May 2014 05:19 PM |
We're not comrades at all, but you as a filmmaker is a good idea. I dislike your voices, personal opinion. They're squeaky and an average kind of voice people would use in videos I would think. Let's get in to the plot. Firstly, it was weak. It was only about a guy craving cheese and then the ending was basically just something better, which in your case was for potatoes. I'd like it if it had a point, whether it'd be comical or intense. Anything you want, but I found this better yet pointless. Here's where I come in, directing, angles. You could say I'm bad, but to me I think I make very good camera angles. Your angles were a little choppy, and at one point the camera went inside the guy's hat, it didn't look very smooth. Another angle I dislike was the one where the guy was dancing around the potatoes, it was blurry, but the was the effect you implemented, but I personally dislike it and I can think you can do better.
We may not be comrades, but I respect you for this video.
-Roby
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| 30 May 2014 05:27 PM |
roby please, you're the only negative person left on this forum. Just change for us. |
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| 30 May 2014 05:28 PM |
So you're not respecting my opinion?
I'm only critiquing his video.
call me roby |
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| 30 May 2014 05:28 PM |
holy crap
it's not a critique if you lower their self-esteem. |
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| 30 May 2014 05:31 PM |
All I'm saying is he could do better, stop making me guilty. He even stated he accepted opinions.
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| 30 May 2014 05:32 PM |
Please end this. I've been in enough flame wars on this forum, and now you're starting one for no reason.
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| 30 May 2014 05:32 PM |
Google: How to properly give a critique
Just do it. |
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| 30 May 2014 05:34 PM |
Google: How to properly respect someone's opinion.
I'm done, feel free to continue. I'm only stating we aren't comrades and I'm trying to be nice, giving my opinion of his BLOXY yet I'm wasting my time with certain people who make me feel guilty for my opinion.
Go away.
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| 30 May 2014 05:37 PM |
Your post was not nice at all. It's not an opinion if it's an insult. Read opinion up in a dictionary for crying out loud. I'm not going away. You don't own this forum. |
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| 30 May 2014 05:44 PM |
roby how many arguments do you need to get in to?
Buckle your pants, or they might fall down! |
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| 30 May 2014 05:52 PM |
What did I say that was not nice, Mister?
Toon, I don't even know what he thinks is insulting.
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| 30 May 2014 07:21 PM |
"I dislike your voices, personal opinion." "They're squeaky and an average kind of voice people would use in videos I would think." "Let's get in to the plot. Firstly, it was weak." "I'd like it if it had a point" "but I found this better yet pointless." "You could say I'm bad, but to me I think I make very good camera angles." "Another angle I dislike" "but I personally dislike it" "but I respect you for this video."
Google: How to give a proper critique Results:
"When giving a critique: "Respect: The writer has put a lot of themselves into writing their story, and it's personal to them. A critique may of necessity be heavy-handed, but it should never be mean. For better or worse, that writer sat his or her butt down in that chair and wrote an entire novel. Regardless of what you think of the end result, that accomplishment alone deserves respect."" |
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| 30 May 2014 07:23 PM |
I don't think Roby's rude.
He's just TOO honest. (which is negative)
>my opinion< |
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| 30 May 2014 07:29 PM |
Saying you hate something doesn't make people improve. Instead roby should be giving suggestions and ways to improve. |
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| 30 May 2014 07:33 PM |
Instead of causing an argument and insulting me, how about you be the bigger person and tell me what I'm doing wrong?
Maybe I critique wrongly, but you could've told me what.
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