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Ghost [super short story]

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MarkJarkson is not online. MarkJarkson
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27 May 2014 08:47 PM
I suppose it was like a flash. I didn't care, as the cars broke into two. I didn't care as the world slowly spun and I watched my grave fall into my hands. I didn't care as I thought of all the people that I killed. They were never dead. A perfect circle as fate met death, and what was left is red. An eye for a car, a life for humanity. It was all the same, wasn't it? I spoke softly to myself as the world collapsed and I fell to the ground, in a pool of blood.

Humanity. A strange thing. You try to preserve it, but in the end, it just kills you. People have tried war. People have tried peace. People have tried disease, people have tried murder, and people have tried grain. It doesn't matter when you vision a smoky world in which your restless because you screwed up. Once. It didn't have to be a lot to send it down, I just sat and stared and wondered if I cared. I felt like gravestones and coffins were too good, too luxurious. I felt I died a soldier's wish, if I felt peace, I did die a soldier's wish. But here I am, crying about six shots in a dead man's drink and the fact that seven people didn't leave. It was all the same. I didn't care.

But now when you stab and only draw bile, what else can you do to a woman who has no soul? You can't ship her to war, because it's improper. You can't send her as a diplomat, because all she knows it war. You can't throw her in an infirmary, because she can't be treated. You can't murder her, it's physically impossible. You can't feed her bread, because she's bought a cake. You cannot tame me, I've become a voice with six bullets in a bar and nobody cares anymore because it's humanity.

It's what your supposed to do.

But people still reason and say it's a terrible tragedy. I feel so sorry for Mr. Bob Hallis because he died, even though he cheated on his wife and sold his child out for an extra buck. I feel sorry for Benny because he died, even though he bought a company and starved twelve people to death. I feel sorry for George because he died, even though he murdered his mother in Portugal. I feel sorry for Alice because she died, even though she sold drugs and sent a small country to a world of pain in the sake of money. I feel sorry for Harrison because he died, even though he hired seventeen child slaves and never fed them the slice of bread they offered me. I feel sorry for Fergus, even if he whipped prisoners and sent innocent women to jail. I feel sorry for the bartender, even if he got caught in the crossfire.

That's what they all say, with the exemption of the even of part. Newspapers are glorious. They were martyrs, a waking call to liberals. They were a sign for conservatives. The fact that six bullets rocked a nation and sent a war for Russia and brought England to her knees. It's no matter.

But now, they brought me to my knees by killing. I'm in a pool of blood, and I can't even manage to not care. It's simply not fair. Metal killed six people, and it was justified. Metal killed one person, but perhaps the most important person in life, and it was so unjustified.

You'll never see the article about how he was a great matyr. No. You'd see it on the six o'clock news saying sorry for the road traffic. You'd see it was an example for control over cars. You'd see it as a help to kill a murderer. They all do.

I've killed seven, and seen eight die. They were alive in my head. Perhaps ghosts if you will. I rather like that, in my pool of blood, crying because I can't figure what else to do.

Ghosts.
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MarkJarkson is not online. MarkJarkson
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27 May 2014 09:01 PM
enjoy comedy

also reviews would be lovely. nobody ever does that anymore.
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MarkJarkson is not online. MarkJarkson
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27 May 2014 10:13 PM
here you go, story 1#
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MuteFox is not online. MuteFox
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27 May 2014 10:14 PM
Wartime Funtime was 15x more r3tarded than this

and that was my story lol
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CreativeAltAlt is not online. CreativeAltAlt
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27 May 2014 10:18 PM
Stopped reading after ghosts.

You know I am 'fraid of those. :(
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Brickguy58 is not online. Brickguy58
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27 May 2014 10:18 PM
Wait,so the main character killed 6,but only 5 of those killed were remembered as heroes and made a difference in the world due to their death even though they committed acts of evil while the one innocent man wasn't mentioned at all? My simple mind has a hard time finding out the meaning behind this.
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MarkJarkson is not online. MarkJarkson
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27 May 2014 10:20 PM
I only miscount once, but I don't think I ever said five. She killed seven, witnessed eight died. The real point of the story was to show how sick the world is in a confusing message.
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Brickguy58 is not online. Brickguy58
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27 May 2014 11:01 PM
Ah.I was only thinking about those killed by the revolver,sorry.
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