iSython
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| 27 May 2014 06:31 AM |
I recently made a comic about Roblox and stuff, but I need to finish the beginning part for my college assignment. I need to finish the other 2 ideas just for show. This is what I have so far.
Idea 1 - Murder Mystery/ Story
(I’m thinking of changing this to a Pirate Adventure story using a game in Roblox to Galleons and make it look interesting, still deciding.) The Grandson of Sherlock Holmes is studying at college when he discovers a little mystery and wants to find out the truth behind it. I don’t have more details towards this yet, but when I do I’ll carry on. Main Character- George Holmes? Side Kick- Clue- Reason/Bad Guy-
Idea 2 - Superhero/ Story
Lol maybe I can call it “The Legend of Batblox” I suppose it’s going to have to be a classic superhero story. A made up hero with a special power and a villain who the hero has to stop. Maybe a plot twist where the hero is the bad guy while the villain is the good guy doing bad things to get rid of the bad hero? A possible villain commits a crime and most of the story is in the courthouse? I could make it like a courtcase seen in Arrow or Game of Thrones? Even though this doesn’t sound original. Why not a batman superhero story. I can dress up as a batman on Roblox, so it shouldn't be that hard. I’ll think about this one. Hero- Power- Villain- Something original is always nice.
Can anyone help me finish these ideas to make my life so much easier? Try and write detailed. |
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Camellias
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6sc
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| 27 May 2014 06:34 AM |
The legend of batblox sounds awesome! anyway Hero-Blocky The Block Power-Blocksplosion, turns everything into blocks Villain-Dynamic Lighting, wants to make the world light? ;) Best i could think of tbf |
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iSython
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| 27 May 2014 06:46 AM |
I need lots of details. Paragraphs would be nice. |
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Frantuary
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| 27 May 2014 06:51 AM |
| does it look likei want to write a paragraph |
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iSython
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SN1P3R3D
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| 27 May 2014 07:14 AM |
Hero: Builderman
Make him fight this really strong guy named LuaScripts. LuaScripts kills Builderman's best friend, Blockers. Builderman then rages and becomes the legendary super builder
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iSython
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| 27 May 2014 07:24 AM |
The tale how builderman came a legend. Hmmm
Carry on |
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iSython
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PNDB
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| 27 May 2014 09:14 AM |
| green is not a creative colour |
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iSython
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| 27 May 2014 10:13 AM |
I'd give ideas, but what I come up with is just a wee bit too dark for the likes of ROBLOX.
-Common Sense: Use it. |
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iSython
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| 27 May 2014 10:21 AM |
| Any ideas help espicaly detailed one |
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iSython
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jac16king
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| 27 May 2014 12:32 PM |
Hero- Jim David ( He's secretly a cat) Power- Everything he touch become giant cupcakes Villain-Sorcus, he hate cupcakes. So he made a giant banana to stop Jim David...
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jac16king
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| 27 May 2014 12:35 PM |
Ugh, he's some details!
Jim David got his power from a cupcake stand. And he started to make everyone happy by making cupcakes! But Sorcus, he dislike cupcake and wanted to kill Jim David.
Jim David life start to go down, he made his parents into cupcakes, his siblings, and pretty much 20% of the human population. But he figured out how to control it!
Sorcus made a giant banana that can kill Jim David because banana always kill cupcake superheros, everyone know that!
And what will happen? THAT YOUR JOB! |
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iSython
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| 27 May 2014 12:46 PM |
-_-
I am not using that trollish idea. |
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jac16king
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| 27 May 2014 12:54 PM |
Not really a trollish idea, I put some thoughts into it. More of a comedy idea, but how about this.
George Holmes is relaxing in his college dome with his friend and grandson of Dr.Watson, James Watson. James Watson is studying to be a doctor like his father footstep. When George Holmes graduate he said to James Watson do you want to be my sidekick? He gladly said yes.
Months and months had pass, closer and closer to gradation. George Holmes had woke up and heard a terrifying scream. It was coming from next door. He woke up James and went to the next door dome.
What they saw was a died teenage name Tina Cabral. George Holmes was surprisingly happy, now he to use his skills to the test! He searched around the room and found a phone number and word that said: Call this number at 5:00 PM.
Is this better?!?!?! |
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jac16king
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| 27 May 2014 12:55 PM |
| Sorry if I made mistake, but James Watson is the grandson of Dr.Watson, wanted to make sure I was clear. |
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jac16king
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| 27 May 2014 12:56 PM |
| Gosh, rereading this I made such silly mistake. She was DEAD not died... |
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iSython
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| 27 May 2014 01:01 PM |
Much better. Reply to your pm.
Anyone else for idea 2 would be nice. |
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iSython
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| 27 May 2014 04:07 PM |
The mystery one is done.
Now I need the next one. |
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iSython
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