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| 26 May 2014 02:33 AM |
I'm making this longer
In 1968 Cave Johnson formed Aperture Laboratories that prvided the Supplies for the U.S military. He also co tracted a disease from space rocks that he had. during his last days, He formed Aperture Science and made stuff like the long fall boot and the Portal gun. Then he made GLaDOS (Generic Lifeform and Disk Operating System) but before it was completed he went on to well...... Death. So Caroline, His assistant got uploaded to GLaDOS instead. They put morality cores on her so that she wouldn't flood the enrichment centre with Neurotoxin.
Unfortunately it didn't work. Now GLaDOS has Aperture test chambers made for her own pleasure. A few years later, After she had killed all test subjects but Chell, she woke her up and told her she is trapped in Aperture Science and must be rested on and fight for freedom and survival.
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No Trolling, Flaming or Bullying of any kind in tuis roleplay Stay on the topic First person to join Becomes Chell 2nd person becomes Atlas and 3rd becomes P-body If you were later you have to be either Doug Rattman or a turret. I control GLaDOS My word is law No sorcery of any kind Doge is not allowed Wait until you are accepted No godmodding You must follow these rules I am discussing with you now Put "Making Science" in others if you read the rules Be realistic when posting No Troll CS or they will get you kicked
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Name: Age(No need for robots): Gender(No need for robots): Humanoid or Android: Test subject number(Example: 4381): Personality: Morality: Appearance: Bio: Others:
(If I made any mistake I'm sorry I don't play Portal that often.)
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| 26 May 2014 02:51 AM |
| Don't bump until it leaves the first page. |
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| 26 May 2014 09:28 AM |
0 starting
-1 poor plot. -2 idiotic rules. -1 stupid CS with lots of useless stuff. -1 makes a RP about a game that he barely plays. -1 reposting same RP over and over again, without asking for help or anything
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| 26 May 2014 09:50 AM |
| @Teh Alright so now I will repost a 3rd duplicate with your advice. I will fix everything. Plus, I play Portal in my spare time. |
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| 26 May 2014 06:12 PM |
8 bumps on the first page. I get the feeling not many people want to join. |
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| 26 May 2014 06:15 PM |
Name: Aaron Age(No need for robots): 28 Gender(No need for robots): Male Humanoid or Android: Humanoid Test subject number(Example: 4381): 2846 Personality: Undefined/defined through RP Morality: Neutral Appearance: Tall, black hair, blue eyes, medium build, aperature test subject uniform. Bio: Criminal, death sentence, like most aperature science test subjects. Others: Making Science |
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| 26 May 2014 06:17 PM |
| Please put your negative comments in the negative comments section wait we don't have a negative comment section so just stick it up your Butt until you find a trash can. |
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| 26 May 2014 06:23 PM |
Wait, were you talking to me? I wasn't trying to be a jerk. But if you have to bump 8 times before the 2nd page, something's wrong.
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| 26 May 2014 06:27 PM |
| Accepted... We wait for one more person to join. |
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| 26 May 2014 08:11 PM |
| If you haven't started yet, this is not going to take off. |
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| 26 May 2014 08:21 PM |
If you won't take criticism, you won't improve, and you're roleplay will remain sucky. Personal, I see this failing because their probably won't be puzzles. And let's be honest here, PORTAL IS A PUZZLE GAME. Can you morons get this through your head? It is popular, because of its writing and PUZZLES. I have NEVER seen a damn portal roleplay incorporate PUZZLES. It could work, but you squirrels are too lazy, too insecure to think of any. |
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| 26 May 2014 10:29 PM |
| The reason I don't take it is because everyone here does destructive crticism which I'm not willing to accept. |
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| 26 May 2014 10:32 PM |
for god sake, if people aren't joining your RPs, then draw that line where you *stop* and not go on.
Babalon balt chiso faboan ilsi! |
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| 26 May 2014 10:39 PM |
| While Portal is a good game (what am I saying? It's one of the best games), I don't see how it will work as an RP. Hwen said it before, but Portal is a puzzle game. While there are many puzzle RPs, I don't see how Portal's more visualizing puzzles will work in a text-based RP. |
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| 26 May 2014 10:51 PM |
"...which I'm not willing to accept."
Then don't bother posting RPs because nobody cares. If you aren't willing to accept help, even when some people are rude, then do not bother posting. |
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