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Re: ==|== Universe of Pirates ==|==

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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
Joined: 25 Dec 2010
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24 May 2014 10:27 AM
Universe of Pirates is set in the year 2197, where space travel and planet colonization is possible. However, in the wake of this new technology, gangs of intergalactic criminals have joined together, forming four major clans. The Krakens, The Uprising, The Scorpion's Tail, and Monarchy.

The Krakens believe in survival of the fittest, and only allow the fittest and the best to even go in their airspace. Anyone who they don't think is worthy to live is killed. The Krakens reside in the Northern area of the known universe.

The Uprising don't hurt normal citizens, however they go after the police of the universe, The Keepers. They believe that the Keepers are corrupt, and should be destroyed. The Uprising resides near the Krakens, in the North-Eastern area of the known universe. They are probably the least strict of the four gangs, the Monarchy most likely being the first. They will allow people onto their airspace as long as they're only citizens or trade ships, but to get on their planet, you must be trusted by them.

The Scorpion's Tail believes in control, along with the Monarchy. They fight each other to take control of areas that the Keepers control the least. The Scorpion's Tail could care less about citizens, but if they intervene in any of their fights of business, they assume them as an enemy and kill them on sight. They are very strict about their airspace, however they will give multiple warnings to the driver of the ship before they shoot them down. Anyone who tries to land on their planet will be given one warning before being fired upon. They reside in the Southern universe.

The Monarchy is probably the worst of all the gangs. They kill anything and everything that want to, especially Outlanders, Scorpion's Tail members, and Keepers. They want full control of the universe; to rule it with an iron fist. They will shoot anyone even near their airspace down and will torture anyone they want to. Because they can. They reside in the Eastern universe.


The Outlanders are a group of people who aren't Keepers, but try to help them maintain a balance. They are much less equipped and much less trained than Keepers, but they can help out a good bit. The Keepers don't mind them helping, as long as they don't agitate the gangs. The Outlanders are with the Keepers in the Center universe.



If you have any questions about ships or anything misc. like that, I will answer them.

There are two main alien races. The Ghuhg, and the Syntar, pronounced Sintor.

The Ghuhg are a race of human-like beings. The main difference is that they have antenna, and their skin colors range from White to Green, not White to Black, like normal humans. The Ghuhg use their antenna to contact other Ghuhgian and use telekinesis to speak. Their tech is almost level with humans, a little more advanced. They are very peaceful, and only attack if attacked. Ghughian can live to be around 200, and don't physically age past the age of 60.

The Syntar are a race of nine to eleven foot tall, slim humanoids with skin colors throughout the spectrum. These aliens have two fingers on each hand, with three hands. One coming out of the head, and two in the usual spots. These aliens have no eyes, and instead have a long tongue that comes out of it's mouth and falls nearly to their feet. They feel around with their tongue. They are a new, however big race. They are in their primal stage, but advance quickly. Not much is known of their activity and if they attack humans or not. No one knows how long they live (you guys can decide this if you're Syntarian, I added this for climatic effect).

If you wish to make an alien race of your creation please provide a brief back-story for your race and a description of them. Their home planet is not needed, but can help a lot.

Copy-paste this next section if you wish to create a character. Please, keep tabs
on your characters and try to remain as active as possible. I need to approve your characters before you start using them.

||CHARACTER SHEET||

Name:

Race:

Faction: (Citizen, Trader, Lone Criminal, any of the gangs. If you wish to be in the gangs, only humans are allowed in the gangs, besides the Uprising and the Outlanders. You can
be Ghuhgan)

Age:

Brief Back-Story:

Special Traits: (Weapons Skill, Technological Expert, etc.)

Alignment: (Chaotic, Neutral, Peaceful) (This doesn't decide your faction, this decides the base of how your character acts. You can be a Keeper, but love destruction, etc.)

Ship Name: (Optional)

Planet of Home:








I will play various NPCs if need be, unless you wish to do that yourself. I have my own character, a human, named Drake Ling. I'd like to keep his stuff a secret, so beware for the Drake-ster. I'm leaving the planets and stuff for you to decide, but please be reasonable with it. You can play big characters if the back-story makes sense. Good luck to you role-players!
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lagio5 is not online. lagio5
Joined: 13 Mar 2010
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24 May 2014 10:28 AM
Wow. You are one of the only beginners that have not made an absolute shet RP. I applaud you.
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TheFearedDarkrai is not online. TheFearedDarkrai
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24 May 2014 10:31 AM
I hope you're here to stay, dun. We're running out of ideas in this forum and newcomers like you can be useful. Other newcomers, as lagio hinted at, make donkey crap-tier RPs.
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
Joined: 25 Dec 2010
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24 May 2014 12:26 PM
Thanks, guys. Worry not, I shall stay. Occasionally, I might be inactive, but for short periods. I came up with the idea on the fly. I'm a writer, so I try to come up with ideas that can have depth and/or have it already. I honestly thought I could've explained things more.

Again, thanks you two for showing me that the idea wasn't complete crap.
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LNG257 is not online. LNG257
Joined: 13 Jun 2012
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24 May 2014 01:24 PM
*amazement*

WHO ARE YOU AN ALT OF?!

Kiddin, zis be amazun.
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
Joined: 25 Dec 2010
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24 May 2014 01:37 PM
Thanks! I'm open to criticisms, because if the idea is good, I might write it into a story.
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Wonderfulandu2001 is not online. Wonderfulandu2001
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24 May 2014 02:40 PM
"The northern area of the known universe"

ULTIMATE FACEDESK 3 MILLION.

In space, there isn't really up, down, left, right, There aren't compass directions, too, because every planetary body, celestial body, you name it, has its own magnetic field. The known universe doesn't have a magnetic field "constant", thus making it impossible to judge which portion of the *known* universe is northern, upper, lower, you get the point.

The nerd in me says...

"SHAMERFUR DISPLAY!!"

The normal person in me says...

"Forgivable, but annoying."
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Wonderfulandu2001 is not online. Wonderfulandu2001
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24 May 2014 02:43 PM
This seems interesting for what it is though.
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
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24 May 2014 02:44 PM
Sorry about that, didn't know. I'll find an alternative way of explaining it, doing something currently.
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Wonderfulandu2001 is not online. Wonderfulandu2001
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24 May 2014 03:19 PM
Okay, that's fine.
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
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24 May 2014 03:41 PM
Okay, I can't edit the post, so the Northern part is now known as the Sector, Eastern is the Everest Sector, Southern is the Fuji Sector, Western is the Kilimanjaro Section, Center is the Makalu Sector.
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
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24 May 2014 03:42 PM
Oops, message broke. Should've been Northern is the Monmouth Sector.
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LNG257 is not online. LNG257
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24 May 2014 04:21 PM
By the way, who controls the Western area?

Seems like the wild area.
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
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24 May 2014 05:19 PM
The Authority has at least semi-control in any areas not occupied by gangs. And, the Western area is no longer the Western area. Refer to my last post.
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
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25 May 2014 09:31 AM
By the way, the Syntar communicate in tonal growls. If you are unsure of what tonal means, it means that the tone of the growl changes the meaning. The meaning is decided by the length of the growl, how high the growl is, and the tone. the Ghuhgan can send thoughts via telekinesis. They can use words, but mostly they just send thoughts or images. They can speak, although they only do this when in speaking range of a fellow Ghuhgan. They talk in what humans call Ghuhginese, but in their tongue, it is Ghuhgjak. The language sounds like a mix of how the Vortigaunts talk in the Half-Life franchise and English. If taught to, Ghuhgans can easily learn English.
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InfiniteEnding is not online. InfiniteEnding
Joined: 26 Oct 2013
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25 May 2014 10:44 AM
hobobobogohohoho ths rolpley sux donkey a-- *gets shot*

looks at post count

looks at rp

looks at post count

looks at rp

oh

my

effing

god
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
Joined: 25 Dec 2010
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25 May 2014 10:57 AM
Whatever message you tried to get through didn't come through.
Please, elaborate.
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lagio5 is not online. lagio5
Joined: 13 Mar 2010
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25 May 2014 12:03 PM
He's extremely impressed with your quality of writing despite your nonexistent experience on the forums.
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Dundun47 is not online. Dundun47
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25 May 2014 12:36 PM
Oh.















:)







Thank you!
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