reddanger
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| 22 May 2014 04:07 PM |
i'm writing a book and at first i wanted to make it a much more explicit story about a magic world
except i had the idea of having two communities: one magic, one technology
i thought of the magic community being open and accepting, with flaws of being very dangerous and kind of stupid at times in how they run everything
then i thought of the technology community being much safer, because they have technology to block out criminals or track them down, but they want to control people, like you can't be yourself or you'll get kicked out of places or even the community
does this make sense to you guys?
or no? because i don't want my book to end up super confusing ;-;
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| 22 May 2014 04:09 PM |
| yeah but it needs more story |
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reddanger
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| 22 May 2014 04:11 PM |
"more story"
it has plenty of story
i just didn't include that in my post
why do you want to know what the story is about? |
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