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Re: does my book sound like it makes sense

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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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22 May 2014 04:07 PM
i'm writing a book and at first i wanted to make it a much more explicit story about a magic world

except i had the idea of having two communities: one magic, one technology

i thought of the magic community being open and accepting, with flaws of being very dangerous and kind of stupid at times in how they run everything

then i thought of the technology community being much safer, because they have technology to block out criminals or track them down, but they want to control people, like you can't be yourself or you'll get kicked out of places or even the community

does this make sense to you guys?

or no? because i don't want my book to end up super confusing ;-;

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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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22 May 2014 04:09 PM
meep
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zachzach74 is not online. zachzach74
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22 May 2014 04:09 PM
yeah but it needs more story
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CrabbyNoob2 is not online. CrabbyNoob2
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22 May 2014 04:10 PM
it makes sense
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reddanger is not online. reddanger
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22 May 2014 04:11 PM
"more story"

it has plenty of story

i just didn't include that in my post

why do you want to know what the story is about?
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zachzach74 is not online. zachzach74
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22 May 2014 04:12 PM
ok sure
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