kekeswag
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| 11 May 2014 07:53 PM |
Chorus- Indiella -------- The Great Gatsby, The Great Gatsby All I want to do is pass life with only being me Instead of trying to follow every new thing I see Reaching out for the green light of hope, Mr. Gatsby
Verse 1- Allayn/Kekeswag --------- Walls caving in, monsters creeping from out of the closet Pitch black, no noise except for the leaking faucet Look out the window people fighting and rats crawling Sliding the window open, and start imagining me falling Parent's logic making me want to slit my wrist If you didn't have the money or time for me, why'd you have kids Yell at me more and tell me about the life I need to live Ill never be understood, my problems are "no bigs" Anything I say isnt important, youre always right Im just a dumb [A] teen who loves getting into fights Who cant ever be positive, but negatives are in sight They sent me in a dark cave without a [F]ing flash light Telling me I can find my way out, all i gotta do is try Now they're ranting and yelling saying "this is your life" And I just bumped into a rock that felt like a knife While im bleeding to death i hear them yelling "you better not cry" All I get told is you're not trying, your good is never good enough You gotta let your feelings out stop tryna always act tough Well maybe if i had someone i could talk to my gaurd would be down I wouldnt walk around, with nothing but a [F]ing frown And ill feel better about myself and feel as if my parents love me Instead of talking to me down and always being above me Try and talk about my day or even just hug me Maybe thats why my attitude is always so ugly But hey, who cares now, they already gave up Live on my own and prove to them that my life is worth a [F] Trying to be better but im slipping up on luck Going nuts, going to school proving im not what they say Wish i could bang like Kurt all the pain away
Chorus- Indiella -------- The Great Gatsby, The Great Gatsby All I want to do is pass life with only being me Instead of trying to follow every new thing I see Reaching out for the green light of hope, Mr. Gatsby
Verse 2- Allayn/KekeSwag --------- Rainy days are best, only time I go outside The rain covers up my eyes so its a safe place to cry Hookah smells and late nights are covered up by lies At this point the rest of my life will be flipping burgers and fries "Give me a paper and a pen So I can write about my life of sin" Hopeless life trends but soon we'll all give in Petty back stabs and lies from people we call friends Skipping rope, the world is double dutch Until we are paid secrets and threatened to hush But it leaves our mouths like the newly chewed piece of gum Piecing pieces to the gun until the peace runs And brainwashed to think that this stuff is fun But when the trust is done You used the hurt and pain and transferred it to your lungs Full of coverups hiding society with make up Doesnt matter what time you went to bed, at 6 am wake up And memorize this false education We will give you the same test even though you are all different, false administration False dedication, we all want different futures The school treats us the same so we sit in front of computers And have the life we wished we lived No responsibility to fit in
Verse 3-Indiella --------- Myself is the only real thing I can be I control my movements, sailing life like a see Sailing life with no worries I overcome all the waves Dark past make thunderstorms while real friends make brighter days Well what can I say? move all the pain away We will no longer be afraid our hearts will fill with being brave
Chorus- Indiella -------- The Great Gatsby, The Great Gatsby All I want to do is pass life with only being me Instead of trying to follow every new thing I see Reaching out for the green light of hope, Mr. Gatsby {2x}
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ChanelG
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| 11 May 2014 08:12 PM |
| Always with the nice metaphors. |
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Indiella
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| 12 May 2014 09:40 AM |
| Ikr, keke's great with the metaphors. |
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| 17 May 2014 08:31 PM |
| 10/10 amazing flow and lyrics |
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| 18 May 2014 09:04 AM |
>10/10 amazing flow and lyrics
This needs to be addressed. Do half you know what flow is? You can't judge a flow if you can't hear it. What are you giving yourself props because of how you flowed it? |
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Indiella
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| 18 May 2014 11:42 AM |
> This needs to be addressed. Do half you know what flow is? You can't judge a flow if you can't hear it. What are you giving yourself props because of how you flowed it?
You make up the rhythm and flow in your head, so that's why it seems good to him. |
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| 18 May 2014 12:50 PM |
| So like i said, he's literally giving props to himself. |
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| 18 May 2014 01:53 PM |
The Great Gatsby Rerelease: Sparta School - The Great Gatsby (Calvin Jervis Edit) |
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| 18 May 2014 02:03 PM |
| I can't believe DrillBoy actually makes all of this up and consistently uses the same names at times. |
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| 18 May 2014 07:45 PM |
| I'm better than Tupac but not better than Wayne |
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shonyshon
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| 18 May 2014 07:48 PM |
| keke i heard you bad irl tryna fwm or nah |
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gogobot22
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| 18 May 2014 08:03 PM |
Didn't really feel like commenting every line.
4/10 The great gatsby thing is pretty much a gimmick. Rhymes fairly well, but sometimes, not so much. Grammatical errors. Some lines are dumb teenager whinings.
OT's Official Nice Guy (#CF) |
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| 20 May 2014 06:53 PM |
| Can you show me the errors so I can improve? |
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Icyclez
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| 21 May 2014 04:38 PM |
10/10
Indiella's verse is great but Allayn's just... WOW.
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| 22 May 2014 08:59 PM |
| Wth the first Verse isn't even relative to great gatsby |
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| 29 May 2014 07:23 PM |
| None of them are... The Great Gatsby theme is acting as a metaphor through the chorus.. Why would I write a whole song on Gatsby. |
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altar30
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