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| 17 May 2014 06:48 AM |
So maybe...
Your hot on the trail of a Murder Suspect. You reach their house and go inside, when you realize the suspect is already dead. One by one, everybody goes.
The killer arrives at night. |
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timpookie
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| 17 May 2014 06:49 AM |
So-so idea, depending on how well you can pull it off.
The Bannanachair King Lives Again! |
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static321
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| 17 May 2014 07:29 AM |
| so maybe... you should add more of a plot.. |
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| 17 May 2014 07:30 AM |
| The plot could be uncovered through the story, like a puzzle of sorts. |
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