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Re: Broken World to a Golden World -RADIX RECORDS-

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TheRealKingHudson is not online. TheRealKingHudson
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16 May 2014 03:08 PM
{Chorus}
This is my World
Do Anything and Everything for it
This is my town
Got my head up in the clouds yo I'm soarin
{Verse 1}
All you youngins sittin' at home watching T.V
Sayin' what ever comes off the top of your dome
And I'm here sittin on this gold
But all my life I've been told
"You can't make it" But look who's living life on the open road
Drivin a bugatti pickin up a hotty
And yea I can be a little dotty
But I got people who love and support me no matter what I am
But you gotta work for the oppotunity and not wait to be told.
{Verse 2}
I dream at night thinkin' of how much more love I'd get if I was bigger
My rhymes are dope and tight like a rope
But they aren't the filler like a healthy lunch and dinner
It's hard to get to the tippy top but once you get there your chances of going down grow thicker.
{Verse 3}
When I was a kid all I did was everything I put my mind to
and it gave me this chance so here goes nothin'
Some of you fake rappers think I'm bluffin'
But I ain't and I finally arrived
and achieved what I've always strived
and that's greatness.
{Ending Chorus}
This is our World
Do Anything and Everything for it
This is our town
We got our heads up in the clouds yo we're soarin'.
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XxLionblazexX is not online. XxLionblazexX
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16 May 2014 03:25 PM
Swag
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TheRealKingHudson is not online. TheRealKingHudson
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16 May 2014 05:19 PM
Thanks c:
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CanadianSwagg01 is not online. CanadianSwagg01
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16 May 2014 06:27 PM
Dope 8/10
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ITSONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX is not online. ITSONICTHEHEDGEHOGXX
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16 May 2014 06:37 PM
you literally split the length of one verse into three
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LilBobbyPorter is not online. LilBobbyPorter
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16 May 2014 07:13 PM
7/10
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TheRealKingHudson is not online. TheRealKingHudson
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17 May 2014 10:02 AM
Thanks for the first feedback everyone.. let's keep this goin!
Also If I need to work on anything just tell me since this is my first time.
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17 May 2014 10:06 AM
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