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| 16 May 2014 03:08 PM |
{Chorus} This is my World Do Anything and Everything for it This is my town Got my head up in the clouds yo I'm soarin {Verse 1} All you youngins sittin' at home watching T.V Sayin' what ever comes off the top of your dome And I'm here sittin on this gold But all my life I've been told "You can't make it" But look who's living life on the open road Drivin a bugatti pickin up a hotty And yea I can be a little dotty But I got people who love and support me no matter what I am But you gotta work for the oppotunity and not wait to be told. {Verse 2} I dream at night thinkin' of how much more love I'd get if I was bigger My rhymes are dope and tight like a rope But they aren't the filler like a healthy lunch and dinner It's hard to get to the tippy top but once you get there your chances of going down grow thicker. {Verse 3} When I was a kid all I did was everything I put my mind to and it gave me this chance so here goes nothin' Some of you fake rappers think I'm bluffin' But I ain't and I finally arrived and achieved what I've always strived and that's greatness. {Ending Chorus} This is our World Do Anything and Everything for it This is our town We got our heads up in the clouds yo we're soarin'.
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| 16 May 2014 06:37 PM |
| you literally split the length of one verse into three |
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| 17 May 2014 10:02 AM |
Thanks for the first feedback everyone.. let's keep this goin! Also If I need to work on anything just tell me since this is my first time. |
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