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| 14 May 2014 11:36 AM |
~this didn't really happen ~
so tiwe was tolkien on le phone with le mum but then suddenly br0b come to him an say "tiwe dood pls safe me fr0m mods dey tryin 2 kell meh"
tiwe is too busy so he say "dood go ask otsorcus or danipie2" so br0b go to otsorcus an say "dood help me safe fr0m mods"
so otsorcus say "dood go to 67thave" so br0b went to 67thave an say "dood help me safe fr0m mods"
so 67thave told him "we go fite m0ds if u pay us robux" so br0b saved some robux and paid to 67thave
so 67thave and malchizedek went to BritainsGotTalentA51 and BritainsGotTalentA51 sold them swords for the money they got fr0m br0b
so so so they go look for mods and suddenly a chocolategorilla attacks them they prepare to attack but then suddenly slingshotjunkie appears and throws kosimi at malchizedek
it's super effective, kosimi runs away and slingshotjunkie disappears, malchizedek gets up and sees the chocolategorilla attacking 67thave so he raises his sword and shouts "ash nazg krimpatuluk!!"
the chocolategorilla runs away and they keep looking for the mods they see a big tower far away, they move towards it and in the way they meet a red haired anime girl with huge pink and black wings
they think it's sonrick98 in disguise so they come closer they see it's not moving, they wait for a while, it's not moving now they're sure it's sonrick98, they decide to attack but their weapons move through the anime girl as if she were a ghost - she's immune to attacks.
she smiles and laughs, malchizedek and 67thave are now spooked. they
to be continued |
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| 14 May 2014 11:37 AM |
i'm just going to pretend i read this story
because
i am not going to read this story
who writes like that
who does that |
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| 14 May 2014 11:40 AM |
| Then I get a super laser and turn you all into grease spots! |
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| 14 May 2014 04:40 PM |
@chocolategorilla
lol you wish
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she smiles and laughs, malchizedek and 67thave are now spooked. they turn back and try to run away, but they meet qdhxx and millsbuddy. They see a tiger with Mills, they are now even more scared and they try to run away from the side. The tiger chases them until it finally touches them, but they feel nothing. It's like a ghost too. It's harmless. So while they stand there and laugh at the tiger that can't do anything to them, MrPhelps is standing behind 67thave and cutting his hair with scissors. When 67thave turns around to see who it is, MrPhelps disappears. So they keep walking. It's becoming dark outside, so 67thave says to Malchizedek, "we should go to sleep now", Malchizedek agrees, so they hold hands and start skipping around like hippies. Until they see a depressed person. They ask that person why she's so depressed, she says IDTalk (MuffledSpeech) is bullying her. They ask her who IDTalk is, she says IDTalk is a wizard that lives in that tower. So they keep going to the tower, it's now dark outside. They stop in an abandoned city to sleep there for one night. They find a few candles, so they use their light. But something spooky happens when they look at their shadows. These shadows are fake! They're actually torivors. They start running in circles until Dzuheron walks into the room, then she tells them that torivors live here, they just don't see them very well so they thought the city was abandoned, and also because they don't light up their city with light because they don't need it. The next day, they get out of bed and keep moving towards the huge tower. When they finally get there, they meet another anime girl, her eyes are very big and blue and her hair is long and green. She starts slapping 67thave for no reason, and she keeps slapping him for a minute until Malchizedek notices someone staring at them from a distance. So they ignore the anime girl and come closer to the person, it's Sonrick98! And he's holding two tiny plastic anime girls, one in each hand. He's trying to create a fight scene between them in his mind. Suddenly the ghostly red haired anime girl that they have met in the first part of the story appears behind Sonrick98, and qdhxx comes with her. Sonrick98 tries to hug the girl, but ends up hugging himself because his arms moved through the ghostly anime girl. Malchizedek and 67thave laughed at Sonrick98's behavior. But jaykombat19 thought it's cute. He looked at them from above, from the top of the tower, smiling while eating rice with tuna (with shopstiks). Then RSCakeBomb came, he tried to look nice, but he was actually summoning skeletons everywhere Sonrick98 goes. He gave Sonrick98 a friendly handshake and said "Hello!", but suddenly a hole appeared in the ground, a skeleton quickly rose from the ground and hit Sonrick98 in the face. Sonrick98 cried a fountain of tears. Everyone who was there knew it doesn't look normal for a 15 year old boy like Sonrick98 to cry like that. They thought he must be possessed by someone. So they went to Kotawl the Wizard, who told them he wanted to see Sonrick98. So they took him to Sonrick98, after checking a few things, Kotawl was certain that Sonrick98 is possessed. And it is by Yokina Hato's mind, she does not have her own body yet so she took Sonrick98's body. So Kotawl went to Flexably's place and they both tried to create a body for Yokina Hato. Sonrick98 still couldn't stop crying a fountain of tears. The whole place was wet. So Flexably summoned Aisukingu, who froze Sonrick98's tears (and also made him obsess about Frozen for a short while).
Will be continued! |
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Dzuheron
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| 14 May 2014 04:40 PM |
>no oliver
story sucks 0/10 |
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| 14 May 2014 04:42 PM |
| (ok ok I'll add another part with you and oliver ( ^v^ ) |
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Dzuheron
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| 14 May 2014 04:50 PM |
and torivor len and yokina hato cause I said so |
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marxfan2
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| 14 May 2014 04:51 PM |
| gr8 story m8 i rate 8/8 add a girl in it that's named "k8", m8 |
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| 14 May 2014 05:09 PM |
When they woke up the next day, Kotawl and Flexably noticed something wrong. Yokina's body is not in it's place. It disappeared, they worried that mayb it's ghosts or someone stole it, but they were relieved to see Yokina in Sonrick98's bed, apparently she tried to get into her new body on her own and didn't succeed. So flexably woke Sonrick98 up, and gave him to faultydex. Faulydex was a great runner. He quickly took Sonrick98 and Yokina Hato to the 2nd floor of the tower, where DanBrowned the scientist had his cloning machine. It could clone but it could also do the opposite. So Yokina Hato's new body was put in one side, Sonrick98 in the other side of the big machine, the doors were closed, and for a few seconds there were weird flashy lights everywhere. Then the door was opened. Yokina Hato's first words were, "Hi, where am I?" but then Flexably told her, "you know this place, right? This is the 2nd floor of the tower you live in". but she didn't remember anything from her time in Sonrick98's body. Sonrick98 stopped crying a fountain of tears and became interested in sports. Suddenly a very loud noise was heard outside! The robloxians did not know exactly what it was, but they thought it was an explosion. The sound came from Dzuheron's torivor city, and they were worried about Dzuheron. But they didn't want to go themselves, because they were scared of torivors. They sent Illuminable the Light Wizard, because he always said he's immune to everything bad that can be caused by darkness. He went to the city and did not find anyone except a young light-haired boy. A bird sat on the young boy's shoulder. The boy had bandages on his eye. The first thing Illuminable did when he saw the boy was ask what happened to his eye. He did not reply to the question, instead he asked, "What do you want, why are you here?", Illuminable replied, "I'm looking for Dzuheron, do you know where she is?" The boy said, "Good luck with that" and walked away. The boy's weird behavior confused Illuminable, but he kept looking for Dzuheron. He couldn't find Dzuheron anywhere. Meanwhile, at the tower, floor 2: Sonrick98 plays chess with Yokina Hato. Suddenly Kagamine Rin walks into the room and stares at Yokina Hato and Sonrick98. She turns around and wants to go back, but before she makes a step, she hears Sonrick98 say her name. She turns around and sees Sonrick98 run in her direction. Suddenly Len appears and stops Sonrick98. He tells Sonrick98, "If you want a girl friend, try talking to that girl with the chess". They walk out of the tower. Then a torivor appears in front of Rin & Len, and tells them how bad their voices are. Rin is scared, Len is confused, they try to ignore the torivor but it follows them, "you can't sing", it says, "your voice is terrible". Then Illuminable sees the torivor and casts a light spell. The torivor's clothes can now be seen - It's Dzuheron. Dzuheron disappears and the confused Kagamines keep going. Illuminable returns to the tower and tells them Dzuheron is alive.
Will be continued... |
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| 14 May 2014 05:12 PM |
| (wow this thread dies so fast) |
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| 14 May 2014 05:41 PM |
| http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ON-7v4qnHP8 |
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Dzuheron
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| 14 May 2014 06:27 PM |
more story
but can you please include me as a good guy next page? |
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| 14 May 2014 06:29 PM |
| ok more coming soon let me write it... |
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| 14 May 2014 07:00 PM |
So 67thave and Malchizedek go to the 3rd floor of the tower, there they meet slingshotjunkie. They tell him to unban br0b. Slingshotjunkie says he deserves it. Malchizedek agrees with sling, but br0b paid them for this, so they keep telling sling to unban br0b anyways. Slingshotjunkie refuses to unban br0b, and presses a big red button on the wall. Water floods the room, slingshotjunkie disappears, it seems hopeless. They're both going to drown there. But suddenly they hear someone shout, "I declare war on Poseidon!"! It's TheEmperorOfTheOcean, and he had the magic sponge with him. Now the room is dry. Malchizedek and 67thave thank him for saving their lives with the magic sponge. TheEmperorOfTheOcean asks them what they're doing in this tower. They say, "we're here because br0b wanted us to unban him, but sling refused". TheEmperorOfTheOcean replies, "Why can't you fight for someone else? Better OTers got banned, like... idk". 67thave says, "he paid or our equipment, and he'll pay even more if we unban him". TheEmperorOfTheOcean says, "there is no time to talk, no time to waste, come with me, let's try to break this wooden door", and malchizedek says, "this wooden door is wooden". 67thave replies, "no, is iron door. sarcasm!!" TheEmperorOfTheOcean prepares to shoot a rocket at the door, but one second before he shoots the rocket from his tiny rocket launcher, a dwarf breaks the door with his axe and shouts, "Malchizedek!"!! But is too late. The rocket hits the dwarf. But the rocket passes through the dwarf, the dwarf is a ghost too, just like the red haired anime girl and the tiger. The dwarf disappears, and they keep going. They arrive at the 4th floor, and they meet millsbuddy. Mills says, "Hello 67thave, Malchizedek. Hello pirate guy", "I am millsbuddy, remember my tiger earlier?" Malchizedek says, "Is this what you call le tulpa?" Mills replies, "Yes, and it's spooky. Get spooked." Suddenly 20 men appear with their furry tulpas and their animals roar at Malchizedek. 67thave can't see them and is confused by Malchizedek's reaction to the words "get spooked". The ghostly tigers and lions come closer to malchizedek, and he thinks they're real. Malchizedek screams, the scream is heard on the 2nd floor. Sonrick98, Yokina Hato, Flexably, Illuminable and Kotawl come to see what happened, and they see Malchizedek and 67thave in a room surrounded by 20 men and millsbuddy. They don't see the tigers and lions, so they walk through them, and this confuses Malchizedek even more. Malchizedek is feeling dizzy and accidentally falls off the side of the tower. Fortunately, he lands into water. Unfortunately, he fell on the shark. Fortunately, the shark isn't real, it's shark doll. 67thave worries about his own life and doesn't check to see if Malchizedek survived, but he is sure that Malchizedek didn't survive. 67thave sheds a tear as illuminable lights the place with a light spell. The light spell reveals a torivor - Dzuheron was watching silently. Dzuheron disappears again. Yokina Hato is scared. She starts crying a fountain of tears. The 20 men can't concentrate because Yokina Hato's crying is too loud, and they attack with sticks. 5 men surround 67thave, 10 surround Sonrick and Yokina, and 5 jump out of the building into the water where Malchizedek fell. The situation seems hopeless now, that 67thave is surrounded by 5 minimods and Sonrick is by 10. But Illuminable the Light Wizard casts another light spell that blinds the minimods. 67thave pushes the men and gets out of their circle, and starts running to the 5th floor. Sonrick grabs Yokina's hand and everyone follows 67thave to the 5th floor. When the minimods start seeing again, they see a torivor that was revealed because of the light spell. One of the minimod whispers, "...Dzu... heron?" The torivor says, "Len." Then the OTers on the 5th floor hear one of them minimods scream.
Will be continued. |
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| 14 May 2014 07:04 PM |
| bump just to make sure u see dis |
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Dzuheron
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| 14 May 2014 07:12 PM |
I don't get the ending
pls explain it |
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| 14 May 2014 07:30 PM |
I don't want to explain anything, because what I like the most about a story or a drawing, or anything I create, is that it makes people think. ----------------------------------------- The 5th floor has tolkien drawings on it's walls, and words are written on the western wall. The words are: "ash nazg krimpatul". On the 5th floor they meet the red haired ghostly anime girl, and qdhxx. Malchizedek comes into the room, running away from someone. Here's here now. Malchizedek and 67thave are the only ones who know the anime girl is a tulpa, so they're sure qdhxx is evil too. Qdhxx locks the door and vocaloid music starts playing. Malchizedek and 67thave see the locked doors and are now sure that qdhxx is evil. They run and attack him, but the anime girl gets in the way and tries to stop them. She's ghostly, she can't stop it no matter how mush she tries. So qdhxx takes a step to the side, malchizedek misses qdhxx, and falls on the ground. Solman123 appears out of nowhere in the middle of the room and pushes 67thave. Now that both 67thave and Malchizedek are on the ground, qdhxx takes Malchizedek's sword, and solman123 takes 67thave's sword. Solman123 gives me the second sword, and I throw them out of the window, into the pool. Qdhxx says, "I locked the doors not because I want to hurt you, but because you were running away from someone." then qdhxx says, "you meanies tried to kill meh, but I forgives you". *Music in room changes to volbeat radio girl song* Qdhxx tells Malchizedek, "Play chess with me, or I'll kill you!" 67thave looks at Sonrick98, Illuminable, Kotawl and the crying Yokina Hato. The music calmed her down, she's not crying a fountain of tears anymore. 67thave tells them, "Why are you guys just looking!? Do something!!". He notices the Flexably is not there. Illuminable feels a hand on his right shoulder, and immediately turns around, takes a step backwards and casts a light spell. He points his wand where he expects a torivor to be. But instead he sees the young light haired boy with the wound on his left eye. Qdhxx says, "Oliver!" Qdhxx looks at the other side of the room, the light spell revealed another torivor, it's Dzuheron. "And Dzuheron too!", he says. "It's ok Malchizedek, I don't want to play chess anymore, I'll let you guys go now", qdhxx said. The doors were unlocked and opened, and they started climbing the stairs to the 6th floor of the tower. A moment before they enter the room, Flexably and TheEmperorOfTheOcean come down from the 6th floor to the 5th floor, and Flexably says, "Merely and Seranok are on the next floor. They are the mods' pets, be ready to fight them if you're going to the next floor." Flexably gives each OTer a weapon. But Yokina Hato gets a banana instead. Qdhxx laughs, "hau hau". |
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| 14 May 2014 07:54 PM |
They move to the 6th floor. Illuminable casts another light spell to look for hidden torivors while Yokina Hato eats her banana. Yokina sees Illuminable run towards her with his arms forward, she thinks he wants to hug her like Sonrick does, so she tries to escape somehow. Then she sees that half of her banana was cut off. She doesn't understand what's going on and starts crying a fountain of tears. The real reason why Illuminable ran towards Yokina is because songofswords was behind Yokina. Songofswords disappeared, and stole half of the banana. Merely and Seranok were watching quietly all this time. Now Sernaok speaks: "Welcome to this tower, peasants." Merely continues: "We used to work for roblox. We had moderator powers", "And you OTers want to unban br0b?" Seranok says, "Flame wars are against the rules". Merely says: "But there is no rule against physically attacking a user in this paracosm". "You attack first," says Seranok. Illuminable feels like something is suspicious about Seranok. He casts a light spell to look for hidden things in the room, but Merely misunderstands and runs to attack Illuminable. Illuminable blinds Merely and takes a step to the side. Merely hits the wall with great power and the wall breaks. Merely falls off. Seranok is busy swordfighting against 67thave, but when he sees that Merely fell off, he jumps after him to try to save him. Yokina cries a fountain of tears and says, "I want to go home!!!", but Flexably tells her, "You have no home." Malchizedek says, "This was an easy fight!" Sonrick98 agrees. They start climbing the stairs to the 7th floor, but the walls start moving. They start to run down to lower floors, but the door to the 5th floor is locked. They run to the 7th floor's door, but it's locked too. Rocks are falling from the ceiling, there is no way to escape now. The OTers hear someone scream: "HOT!!!"
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| 14 May 2014 08:24 PM |
sir are you crazy because this makes less sense than my inner mind |
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| 14 May 2014 08:38 PM |
| totes not y would u say dis |
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| 14 May 2014 08:47 PM |
| Can I come in now? And please don't make me the villain of the next floor. |
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