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| 14 May 2014 11:53 AM |
This isn't a song yet its in the making... I need somewhere to keep it.
(Verse 1) Uh, God bless America. Haters are Erica, But this is U.S era. Ok land got bombed, name was Pearl Harbor. Couldn’t defend ourselves nothing was harder. They were crossing borders. We keep our eyes on the prize. We stand together and rise! After war, we adjust our eyes and see the choice wasn’t wise. But wasn’t mine, just take the time. So we can find the right rhymes. Fine nine.
(SPEECH) God bless this great country. Freedom, Loyalty and respect. I just can’t get enough. I’m Young kid. And dis is my country
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BroBro264
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| 14 May 2014 02:00 PM |
| like I said, its in the making............................................ its not done this ismy comeback song Im like putting a base. is actually getting better and the 0/10 one blind af.... I said its not a song yet. |
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| 14 May 2014 02:02 PM |
| "haters are erica" i feel ya man |
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| 14 May 2014 02:04 PM |
i don't mean to diss or anything but try to make it make sense you get cred for that |
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| 14 May 2014 02:06 PM |
| Ik tho its just that im not done im known for being a bad rapper I just rap in a different way but ilookedup Erica its a actual word xD. |
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| 14 May 2014 02:07 PM |
that's why im just doing this until im done so im good again :D
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| 14 May 2014 02:09 PM |
| and if anybody wants to be in the song and make it better pm a verse or two :) |
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JunJoe
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| 14 May 2014 03:29 PM |
| Yeah we know Erica is a word, it's a name, and it makes no sense in your song. |
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| 14 May 2014 03:32 PM |
Ukulele solo activite! DUDLUDLUDODODO |
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| 15 May 2014 08:35 AM |
| i changed it form erica to hysteria dont ask. lol |
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| 15 May 2014 10:56 AM |
| Then you better have changed it to "haters IN hysteria" |
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| 15 May 2014 03:41 PM |
10000/10 Best verse ever ogm1!1!11 |
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