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| 13 May 2014 07:28 PM |
Verse 1 8-Ball
All these [N]as say they’re selling crack, Claim they your homies, But they don’t got your back, It’s incomprehensible, They volatile like a chemical, Nor act very sensible, But I guess it was inevitable, What they do is inexcusable, I wish they were removable, They claim their opinions aren’t refutable, One time I almost fell off my feet, But I didn’t get beat, There’s no time to retreat, In my lifestyle there is no defeat, I killed the [N]a and covered him up with concrete, Some people say there’s no point to resist, But I still think I should persist, Getting on the awards list, So many rappers telling each other to go to hell, I ain't gonna die today so here's my story to tell, So many artists fell, In the line of duty, Killed either by a gang or by the deputy, You can still see the shotgun shell, And other’s spent their last days rottin’ in a cell, (Like Lil Hawk) Just another 90s memory, Like a hood documentary, But OYG redrum still here, He’s a damu original, He’s still here and it’s a miracle, But now these days war isn’t very minimal, And these days everyone wants to be a criminal, Nobody can stop me now, Don’t ask me how, I’m unstoppable, Becoming phenomenal, It’ll be part of my chronicle, Sure I may sometimes act illogical, But being a hater is optional, Don’t say that it’s impossible, To become a legend, Because it’s up to me and i’m responsible, There’ll be at least one obstacle, But my last enemy ended up in the rap hospital, Soon i’ll even be profitable, All of this is achievable, And it’s actually very believable, But that [N]a keyyon coming back is inconceivable, Eh who cares, His hate was unspeakable, Fame isn’t receivable, You gotta work for it, But most people think it’s completely unreachable, Some [N]as claim they are from a housing project, And yet they have no self respect, Just a regular online effect, Be what you want just don’t step out of line, Don’t start to whine, If you hate everyone in radix records, Then you’ll get no rewards, Talk sht but then get kiled with swords, (Many idiots talked sht but then 1v1’d me with swords and lost) If fame is all you wanted, Then you shouldn’t have been a loser now you’re forever haunted, Try to return and some people look at you like you’re a monstrosity, Other rappers have some generosity, Most new ones have curiosity, (Curiosity about who you once were) But very few artists have modesty, At least a bit of us have honesty.
Verse 2 Phantom
What was going through my mind when i started this I didn't wan't this (S) The disrespect The haters i wonder whats next Wheres the rest of my homies i only have 2 But when i was new i had a whole crew Who knew i could be the best But i was never like the rest I took my tests and i passed Was always picked last I'll be there soon right now i need to focus on whats actually on my spoon BOOM! Wen't crazy and now im lazy haven't been on a song in 4 weeks Never ever was in the heard with the rest of the sheep In a blink i see everything I see the future like it's all memories I grabbed the Hennessy and drank til i threw up Then drank more filled up another cup Laid there in a black stare I barely had enough life in me to get back up The next morning i'm stuck Who do i call what happend I guess a passed out in the back of a station wagon (H)s on the corner excited like dogs with there tails waggin I'm packin im ready and im back This is just the beginning on the track Phantom will bring the old (S) back So be ready cuz im takin out the trash So You whack rappers better hide man WC PUT THEM W'S UP (B)!
Verse 3 Streetfighter919
Extinguish fools on their own track, but it's not self defense... My sharp mind will have you sliced in half, now you're a paraplegic... Move the pawns to the kingdom, I take the rap game strategic... Radix runs through my veins, music comes out when I'm bleeding... SJ7 put an end to the "Vast Winds"... Tight raps similar to a muscle clamp cling... You're half of what I am, you're only the radius... Shots fired towards me, they're always a great miss... Walk through phantom as he vanishes through then air... King Hurricanes storm turns into shiny weather when it despairs... No amount of water drops can destroy my burning flames... I'll sneak diss a (N), kill his career without a trace... They say take one step at a time, but I keep a big distance pace... These fools must be tripping like they didn't tie they shoe lace... Extraordinary techniques, just one shot to kill them... I'll murder you then rewind it, call it pass tense... Body bag in the booth just for my verses... Nothing less than legendary,my name is written in cursive... Aggressive like 100 roman soldiers... When I slang rocks, I slang boulders... More colossal than anything you can imagine... They say practice makes perfect, well than I guess I am practice... Let the beast loose like an ancient colosseum stadium... You don't know the half of it, like a radius... Radix records does it bigger than the circumference... I'm out of this world, you're the victim abducted... Legacy is a little tear drop on my shirt... I spit fire as I write, he spits pointless words... Beef will turn these (N)s into vegetarians... They say the numbers don't lie more than the skill, but I've got various... UGH!!!
Verse 4 2Crucial
I'm tired of these fake friends They a blur in my lens They don't ever stay around when you need em' to be down Always stabbing you in the back and when you need a little help they won't pick up the slack I lay a vocal down smooth don't worry about my progression Elevated rhymes can't reason be an exsetress I'm sorry that you had to die first cause my works never rented That Lamborghini draft push a start from the beginning When I wake up and see a brighter day The clouds are grey it tends to be hard to find your place True story I move forward no back tracking I'm on the road to success heavy backpacking We'll see whose laughing again from now when I make it happen I say f*ck a fake friend I'm on my solo status grind I keep my head up I'll be rewarded overtime
This is supposed to be like a rap game diss. Please no haters or DrillboyKOKO's on this song forum. |
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| 13 May 2014 07:54 PM |
| Guys stop rating your own verses...making all of us look stupid af |
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kekeswag
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| 13 May 2014 07:59 PM |
I only liked the end in 8 ball's verse.. The beginning is nothing but saying what rappers do.. Then saying you do that stuff.. For example.
You say "And these days everyone wants to be a criminal,"
Then you say "I killed the [N]a and covered him up with concrete," (You never killed anyone anyway but whatever) If you cut out "But my last enemy ended up in the rap hospital," And everything above it the verse would be flawless.. Who even is 8 ball anyway?
Phantom's was alright still kind of basic rhymes as always tho... I can never read Streets verses.. lol Last verse was good but no pop out lines... (Not hating just giving advice(Take it or dont take it)) Overall Ill give it a 6.7/10 :) |
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| 13 May 2014 08:01 PM |
| Keke doesn't read my verses cuz of the dots lmao, maybe I should stop that. |
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minniem
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| 13 May 2014 08:08 PM |
8-Ball your verses are always SOOO LONGGG XD. Shorten them just a bit?
But overall, you all did great. I'll give this a 8.5/10. Nice work. ^_^ |
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