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| 12 May 2014 07:01 PM |
| Your life is going downhill. Your Girlfriend dumped you and kicked you out of the house.Your Mother Rejects You. Your best friend is takes your job.You and your father got in a fight,now your in jail.Your released,You and your friends are going on a flight,a flight to Porto Rico, From Florida.For the first time in a long time your happy. While your getting your plane tickets your Ex Best friend walks on board the Plane with four other men. "Why is 'He' on here?" You thought.then , you remembered, your Ex-Job had an Important assignment in Porto Rico, Something about a Private army Guarding something that's theirs...Then you remembered..something dangerous.Your Friends were boarding the plane as you were thinking.."Wait No!" You yell,You give the lady your ticket and run inside,your on the plane,"Where are you guys?!" You ask silently "Over here" One of your friends said,"Guys we have to Get off of this plane!" You say,"Wait is ther something wrong?" one of them say. "Yes we-" you were saying as the Pilot said on the announcer: "Were lifting off,in 5 minutes" "Hurry!" You say."Is there something wrong?" a flight attendant said. "Yes somethings horribly wrong!" you say. "Please take your seat sir." she says. security guards walk up."Is there a problem?" "Yes!!!" you say "Take your seat." they say.. "No." they argue with you,your fists are clenched.You finally come to your senses and punch one of them. he is knocked out.The other guard Knocked you out..When you wake up everyone is screaming,the pane is going downward,people are falling out of a gigantic hole,the home breaks, your friend latches onto your hand, the other side of the plane lits on fire and blows up. A suitcase falls on your head and knocks you out. You wake up, to an mysterious island.. and screams. |
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| 12 May 2014 07:05 PM |
CS: Name: Gender: @ge: Weapons?: Civilian,Cia,or Private Army?: (Private army is on Porto rico, and Cia is both on Mystery island and Florida Civies are on Mystery island) Special Abilities?: Items in Backpack 15 Items Max: Survival tactics: Bio: Other: |
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| 12 May 2014 07:11 PM |
my CS: Name:Troy Domaghe Gender: M @ge: 24 Weapons: None Civilian Special Abilities: None Items: Medicene,Batteries,Phone,Labtop,Lighter. Survival Tactics: Hunted with my dad, +25 Shooting +20 Cardio Bio: None YET Other None. Objectives: Reach Safety, and stop anyone who tries to escape the island to TRY to get to Porto Rico. |
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BaoChu
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| 12 May 2014 07:12 PM |
Typicalrory,
As I was reading your well-written story, I noticed that you said, "Porto Rico" instead of "Puerto Rico".
You may think, "Oh, hey, that's just a misspelling!"
But truthfully, that is an offensive mistake. You're being culturally negligent to many Puerto Rican forumers with this action.
So, what can you do, Mr. Rory?
Well first you owe an apology to the Puerto Rican forumers - so make a post in this thread to show that you appreciate their culture and presence on these forums.
Second, you'll have to rewrite that character sheet - I can't imagine what will happen if other people copy and paste that sheet. If more people use your CS with that typo as well, then all of them will have to make an apology!
Please, this is just a warning. If you ignore it, however, I'll have to report this thread to the proper authorities and take further action if necessary.
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| 12 May 2014 07:14 PM |
RULES: No losing grip on reality like LOST. XD (you can lose grip on reality,like hallucination) No ODing Have Fun. |
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| 12 May 2014 07:15 PM |
| You are Truly right,sir. I am sorry Peurto Ricans, If I make an Mistake like this again, I will demolish myself, thank you for telling me this.(I thought I was spelling it right) |
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BaoChu
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| 12 May 2014 07:18 PM |
It's alright.
Just make sure you correct that spelling mistake in the character sheet.
Remember - Puerto Rico.
Thanks again.
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| 12 May 2014 07:22 PM |
CS:Reposted
RP Name: RP @ge: Gender: Survival Tactics: Items in Backpack (15 total): RP Bio: Objectives: Suggestions to make this thread better: Please spell Puerto Rico Right. Civilian,CIA,or Private Army.: (Private army is on Puerto Rico, CIA,is on both Island and Florida, And civilians are on the Island.) |
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| 13 May 2014 05:02 PM |
| Surprisingly...nobody joined.yet..LOL |
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Riku1257
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| 13 May 2014 05:30 PM |
I am not surprised.
"Suppose you were an idiot, and suppose you were a member of Congress; but I repeat myself." - Mark Twain |
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| 30 May 2014 10:35 PM |
| This isn't worth bumping mate. |
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| 30 May 2014 10:47 PM |
RP Name: Tomoki Fujioka
RP @ge: 16
Gender: M
Survival Tactics: Tomoki likes to fish alot so he is great at fishing.
Items in Backpack (15 total): Fishing Pole, Fishing Bait, Fishing Hooks, Can of Spam, Bottle of Water, Pocket Knife, Cell Phone (Destroyed from Crash, Revolver for CIA cases, pack of revolver bullets.
RP Bio: Tomoki Fujioka was boarding the plane to head to Puerto Rico and then another one to Tokyo. He works with the CIA and has gotten a lead on his new case of murder in Japan. He was going to take off to Tokyo the day after the plane crashed.
Objectives: 1.) Find Food and Water supply, 2.) Find Shelter, 3.) Try to find if anyone else survived the Crash, 4.) Gather everyone together, 5.) Create a Boat to Sail to nearest inhabited island, 6.) Escape the Mystery Island.
Suggestions to make this thread better: Well, you can try to make this a little more better to the story. And tell everyone how to RP in this.
Civilian,CIA,or Private Army.: CIA.
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| 30 May 2014 10:50 PM |
| If you crash into the Bermuda Triangle, good luck surviving at all. The ocean there is very violent. |
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| 30 May 2014 11:28 PM |
(ah, bollocks
joining because i can
too tired to criticise) |
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| 30 May 2014 11:34 PM |
Name: Field Agent Nora Kate Gender: F Age: 23 Weapons: Beretts M92FS with detachable suppressor Faction: CIA Special Abilities: Y'know. CIA training and stuff. Items in Backpack: ammo Survival tactics: cia Bio: Other:
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| 30 May 2014 11:53 PM |
| All exepted.you may start roleplaying.ill join in soon. |
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| 31 May 2014 02:36 PM |
@slack can you add more to your CS?
and To rp,You must make Objectives,they can be WHATEVER, But you have to do them,No-one escapes the island without my permission, unless they are admins,PM me if you would like to be an admin, If you destroy or kill your character or something like that, theres COMPLETELEY NO GOING BACK. At the end,either you will be killed by the "weapon" which we will find out what it is near the end,or you will survive,(That is where the sequal will come in)
If you want to escape,and you get my permission,you will have to have a last post,and you MAY be in the sequal,its up to you,
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| 31 May 2014 03:15 PM |
Slack...
SLACK!
You're making a huge mistake joining this! |
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| 31 May 2014 04:06 PM |
hey
i said i was gonna criticise
but f it
im out of here
peace |
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| 01 Jun 2014 07:55 PM |
fine I guess ill start...
"Ugh where am I...?"
I heard Screams coming from a distace.. My head was shakey... I looked up at the sun and my eyes burned horribly,I got up to see a plane crash and a lot of people dead..I heard someone running through the tree's.. I turned,only to get light-headed and faint.. I wake up in a dark cave with a note on me: "NevEr KnOCk on H3Ll's D00r WiTHoUt My Perm15510N" I stare at it closely,my head hurt trying to focus. I fainted again,felling my lighter in my pocket while closing my eyes.. |
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