iwantpsp
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| 07 May 2014 01:35 PM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1lA1t6y-w9o&feature=youtu.be&noredirect=1 And, today, I am releasing the album 2spooky4me! Here I Am isn't done yet. But you can listen to that single! |
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| 07 May 2014 01:36 PM |
my ears ;-;
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Cyanmaree
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iwantpsp
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| 07 May 2014 01:38 PM |
I guarantee it won't make you deaf. You probably didn't listen. It's a really nice beat with some lady singing Here I Am, with you... |
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guvonCP
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| 07 May 2014 01:40 PM |
It repeating is annoying the crap out of me.
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iwantpsp
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| 07 May 2014 01:43 PM |
| Thanks for the feedback. :( |
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Noivern
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RD1012
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| 07 May 2014 02:15 PM |
Well, being a semi-music maker (I haven't really written any music, but I've worked on guitar riffs, and composed stuff in my mind and whatnot), and as somebody who really loves to go in-depth about music, here's what I think:
First of all, the music itself. Not gonna lie, it never goes anywhere. It kinda drones on, and never does anything really interesting. I'm also not really sure what you were going for with it, it's like a rock electronic... thing? I don't know.
Also, the lyrics are just "Here I am with you". Nothing else. Now, I'm not saying you can't have repetitive lyrics. In fact, my favorite band of all time, Muse, repeats a lot of lyrics. However, if it's just 5 words, you can't really repeat it well. It's pretty much impossible. If you were to make it, say, 30-50 words that repeat, it would be a lot better.
If you want some pros about the song, I will say this: The production isn't bad, and you can clearly use music software pretty well. Also, the vocals are nice. You're voice isn't completely deep, but you'll probably sound really good when that happens.
So, it's by no means a great song at all, but it's a good starting point for making music. Just keep working on it, and you'll get a lot better.
Also, here's an example of how you can make repetitiveness work. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3NZlwe4bwEE Notice it's repeating, but it really throws some cool stuff in there, and it progresses. Feel free to take that as sort of an inspiration for music writing, because it's one of the best songs I know.
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| 07 May 2014 02:16 PM |
HEEYEEYEEE HEERE I AM (x1250)
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| 07 May 2014 02:17 PM |
| this reminds me of some artist |
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iwantpsp
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| 07 May 2014 02:23 PM |
for some reason
the instruments you used kind of remind me of something off of pink floyd's the division bell |
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| 07 May 2014 02:24 PM |
"yeyeyeaah
here i am
with u
yeyeyeaah
here i am
with u
yeyeyeaah
here i am
with u
yeyeyeaah
here i am
with u
yeyeyeaah
here i am
with u
yeyeyeaah
here i am
with u"
then at 1 point its like "HERE I AM! HERE I AM!
YEYEYEYYYEYEAH"
May I pls sing this for my X factor audition? |
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iwantpsp
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RD1012
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| 07 May 2014 03:39 PM |
bump4op
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Z4D
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| 07 May 2014 03:41 PM |
is that you if so you sound like a lady
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iwantpsp
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| 07 May 2014 03:43 PM |
that's not me m8 thanks tho |
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| 07 May 2014 03:43 PM |
| thats rlly annoying sorry pls make it stop repeating |
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iwantpsp
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iwantpsp
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| 08 May 2014 02:57 AM |
It took me until 01:00 to realise this is a troll
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Tharles
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iwantpsp
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| 08 May 2014 03:09 AM |
This isn't a troll. And there's no free version of the program. It's a free program. |
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Tharles
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