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| 06 May 2014 01:10 AM |
[DISCLAIMER] Before you say, "PERSONAL ATTACK REPORTING": I am not personal attacking, bans for personal attacking often happen when you suddenly mention a user's name. There are no mentions to users to avoid Reporting _________________________________________________________________________________ [INTRO] I am not a Far Cry fan, but I almost ran out of ideas so I decided to do a FarCry video, because often to me. Beaches sound more cool as a setting when making vids and I like weapons and stuff and I ended up with a FarCry video. _________________________________________________________________________________ [MY STRESS] Seriously, My Entry isn't bad at all (At least in my opinion)
I checked other entries and they have really bad quality camera and horrible sound. I sometimes learn from people's opinions but, I never know what to fix.
Also yesterday I entered the contest and I don't know why people hate it when It was a really good one! I bet it's because It's almost unrelated to Far Cry. _________________________________________________________________________________ [COMPLIMENTS] Also I used stop motion. I feel really hurt when people hate it when really, it's my first Roblox Animation. I got inspired by Bloxy 2013 winner "Out of Bloxy Cola" with it's stop motion. It took me like at least 3 and a half hours to complete my entry. Goodness guys! _________________________________________________________________________________ [OTHER NOTES] Also no journalists watching over me!!! (for those who don't know what I mean: my way of saying roblox journalists are meaning people who respond to a most hated robloxian's stuff)
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Kanest
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| 06 May 2014 01:11 AM |
> 3 and a half hours
there's your problem
you need to spend more time than that to create a bloxy-worthy entry |
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| 06 May 2014 01:13 AM |
@above
It's meant to be a short film. I wasn't aiming for a long film okay. |
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iThrasher
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| 06 May 2014 01:25 AM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lMQ2dvLpzSQ
That's my real entry |
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iThrasher
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| 06 May 2014 01:27 AM |
| It's actually alright. Good job. |
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Kanest
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| 06 May 2014 01:29 AM |
looks rough
you need to spend more time polishing the animations. 8 FPS doesn't cut it here
get the shooter in a pose like he's actually shooting.
are the bullets loaves of bread? make it as small as you can.
there are WAY too many jump cuts.
also, make the bad guys actually shoot at him. it's boring when they just stand there doing nothing. there's next to no action here.
this has potential, but you need to use all 3 weeks into this. |
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Demjot
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| 06 May 2014 01:31 AM |
| I liked the idea of yours, but it hurts my eyes to watch |
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jtcool21
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| 06 May 2014 01:35 AM |
| it stop motion but it still good im not saying i could do better ok i like yours :P |
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BOF
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| 06 May 2014 01:39 AM |
| The entry is okay, though the thing that really made me stop it for a while was the very low FPS. |
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| 06 May 2014 01:44 AM |
Thanks for your opinions, I can even learn from them
You know how if you did something and someone gave negative criticism, you can learn from that. That's why we should accept criticism |
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