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Re: The Bloody X

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dmaster999 is not online. dmaster999
Joined: 26 Jun 2011
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26 Apr 2014 07:22 PM
I am currently writing my own short story; it's a murder mystery during the Roman Times. It shall be around Twelve chapters or such, not including the prologue and epilogue. I thank Smorg30 for giving me this idea with his own short story a while ago, but this one shall be different. This is the prologue.

Prologue:
It was a clear sky in the northern territories of the Roman Empire. The Imperator of the Tenth Legion was overseeing the building of a new fort over the ruins of Strageath. The walls were stacked twice as high as the first fort, making it impossible to scale. He sighed happily as the fort was near to being finished. "It's more beautiful and indestructible as I imagined," He said as he walked toward his temporary quarters.
Suddenly, he was suddenly drenched in a large amount of oil and tar. He scowled under the black muck. "Who dared to cover me in this disgusting mess?!" Blackpig yelled.
He searched the area until he noticed a single archer in the tower nearby. "Are you responsible for this, you insolent fo-"
This was when the burning arrow went flying to the ground in front of him, and he was completely engulfed in flames. He yelled until his lungs melted into a pile of mush. His great triumph of building the fort had been short-lived.
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Hunter6252 is not online. Hunter6252
Joined: 05 Jan 2011
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26 Apr 2014 07:24 PM
Awesome so far!
Can't wait for chapter 1!
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mestier1233back is not online. mestier1233back
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26 Apr 2014 07:24 PM
1st
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Hunter6252 is not online. Hunter6252
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26 Apr 2014 07:24 PM
Lol not first. xd
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mestier1233back is not online. mestier1233back
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26 Apr 2014 07:24 PM
omg hunter you ruined the moment
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Spectrox15 is not online. Spectrox15
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26 Apr 2014 07:25 PM
I like it, release the new chapter or die!
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dmaster999 is not online. dmaster999
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26 Apr 2014 07:26 PM
I shall probably release the next chapter by the end of next week. If not, you can gladly kill me
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mestier1233back is not online. mestier1233back
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26 Apr 2014 07:27 PM
But on a serious note, it is very interesting.
Can't wait for more!
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Spectrox15 is not online. Spectrox15
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26 Apr 2014 07:28 PM
Okay, i shall be waiting.
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smorg30 is not online. smorg30
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26 Apr 2014 08:33 PM
The killer is Angel, tis obvious.
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cadet1029 is not online. cadet1029
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26 Apr 2014 08:44 PM
Good starting.
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LordDain is not online. LordDain
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26 Apr 2014 08:44 PM
Good starting.
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dmaster999 is not online. dmaster999
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26 Apr 2014 09:02 PM
Tis not Angel.
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Blackpig72 is not online. Blackpig72
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26 Apr 2014 09:34 PM
black guys always die first

"black" pig

:(
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Zealots is not online. Zealots
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26 Apr 2014 10:15 PM
bp prob deserve it for his aboose on hrs.

watch i be the killer just like in every other story in xl

~Grand Master: The king of all kings. #C&G Prince (14,022+ posts)[08'er]
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meong124 is not online. meong124
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26 Apr 2014 11:19 PM
BP die first as usual.
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ninjaco99 is not online. ninjaco99
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27 Apr 2014 12:12 AM
the killer is zuko
he's still redeeming his honor
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ninjaco99 is not online. ninjaco99
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27 Apr 2014 12:21 AM
the alternative is blackpig killed blackpig
after all, who else would want to kill blackpig?
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meong124 is not online. meong124
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27 Apr 2014 12:34 AM
Well i want to eat a black porkchop
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dmaster999 is not online. dmaster999
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27 Apr 2014 08:53 AM
BP, dying first is the cost of being the Imperator. Next time, hire some more guards
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Hunter6252 is not online. Hunter6252
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27 Apr 2014 12:45 PM
xd
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Celtrex is not online. Celtrex
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27 Apr 2014 12:46 PM
funny that no one on c&g told him to get out yet

The Clans and Guilds Salty Rex
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Blackpig72 is not online. Blackpig72
Joined: 17 May 2010
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27 Apr 2014 01:16 PM
maybe because this is clan related?

and I have my praetorians! so useless qqqq
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Celtrex is not online. Celtrex
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27 Apr 2014 01:17 PM
since when has c&g been clan related :o
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FlaviusAetitus is not online. FlaviusAetitus
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27 Apr 2014 01:51 PM
Jessss
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