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| 25 Apr 2014 09:45 PM |
"Bodies, beautiful bodies." You thought out-loud to your-self in the hospital room, for insanity had risen to you. "Sick-minded, murderous." Said the doctors if that conversation came about. You hesitated you knock on that hospital door, for the doctors could-not explain this patient. You knocked slowly and quietly "he" is what they call him now opened the door, you felt fear just by looking at him. You came in, but.. that was the last thing you saw of the hospital. He al-most killed you, dragging you out that night for wild or stray animals to eat, even perhaps hawks, but you were-not in Texas. You woke up the next day, tied up tightly in millions of cords. You looked up as it read "Mental hospital--" Thats all you read be-fore you fainted again. You found your-self in the middle of no-where, you rubbed your eyes quickly. Thinking it was just your eyes, but, you were really in the middle of no-where-- strangled, tied-up. -------------------------------------Rules.---------------------------------------- 1. You may meet other people, but remember, you're insane. 2. Do-not power-play and say you some-how survived a brutal fight, that's physically impossible for a human to survive that. 3. You don't remember any-thing from you past, Nothing. 4. You're in the middle of no-where. Don't say you found a house. 5. If you attempt to build some-thing, be descriptive. Like, if this was you, except insane. ------------------------Character description------------------------------------ Sanity levels: Appearance: Physical traits: Skills: Height: Weight: Age: [ You do-not know your name. You're insane. ]
NOTE: Insult this all you'd like. It was just an experimental role-play to see reactions. If it goes well, I'll actually put my CS otherwise, feel free to comment your feelings about this.
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| 25 Apr 2014 09:46 PM |
Being insane doesn't mean you won't know your name.
And why would you make a CS to your own RP? I've never figured out how that works...
All hail the Bannanachair king! |
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| 25 Apr 2014 09:53 PM |
CRITIQUE TIIIMMMEEE!
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"Bodies, beautiful bodies." You thought out-loud to your-self in the hospital room, for insanity had risen to you. "Sick-minded, murderous." Said the doctors if that conversation came about. You hesitated you knock on that hospital door, for the doctors could-not explain this patient. You knocked slowly and quietly "he" is what they call him now opened the door, you felt fear just by looking at him. You came in, but.. that was the last thing you saw of the hospital. He al-most killed you, dragging you out that night for wild or stray animals to eat, even perhaps hawks, but you were-not in Texas. You woke up the next day, tied up tightly in millions of cords. You looked up as it read "Mental hospital--" Thats all you read be-fore you fainted again. You found your-self in the middle of no-where, you rubbed your eyes quickly. Thinking it was just your eyes, but, you were really in the middle of no-where-- strangled, tied-up.
[Timeline? How exactly you were diagnosed with this?] -------------------------------------Rules.---------------------------------------- 1. You may meet other people, but remember, you're insane. 2. Do-not power-play and say you some-how survived a brutal fight, that's physically impossible for a human to survive that. [The WWE is clearly all fake. Amirite?] 3. You don't remember any-thing from you past, Nothing. 4. You're in the middle of no-where. Don't say you found a house. 5. If you attempt to build some-thing, be descriptive. Like, if this was you, except insane. [So if I'm an insane person trying to build something, would I make an insane house? Or an insane toilet?] ------------------------Character description------------------------------------ Sanity levels: Appearance: Physical traits: Skills: Height: Weight: Age: [ You do-not know your name. You're insane. ] [Tim already mentioned this.]
NOTE: Insult this all you'd like. [I will, don't worry.] It was just an experimental role-play to see reactions. If it goes well, I'll actually put my CS otherwise, feel free to comment your feelings about this. [WHOA. WHOA. HOLD THE PHONE. YOU JUST CAN'T DO THAT! IT'S AGAINST THE LAW!]
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And to top it all off, holy cheese wiz girl you use dashes way too much. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 09:55 PM |
| No, I'm fine with this. I WAS using too much dashes. That's why it's an experimental role-play. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 09:57 PM |
| I'm completely calm--oh, if you're referring to that caps lock part, that was sarcasm. Just in case you couldn't tell. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 09:59 PM |
Interesting concept, though, and glad that you can accept criticism.
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:00 PM |
| I can tell if it's sarcasm or not. My family is especially skilled with that. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:01 PM |
| Nah I was referring to the girl that can't use a spacebar correctly. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:02 PM |
| You should improve it.. especially on logic. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:04 PM |
| Okay, I'll do that. I was thinking on this role-play without comprehending it in my mind. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:05 PM |
So, basically, you just said you were thinking about this thread without thinking about this thread.
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:07 PM |
| Yes. I was thinking about writing this threat. But, when I wrote it, my mind went blank. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:07 PM |
| Okay, that makes sense in a way. |
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:11 PM |
| I'm going to make a new one now. My friend is DEMANDING it. |
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