Pexur
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:12 AM |
"The author of Mockingjay is Suzanne Collins, a famous author for The Hunger Games series."
This sentence is total crap. I need help making it flow ( I need to explain that Mocking jay is part of the series too. )
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Pexur
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:14 AM |
| teh athr f mkngjy s snze clns, fmus athr 4 hngr gms srs |
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EatenCake
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:15 AM |
any other configurations wouldn't improve the quality that much it's fine |
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:15 AM |
Mockingjay, written by Suzanne Collins, is the third installment of The Hunger Games series.
its ok mr niall |
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jakenhic1
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:15 AM |
can I make multiple sentences?
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faultydex
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Pexur
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:16 AM |
| You can make multiple sentences as long as it isn't chunky |
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:17 AM |
excuse me my example sentence was the best source: 11th grade ap english student u nerds
its ok mr niall |
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:18 AM |
| Mockingjay is a 2010 science fiction novel by American author Suzanne Collins. It is the last installment of The Hunger Games, following 2008's The Hunger Games and 2009's Catching Fire. |
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jakenhic1
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:20 AM |
Ok
Suzanne Collins is the author of a popular series of novels, known as "The Hunger Games". Of these ever popular books, Mockingjay is the final installment of this series, tying together the plot from the previous two stories.
my attempt |
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:20 AM |
>11th grade ap english student u nerds
im in that class too
exact same grade too
very weird |
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Pexur
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:20 AM |
I'm using shorty's so far
if anyone makes a better one im using theirs
thanks shorty
and others |
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jakenhic1
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:21 AM |
| also may the odds be ever in your favor when you are graded |
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:22 AM |
| ur welcome p-pexur kun i l-love you |
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yan3321
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:22 AM |
Suzanne Collins authored Mockingja-
my english is very bad
chinese asian malaysian of ot |
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Pexur
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:23 AM |
how do you make a summary of the plot?
...without giving the plot away
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sorry guys im using u for help |
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:26 AM |
its not really possible unless you make the summary EXTREMELY general, thats how you would give away any spoilers as in, "katniss, her sister, and her friends have been struggling to fight the government" |
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Pexur
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| 25 Apr 2014 12:28 AM |
oh wait nevermind it just says a summary of the plot
im sure i can figure out what to do there |
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