thebobx
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| 23 Apr 2014 09:33 PM |
http://web.roblox.com/Restaurant-And-Small-Village-place?id=68019353
Constructive criticism is very much appreciated! :) |
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thebobx
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thebobx
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thebobx
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thebobx
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| 24 Apr 2014 10:19 PM |
| Does anyone else have feedback? |
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| 25 Apr 2014 06:42 AM |
| The c-framing is rough around the edges, and there is a lot of open space, but overall it looks nice and has a lot of potential. |
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DreadCode
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| 25 Apr 2014 09:22 AM |
| It's not bad, you need to think about the shape of things more to get a better overall design. Also turn off outlines (which can be found in the lighting) This is a must when Cframing |
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Oakzaa
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| 25 Apr 2014 09:25 AM |
Very nice! just need to work on the surroundings a bit more,nice to see a place made from scratch :D,by the way can you check out my place too?http://www.roblox.com/Banland-ALPHA-33-place?id=154206159 you are supposed to go down the chains at the start,sorry if it is a little boring. |
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thebobx
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| 25 Apr 2014 10:17 AM |
| Thank you guys! Now could people rate it put of ten? |
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thebobx
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