Sildow
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| 22 Apr 2014 08:08 PM |
Setting: 'The Cube' is dark square facility set in the middle of nowhere, Arizona, USA. 'The Cube' is a death game. 'The Cube' kidnaps poor, undependant, undepended, and or in debt people. 'The Cube' is a private, off radar event hosted by wealthy families. 'The Cube' gives these poor a chance by having them kill eachother off- winners will receive money and join the facility staff, and or join the wealthy families themselves. 'The Cube' is more of a betting, gruesome entertainment system. 'The Cube' is not completely unknown. Many poor people in darker cities or suburbs hear of it, wishing to get caught and join. 'The Cube' is of simple design, a large square facility with several hundred different types of simulated environments ranging from plain steel rooms to tundras, to tropical forests. Many weapons from handheld melees to firearms, to explosives are contained in the facility, hidden at various places.
Timeline: 2042 Normal RP rules apply. I will participate as the 'Gamemaster' and the wealthiest man hosting the event. I will also host a participant. This probably won't work out being such a death themed place- noone wants to die, and noone has to. However, those who are critically injured are picked up by staff and tended to- and if possible, returned to the game. (TL;DR): Battle royale set in desert by lots of rich people
ALSO, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO RP AS A PARTICIPANT. YOU MAY JOIN AS ONE OF THE WEALTHY SPECTATORS, STAFF FACILITY WHOM PICK UP INJURED, TEND TO TRAPS, RELEASE TRAPS, AND SOMETIMES, COMBAT PARTICIPATORS.
CS- Name: Age: Gender: Blood type: Birth origin:
( Country, then either large known town or made up small town )
OOC in posts contained by parenthesis from here on out. OOC shall be contained in seperate posts from RP related posts.
CS- Name: Thomas Williams Age: 19 Gender: Male Blood type: O Birth origin: London, UK.
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Sildow
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| 22 Apr 2014 08:12 PM |
Thomas, in debt, loss of job, and about to get evicted, was strolling in southern downtown, thinking of what his next move would be. Sighing, he sits down and shoves his face in his hands.
He feels a clunk on the back of his head, a sack pushed over his head limiting vision, and it all goes dark. He later wakes up in a metal room. |
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| 22 Apr 2014 08:12 PM |
| (Can I have 2 CS's, one for a staff memeber and one for a participant?) |
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Sildow
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enzo90
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| 22 Apr 2014 08:14 PM |
| (This is interesting...however like all good role plays it needs an actual "Story line" the - explains the rules which can likely be out in the plot to show how to progress the story. Rules should be listed. "Normal roblox rules" isn't really specific to some people, who may like to see it listed of what "Normal rules" your talking about. You also noted this is a death role play. People should die, but have permission to be killed or can start anew once killed.finally, it's better when the owner plays and joins in and tells what's going on as it occurs but stays mostly in the plot, if that makes sense. Otherwise,I like it.) |
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Sildow
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| 22 Apr 2014 08:16 PM |
| ( Yes, the plot will be explained as people join and are all in 'metal rooms'. It's no fun revealing a crypted story before it even happens. Twists have to be unanticipated. I mean seriously, all participants shouldn't even know what the cube is. Or atleast most of them. ;] ) |
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| 22 Apr 2014 08:23 PM |
(Staff member CS) CS- Name: Dacos Vokit Age: 49 Gender: Male Blood type: AB Birth origin: Vladivostok, Russia Other: He survived his fight mainly because he blew off the other participants feet and hands. He is very good at fixing gunshot and explosion wounds.
(Participant CS) CS- Name: Telsin Avedal Age: 27 Gender: Male Blood type: A Birth origin: Quebec, Canada( He's actually Romanian, but it's complicated.)
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Sildow
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| 22 Apr 2014 08:26 PM |
| ( Good, now let Telsin get kidnapped and placed in a metal room. CLOSING CS PARTICIPATION AFTER 5 JOINERS ) |
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LNG257
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| 22 Apr 2014 09:12 PM |
UNOFFICIAL RP RATING SYSTEM LOADED
Mmm, +1 for grammar(mostly). +1 for some sort of story. +1 for actually getting somebody to join(a lot better than what I did when I made something similar to this)
And the negatives...
-2 for conflicting plot and rules. "The Cube is a death game." "won't work out being such a death themed place" -1 for a not-really-detailed and 1 part nonsense CS. -1 for not explaining how such a facility is allowed to go unnoticed by the authorities.
Total of -1.
UNOFFICIAL RP RATING SYSTEM HAS DECLARED THIS ROLEPLAY: ACCEPTABLE
Roleplay is okay to participate in.-LNG257 |
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| 22 Apr 2014 09:16 PM |
Name: Daniel Wilson Age: 27 Gender: M Blood type: A Birth origin: America, Minnesota |
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Sildow
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| 22 Apr 2014 10:22 PM |
| @LNG It's been stated it's an 'off radar system hosted by the wealthy'. Also, they kidnap those undependant, unemployed, undepended, and bout to get evicted. Law enforcement won't get any reports of missing persons, won't notice anyone, evictors would see that they probably left, so they wouldn't notice, aswell- atleast for a while. |
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Sildow
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| 22 Apr 2014 10:28 PM |
@LNG Also, it's quite rude to barge into someone's RP thread unannounced, declare authority, 'rate' their system, and the barge out. Quite rude. Even my arrogant and rude self would ask before commiting such blasphemy. |
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