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| 19 Apr 2014 07:53 PM |
I was born in 1689, in Liverpool, I grew up with my father, and he and my family taught me to fight, free-run, and phycology, how the mind works and how I can manipulate someones mind. On my 19th birthday, my home was attacked by people because of a war I was unaware of, the Assassins and the Templars, I ran away once my father died and set for the new world. I didnt have much money, but I had experience, I was a thief, until one day I found my brother in a slum in the city, him and I got enough money to buy a house, but the soldiers there found out what my brother and I were up too and I went to prison while my brother escaped and lived a life a fortune and glory, I escaped prison and was found by my pirate uncle, he was more than a pirate though, he was an Assassin, I found out I belonged to family full of the greatest Assassins, I went years training and training, until I fell into a coma lasting ten years. When I woke up construction of the Assassins home was being built by my grandfather, until the war and my home was destroyed and my grandfather left there until he died, I still stayed close with letters, soon my uncles, cousins, and other Assassins went on a campaign lasting for 8 years, until my uncles got old and went nearly idle, I am now 50 years old and ill, I have yet to know my fate
To Be Continued...... |
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| 19 Apr 2014 07:54 PM |
| Dont mind the spelling errors, it is supposed to be a biography written by my character. |
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Smough
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| 20 Apr 2014 10:22 AM |
we really don't care.
Babalon balt chiso faboan ilsi! |
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| 20 Apr 2014 10:32 AM |
a family of assassins that reminds me of something nevermind its totally original
anyways how did your brother live a life of "fortune and glory" when hes wanted and is going to recieve a bigger penalty for escaping in the first place
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Recesity
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| 20 Apr 2014 10:58 AM |
| twist: everyone is templars |
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| 20 Apr 2014 11:11 AM |
you were born in 1689? damn brah, you're pretty old |
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| 21 Apr 2014 03:24 PM |
| I was going to add the brother part, my fiction bro, is real close to one of the kings of Belgium and Britain, he recieved a pardon, and the family of assassins is totaly my idea. >:D Jk |
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| 21 Apr 2014 03:29 PM |
>>>Dont mind the spelling errors, it is supposed to be a biography written by my character.
your spelling errors dont really give your bio a human tone imo sounds like a robot too formal no emotion bad |
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| 21 Apr 2014 03:31 PM |
also you said he escaped not pardoned |
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HouseBro
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| 21 Apr 2014 03:40 PM |
In west Philadelphia born and raised On the playground is where I spent most of my days! |
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Smough
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| 21 Apr 2014 04:23 PM |
why did i think you were referencing Indigo Prophecy, Mage?
Babalon balt chiso faboan ilsi! |
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| 21 Apr 2014 04:31 PM |
Just a city boy, born and raised in south Detroit He took the midnight train goin' anywhere |
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Prime677
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| 20 Jun 2015 04:04 AM |
| Ahh desmond, I remember when we used to train together, when you were still wearing that pirate hat of yours... ;) Good times... |
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| 01 Aug 2015 01:20 AM |
| I retired peacefully on my island listening to Eminem. the end |
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