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XoteI is not online. XoteI
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20 Apr 2014 01:33 AM
I'm starting on a report paper for 43 events of American history. Sp far I have an introduction only. What do you guys think?


Ever wondered if the very soil you are on was once a step of a significant man taken part of our history? Ever thought of how and why an event happened? How about the impact your life takes from current events? You may think history is just a bunch of dead people. They may be dead, but they are the ones who constructed the perfect nation. The United States of America.


Any suggestion on how to fix it? Opinions?
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perfectweegee112 is not online. perfectweegee112
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20 Apr 2014 01:34 AM
add more joj
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XoteI is not online. XoteI
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20 Apr 2014 01:35 AM
Right on it!
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TheShoeHead is not online. TheShoeHead
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20 Apr 2014 01:35 AM
"perfect nation"

my sides

~Another post by the cake munching Brit.~ @InsanityBrit
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Damp is not online. Damp
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20 Apr 2014 01:36 AM
I fixed it for you
cause AMURICA


Ever wondered if the very soil you was on was once a step of a smart man taken part of our history? Ever thought of why history happened? How about the impact yer life takes from current events? You obvs think history is just a bunch of dead people, lol. They may be dead, but they are the ones who builted the perfect nation. The United States of AMURRICAAAAAA.
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XoteI is not online. XoteI
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20 Apr 2014 01:36 AM
ikr

just saying it so i can have a chance to get a 'better' grade
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pokemonlox is not online. pokemonlox
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20 Apr 2014 01:38 AM
I like it so far but there a small amount of errors. But I'd love to judge it after your done if your okay with this.
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perfectweegee112 is not online. perfectweegee112
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20 Apr 2014 01:39 AM
did you add joj

i need to see the edited paper pls
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XoteI is not online. XoteI
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20 Apr 2014 01:39 AM
Sunday is my last day, i've procrastinated too much, i had 6 weeks. Any ideas on how to make it better?
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Damp is not online. Damp
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20 Apr 2014 01:42 AM
43 events is actually a lot. I feel terrible for you.
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XoteI is not online. XoteI
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20 Apr 2014 01:43 AM
I don't think i could do it tomorrow, I might be too high,
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lMystogan is not online. lMystogan
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20 Apr 2014 01:46 AM
the white men stole my land
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XoteI is not online. XoteI
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20 Apr 2014 01:47 AM
because i was growing weed
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pokemonlox is not online. pokemonlox
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20 Apr 2014 01:58 AM
They grew tabcoo. Not weed guys.
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XoteI is not online. XoteI
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20 Apr 2014 02:01 AM
They actually grew some weed before.
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pokemonlox is not online. pokemonlox
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20 Apr 2014 02:02 AM
I didn't expect weed but I knee they often grew tabcoo, rice and cotton.
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20 Apr 2014 02:03 AM
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XoteI is not online. XoteI
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20 Apr 2014 02:04 AM
And indigo.
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perfectweegee112 is not online. perfectweegee112
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20 Apr 2014 02:04 AM
I grow things for joj
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