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aveyond2 is not online. aveyond2
Joined: 18 Apr 2013
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18 Apr 2014 12:35 AM
(Again, sorry if my grammar is bad my teachers in school are stupid and they never teach us grammar. I try to fix any typos or misspellings.)
The man screamed in agony as a stream of lava trickled down his face, leaving a charred black scar. Mountain sides were flowing with fast moving, hot red liquid, creating a beautiful but deadly scene. Screams echoed across the land, ringing in his ears. He ran as far as he could from the illuminated mountainside, only to find every single place ablaze with fire. Lave was moving quickly through the land, Leaving trails of swirling black smoke. He knelt down onto the ground staring up into the night sky, he knew that it was the end of world.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------A group of survivors huddle in a brick building, the screams had stopped a long time ago. Everyone is dead. A man with a black scar on his face steps up to the front of the room. "I ask that all children between five and sixteen step up to the front of the room." The survivors have been here for around seventeen years, and food is running extremely low. A quiet murmur is heard as people shuffle their feet and look around. "I said, I ask that all children between five and sixteen step up to the front of the room!" The man says more fiercely this time. A group of children step up to the room, some looking over their shoulder at their concerned parents. "Thank you." The man said, scanning the group. Everyone knew this day would come, when they sent the kids out to search. They needed people who didn't know what had happened. People who did could mess everything up. "We have been able to support ourselves for seventeen years. But now, our crops have stopped growing, our cattle is dying and people are starving. Life on this planet is no longer sustainable." A small whimper was heard from a child at the front. "Our scientists have been working for seventeen years without any breaks, on a space ship. A space ship that is specially designed to support life and find a new planet." some people in the crowd sigh with relief. "But... Only children can go. Those who have witnessed the horrors outside could lose the will to live at any time. And if they don't want to live anymore... They won't care what happens to the others." A screeching noise is heard as a silver metal door slides open, revealing a Octagon shaped black space ship. The doors to the space ship open and the children are led inside without being allowed to say goodbye to their parents. A few sobs can be heard from The crowd and for a split second, a sliver of emotion shows on the mans face. But it leaves without a trace. "Food, water and everything they need to survive is in the ship. Don't worry." the man picked up a stack of papers and began reading off names. Names of the people who had gone.
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You step out of the ship into warm clean air. You look around the beautiful planet, only to be greeted by thousands of armed aliens.
Rules: No godmodding, no Gary or Mary sues, No killing other peoples characters without permission, No having powers, No instant kills.
Aliens:
For years the aliens, the shades to be exact, have lived on their planet carefree. But then these... Disgusting... Things came and invaded! They would not tolerate such ignorance and enslaved the horrible creatures.
Species:
Normal shade: Just your average shade, nothing really special about it. It can run and jump just as fast as humans can. They have pale blue skin and they are usually over six foot.
Deceive shade: These may be one of the worst types of shades, looking exactly like humans but they have inhuman abilities. Running and climbing faster gives them a huge advantage over humans.
Spring shade: Spring shades are usually kind and happy. They have slightly green skin and kind features. They can jump extremely high, giving them the name: Spring shades
Dark Shades: Dark shades have a dark grey skin and are usually short. They are vain, and cruel. But they have a right to be vain, their faces are perfect. And almost anyone will fall in love with them on sight.
Human C.S
Name:
Age: (5 - 16)
Appearance:
Personality:
Gender:
Bio: (Optional)
Other: (Optional)
Alien C.S
Name:
Age:
Appearance: (Try to remember what the skin is like and if they are short or tall.)
Personality:
Gender:
Species:
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Bio: (Optional)
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TehBloxx4h is not online. TehBloxx4h
Joined: 24 Aug 2013
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18 Apr 2014 03:16 AM
Your teachers don't teach you English?
Where do you live??
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duck14 is not online. duck14
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18 Apr 2014 03:21 AM
(Grammar isn't all of English just a big part of it. I sometimes find that these excuses are made up though not saying this is. Why can't people just say that their grammar isn't as good as they would like it to be and any mistakes found will be fixed.)
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xXHiNatXx is not online. xXHiNatXx
Joined: 19 Oct 2013
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18 Apr 2014 03:28 AM
I do DIPL at school. It is very good for English. By English I mean, Spelling, Grammar, THE LOT.

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aveyond2 is not online. aveyond2
Joined: 18 Apr 2013
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18 Apr 2014 01:38 PM
(I used to think I had okay grammar but then when I posted my first rp everyone was complaining about my grammar... Except I don't know how to leaner grammar.... But I know basic grammar.)
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aveyond2 is not online. aveyond2
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18 Apr 2014 01:38 PM
*learn
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xXHiNatXx is not online. xXHiNatXx
Joined: 19 Oct 2013
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19 Apr 2014 01:21 AM
It is so easy for grammar if you are speaking it goes like

"Hello everyone!" for the punctuation you can't use a full stop.

I wasn't complaining about you're grammar, I didn't want to read it all... I was just saying to the others about grammar... I hope I didn't hurt you're feelings in any way, and if I did, I am VERY sorry.
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TehBloxx4h is not online. TehBloxx4h
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19 Apr 2014 01:34 AM
You're taking it too seriously. She's not offened or anything.
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aveyond2 is not online. aveyond2
Joined: 18 Apr 2013
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19 Apr 2014 01:44 AM
I'm not offended. I didn't mean you it's just certain people freak out over missing something small... Like... A period then they assume that the persons grammar is horrible than hate on them... Ya people on this forum are mean. I would hate to see what would happen if a little kid came on here O.O

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CreativeMystery is not online. CreativeMystery
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19 Apr 2014 02:14 AM
"my teachers in school are stupid"

Seems reasonable.
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