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| 14 Apr 2014 11:54 PM |
word on the street im a suspect
hanging with the killers in the project
hang a white [n] with pride
All yall rednecks stay quiet
O.g bobby johnson og bobby johnson og bobby johnson og booby johnson
head butt you [s] like ocho cinco
remix old as [f] rdy play some bingo
i dont give a [f] about these legos man give u the heat then flatten you like some eggos (waffles)
swear to god we could fight i will come out kicking f it f it man ill still be winning
[n] beating me wont dream on it
man ill put my whole team on it
free my [n] locked behind bars
always knew we'd be caught up with the law
try to bash me online with some text, [n] see me in the streets [fng] hit u with da flex
word on the street im a suspect
hanging with the killers in the project
hang a white [n] with pride
All yall rednecks stay quiet
O.g bobby johnson og bobby johnson og Bobby johson og bobby johnson |
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| 16 Apr 2014 12:03 AM |
| Want some feed back good and bad please |
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| 16 Apr 2014 03:37 AM |
Good: It was on one topic and it made sense. Also it rhymed.
Bad: It was so unorganized like most people do this Ex: [Verse 1] blah blah [Chorus] blah blah [Verse 2] blah blah Overall good job, keep up this work and you might make it. |
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| 16 Apr 2014 10:40 AM |
| Explain So i could fix in the future i only had a 2 chorus and one verse og bobbyjohnson 4x is the end of the chrous and word on the street im a suspect is the beginning and the stuff in the middle was the verse |
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| 16 Apr 2014 02:53 PM |
| NOT BAD KEEP WORKING TRY NOT TO REMIX TO MUCH BE ORIGANAL |
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