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| 12 Apr 2014 09:32 PM |
LIl duce on the beatzzzzzz
IF you were in a placee without me how would you see yourself if you were in a dark place with no light's where he tell's you its a fright keep in mind don't be scared when ur life flashes before your eyes when the sky turns dark look to your right and run to the light!!!!
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Come over to the bright sidee the bright sidee come over to the bright sidee the bright sidee. Bright side-Bright side
(verse) i haven't been so suree If you were reading my reply don't look away turn your head let your brain tell you to run to the light don't be afraid don't be ashamed ohh girl look at my eyes lets walk threw the night and baby....
(chorus) OVER TO THE BRIGHT SIDE THE BRIGHT SIDEE COME OVER TO THE BRIGHT SIDE THE BRIGHT SIDEE Bright side-Bright side..
(verse 2) Follow me fo suree this is where i'm heading not to the dark but the light where there is no fright!!!!!!!!!!! if you get scared i'll be at your side never leave you!!!!! no matter what you put me THROUGH!! I'LL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU!!!!!!
(chorus) Come over to the bright sidee the bright sideeee!!! come over to the bright side Bright Side-Bright Side
(ENDING) COME TO THE LIGHT!!!!! |
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PopIsNh
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| 12 Apr 2014 09:57 PM |
| NICE RATE 10/10 MAYBE THE BEST 1 YET |
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| 13 Apr 2014 01:03 PM |
7.5/10 Good message but try not to use the same rhymes. And try to come up with clever rhymes instead of using easy basic rhymes...
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| 13 Apr 2014 01:45 PM |
| Only thing i could think of. plus i had to go to work so i just rushed it a little bit. |
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| 13 Apr 2014 03:11 PM |
| Yeah the rhymes were ok kasaan but you could do better. i stills ay 10/10 tho |
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