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Re: Please rate this intro and storyline.

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Jhgnomey is not online. Jhgnomey
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10 Apr 2014 09:42 PM
This storyline is that---You are entrenched in a technological world known as the Dream Engine, But it seems that you and the users have been immortally made to stay in this world, And worst of all, It is just after the Zombie Apocalypse, The world is rid of the human race now, And so are the zombies somehow, You and the other survivors are stuck in the Dream Engine, And have to survive this world, Where humans themselves, Are wiped off of existence.


Rate the intro:

http://www.roblox.com/The-Dream-Engine-V-9-2-place?id=152970739
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Jhgnomey is not online. Jhgnomey
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10 Apr 2014 09:47 PM
read.
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ValidusMaximus is not online. ValidusMaximus
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10 Apr 2014 10:04 PM
That sounds interesting. I hope to take a look at the game some time.
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Rowpunk is not online. Rowpunk
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11 Apr 2014 12:39 AM
Reminds me of Fallen Earth (Post apoc mmorpg based around crafting basically)

Will work if you have fun gameplay, otherwise most players won't care about the story and just leave. (sad truth is that most players don't care about storylines.)
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Obscurely is not online. Obscurely
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11 Apr 2014 02:47 AM
entrenched
ɪnˈtrɛn(t)ʃt,ɛn
adjective
1.
(of an attitude, habit, or belief) firmly established and difficult or unlikely to change; ingrained.
"an entrenched resistance to change"

Please use correct language when writing a storyline ╥﹏╥

I'll check out the game now and judge it..

'Sorry, this place is currently closed to visitors'

Seriously!? ヽ(`Д´)ノ
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