devChris
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| 10 Apr 2014 03:38 PM |
Hi All,
So I decided to give video making a shot. Looking at the result, it didn't work out so well. But I want opinions on this 2 minute... thing I've made.
It's crappy, it's got the worst name ever, and it hasn't got much in-game stuff in it. But It's a little idiotic story I made up that I'd like opinions for.
Please, no harsh replies. It's my first go.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5YhH0YrZ-4k |
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devChris
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| 10 Apr 2014 07:07 PM |
| What recorder did you use and how did you make the effects? |
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Attanius
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| 10 Apr 2014 07:32 PM |
this is what our teacher tought us at school: "don't add too many words in movies, todays people and teens like images of people getting hurt of people going throuhg harsh times aka suffering". THAT is how you capture someone's attention this generation.
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KastroT
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:36 PM |
mother of black screens
-KastroT- |
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:48 PM |
I quite liked it, kinda reminded me of skyrim in a way.
8/10 |
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devChris
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| 11 Apr 2014 04:03 AM |
Thanks for the replies guys,
-What recorder did you use and how did you make the effects? I used Fraps and I used ROBLOX Studio for the spinning swords (Quickly made a RotateScript) and the colors behind the 'bearers' were just skyboxes.
I removed green screen, because the swords were behind a green screen. |
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devChris
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| 11 Apr 2014 04:04 AM |
| P.S I'm never going to make an actual story. XD |
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routess
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| 11 Apr 2014 06:19 AM |
I'm just going to give you some Pros and cons about the video, and a final rating.
Pros: Cool effects Dialogue was excellent You can easily make this into multiple videos, or one big movie.
Cons: Your song choice was over used unoriginal idea It got boring after a while just reading text on a black screen with nothing going on
Overall it was decent, I give it a nice 6/10.
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| 11 Apr 2014 08:55 AM |
Quite a nice prologue,if you really make the series it may have potential for further improvements,i saw nice usage of effects in your video,i give it a 9/10 as its your first video,not many can achieve this quality(mostly due to the usage of editing,not everyone knows to edit video before publishing)on their first time.
And I'm guessing if the last sword is a golden fried-chicken sword that turns the victim into a fried chicken? |
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jheani
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| 11 Apr 2014 08:59 AM |
9/10 nice
I suck at bets! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xzOn-Ofn9Pg |
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