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| 10 Apr 2014 08:14 PM |
LIL DUCE ON THE BEATZZ uh huh yeahhh les go.
If you felt like you was in my shoes how would you set yoself in the hood hustlein an grindin for the dough people think i'm a joke come round here get yo light's poped off by the folk IN MY HOOD WE GO HARD NONSTOP NEVA STOP PLAY THE ROLE CLAPPIN NIG'S WITH THE DICE ON THE FLOOR MAKE ME A SANDWICH KICK ME UP SOMTHIN GOOD IF YOU AIN'T ALL OR NOTHIN YOU AIN'T FROM MY HOOD
(verse) My nig's my nig's its all or nothin round here if you can't handle the strugle you ain't from round here It's all or nothin all or nothin all or nothin if you cool you goin stuntin eyee. Lil duce talk alot but he say stuff that's real never tell a lie keepin it G fo real if you can't deal with what i'm sayin you better tell me to my face if you don't you a disgrace talkin behind my back gets me real mad real fast spendin time on the windows kickin thangs with the cat if you ain't from where i'm from you not really bout the 5 lyfe if a girl wanna hang with a 5 star stunna like me she gotta be 1 who role's with the 3 ya feel me...cause IM FROM BOSTON HUESTON TEXAS EVERYBODY KNOW THATS ME PEOPLE TRYNA BE LIKE ME CAUSE IM THE ONLY G TAKE SOME NOTES HIT THE SPOT WATCH LIL DUCE SHOOT THE COP IT AINT OVER TODAY WE JUST GETTIN STARTED LESGOOO
(VERSE) My nig's my nig's its all or nothin round here if you can't handle the strugle you ain't from round here it's all or nothin all or nothin all or nothin if you cool you goin stutin eyee...
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gogobot22
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:36 PM |
AMAZIN 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 WULD REED AGIAN
OT's Official Nice Guy (#CF) |
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ddmanman1
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| 11 Apr 2014 05:02 AM |
why do you open every song with
"If you felt like you was in my shoes how " |
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| 11 Apr 2014 09:12 AM |
It was below average and sloppy even for the type of lyrics you're trying to create. I suggest you work on metaphors and similes or punchlines. Those usually fit well with these types of raps if used properly. You don't particularly have to be a lyricist, but you should at least make these kinds of raps decent.
Or I suggest you try Lil Herb or Lil Bibby's music. Examples of good drill rappers who rap about the same subject.
Also, some extra advice: clean up your formatting. It makes it easier for people to see when I line ends and is more pleasant to the eye in general, not that it impacts the rap quality. |
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hewparu98
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| 11 Apr 2014 10:27 AM |
>Lil Duce
You should totally give a concert in Italy. |
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| 11 Apr 2014 04:54 PM |
| Sonic shut the hell up you're the only one posting on this page that doesn't like it everyone else likes it IF YOU LIKE IT HOORAY IF U DONT THEN KEEP IT TO UR DAMN SELF FREAKIN TERD |
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Aristios
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| 11 Apr 2014 06:09 PM |
He was not serious when he said 1000000000000000000000000000000/10
Don't be gullable |
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| 11 Apr 2014 06:12 PM |
| Aris shut yo azz up nobody like you. You just like King Lammicane a hater and a suckup Gtfo Even if he didn't mean it he still said it was good. Take notes dumbazz you're not compared to me. |
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Aristios
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| 11 Apr 2014 06:29 PM |
| My rap's are 5,000 times better than yours failure is your only option.. |
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Aristios
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| 11 Apr 2014 06:36 PM |
| And he thinks I'm trying to be mean when I tell him the truth about the guy being sarcastic and start's slanging about and going crazy.. |
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| 11 Apr 2014 06:38 PM |
| You mean 5,000 times worse? HA cool thank's for telling me the truth. You are nothing aris just stfu. |
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| 11 Apr 2014 06:47 PM |
"Sonic shut the hell up"
How edgy, but no.
"you're the only one posting on this page that doesn't like it everyone else likes it"
That doesn't make it good. Most of the people here make raps as trashy as yours.
"IF YOU LIKE IT HOORAY IF U DONT THEN KEEP IT TO UR DAMN SELF FREAKIN TERD"
I don't have to. Blocking out criticism to please yourself is one of the best ways to get nowhere. |
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| 11 Apr 2014 06:48 PM |
>IN MY HOOD WE GO HARD NONSTOP NEVA STOP PLAY THE ROLE CLAPPIN NIG'S WITH THE DICE ON THE FLOOR MAKE ME A SANDWICH KICK ME UP SOMTHIN GOOD IF YOU AIN'T ALL OR NOTHIN YOU AIN'T FROM MY HOOD
Lel |
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Aristios
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| 11 Apr 2014 07:03 PM |
| ....... I swear you kids are annoying |
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| 11 Apr 2014 08:53 PM |
| 18. With my own car and house and job. Now you are gonna tell me to get a life because i'm 18 on roblox? Grow the fruck up. |
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| 11 Apr 2014 09:04 PM |
| You drawing conclusions and making a statement like that makes me doubt your age. Do you have evidence? A picture? |
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| 11 Apr 2014 09:31 PM |
| I am not gonna sit here and argue with a little child who beg's for proof of somthing he can't handle. Why don't you stop stalking this post? Kid's these days |
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| 11 Apr 2014 09:33 PM |
| What are you people talking about this is a 65/10 this rap is amazing |
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| 11 Apr 2014 09:39 PM |
"I am not gonna sit here and argue with a little child who beg's for proof of somthing he can't handle. Why don't you stop stalking this post? Kid's these days"
Prove that I am a child or that you are 18. |
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| 11 Apr 2014 09:51 PM |
| Yes you just proved it. You are mimicing me. Ha only kid's do that. Grow up child. |
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| 11 Apr 2014 10:35 PM |
| How did I mimic you? You are proving how childish you are right now if anything. I was quoting you. I always use that format to respond to posts that are not directly preceding mine. |
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