Aristios
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| 10 Apr 2014 08:07 PM |
Aristios-
Um after the first verse you prayed to invisible spirits mythological chronicle curses Still sitting on the street using faith you haven't seen me yet you're still looking for space between Robloxian women And trick's in subliminal messages Stressing it you've been confessing a lot but maybe I still stress it over the stretching treacherous truth. Last thing I called her was bigot she called me satanic illuminated rehabilitated situated teen-aging engaging situating sympathetic debating grazing gazing on cosmos To describe you I've been deceived by the belonging to 1 Direction. I'm deaf to your ignorant perception confessions of lessons from parent's with sad questions.Breaking my situations With dissections. I'm a tornado forget hurricanes you're a silly racist couch potato. If I was a cracker I have a no trapper representing my white chiropractor while you still have the sun kissing you're slackers. You'll be hung for treason reason of the season of execution of excusing polluting schooling kid's of the intruding bruising the kid's born of snoozing. I'm collapsing on rednations Yet they believe in the white robed creation. I guess I stopped on the logical station Vibrations. |
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Aristios
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| 10 Apr 2014 08:19 PM |
| Are you asking me to collab? I'm unsure... |
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Aristios
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gogobot22
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:16 PM |
Atheist raps? This is just dumb. 0/10. I'm atheist too, but dissing other people because they believe in something greater doesn't make you edgy.
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Aristios
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:19 PM |
| Nothing new someone who doesn't get the exact point.. |
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gogobot22
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:21 PM |
Explaint it to me then, if you're so smart.
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:22 PM |
| You either opt out of rhyming or just really force it. |
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Aristios
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:23 PM |
I'll gladly explain my lyricism to you.
Basically these guy's are christian's who continuously make hypocritical statements that are clearly all stated on the rap's that they make.I for one think it's ironic so with that being said you most likely won't get it. As long as I know what I actual mean I'm not worried. |
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gogobot22
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:32 PM |
The only thing I saw in your badly phrased ''rap'' is a butthurt atheist that disses the Christians who criticise him. I see nothing about ''hypocritical statements'' Basically, what we saw was ''I HATE CHRISTIANS, HERE'S AN ENUMERATION OF WORDS THAT'LL MAKE ME LOOK SMARTER'' Even your explantation was badly phrased. If you write a rap that you think most ''commoners'' won't get, don't release it to the public. Plus, enumerations don't make you cool.
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Aristios
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:36 PM |
I'm not trying to be "Cool" If you're only criticism for artists is "you aren't cool" I'm not sure even what to say...
Have you even read the interior of the rap? it's more than Christianity and Atheism |
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:43 PM |
You're great, then OH YES YOU ARE SO MUCH SUPERIOR YOUR RAP MADE ME J1ZZ WOWWWWW
Was that what you wanted me to say? I didn't like your rap. I t wasn't clear and didn't have actual rhyming verses, only word enumerations. If you wanted me to criticisize your rap, that's what I did.You wanted this, stop whining and get over it.
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Aristios
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| 10 Apr 2014 09:48 PM |
You obviously didn't read the rap....
There are plenty of syllables and blatant rhyming word's read the entire thing other than what you've been talking about because you obviously haven't read the rhyming bars. But that's okay
I mean no one noticed the syllables
Chiropractor, Slacker
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Last thing I called her was bigot she called me satanic illuminated rehabilitated situated teen-aging engaging situating sympathetic debating grazing gazing on cosmos
To describe you I've been deceived by the belonging to 1 Direction. I'm deaf to your ignorant perception confessions of lessons from parent's with sad questions.Breaking my situations With dissections. I'm a tornado forget hurricanes you're a silly racist couch potato. If I was a cracker I have a no trapper representing my white chiropractor while you still have the sun kissing you're slackers. You'll be hung for treason reason of the season of execution of excusing polluting schooling kid's of the intruding bruising the kid's born of snoozing. I'm collapsing on rednations |
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