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Re: Fave Gives Feedback: Volume 1

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Faave is not online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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06 Apr 2014 06:03 PM
Link me your videos, and i'll give ye some feedback
if you don't know who i am, then don't show me your video xd
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thergomas is not online. thergomas
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06 Apr 2014 06:06 PM
ok here i just made this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egKacWizqJ8
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Faave is not online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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06 Apr 2014 06:08 PM
lol ironically i replied to ur post i'll just c/p

Takes a bit long to get to the point,
but great director skills
good editing,
Beautiful FPS, much better than mine
good choice of song, makes the battle seem more dramatic and epic.
but the only bad part about it is it gets boring at times.

8.5/10

Good job, you have potential
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Faave is not online. Faave
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06 Apr 2014 06:12 PM
quick note that, me personally, is probably not gonna enter the bloxxys, i usually don't bother with these contests
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RoboticRoby is online. RoboticRoby
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06 Apr 2014 06:14 PM
Some video that took me weeks to make

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gBX6jotYcI
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Faave is not online. Faave
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06 Apr 2014 06:20 PM
@roboticroby

Your intro-

A bit too long, should chop off some of the fat

The video-

can't go wrong with some kevin macleod
you're lucky i don't judge squeakers, so i don't mind the high pitchiness
HOLY CRAP, That noise shed made when he was jumping away was ANNOYING, never do that again, i know you were trying to be funny, but please it's not funny.
really long outro, but a lot of ppl r guilty with that so i'll let it slide

7/10

not that good, but a 7/10 puts you at a C-, so you're still better than most of the crap out there
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RoboticRoby is online. RoboticRoby
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06 Apr 2014 06:43 PM
I will absorb your constructive criticism and poop it out on my next video.

i'm only 11, honestly, I have a deeper voice than most of 'em

The outro, ever seen Phirefox, his intro is over a minute! (I think)

Thanks for saying my videos are better than most of the crap out there.

Thanks for the feedback.
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Faave is not online. Faave
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06 Apr 2014 06:55 PM
no problemo come back for moar
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mathlete97 is not online. mathlete97
Joined: 02 Aug 2009
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06 Apr 2014 07:00 PM
I've been doing this for a while; I want to see what you have to say.

This is the 3rd part in a Let's Play series I'm in the middle of making on Adventure Forward by Explode1.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lH9ruMqDqnY

mathlete97 / PaTcHiZzEl7397 on Youtube
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Faave is not online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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06 Apr 2014 08:00 PM
cool you're not a squeaker
GLORIOUS music :)
the outside gui (the x button, minimize, etc) is quite distracting, why not use fraps, it's the best!
it doesn't get TOO boring, obviously it gets a bit at times, but all commentaries do that.
not too bad overall,

8.5/10

if you want me to be in one, add me on skype @chuck.miner1
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mathlete97 is not online. mathlete97
Joined: 02 Aug 2009
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06 Apr 2014 08:09 PM
Thank you for the feedback!

Messed up the recording window on the episode; that's the reason for the GUI. Usually, it's not there. It's not there in the other parts of the Let's Play.

I will take you up on the offer. I love collaboration. I think (in most cases) it's better for everyone to collaborate. You will receive a contact request shortly after I post this.

Thank you again,

mathlete97 / PaTcHiZzEl7397 on Youtube
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Tempestatem is not online. Tempestatem
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06 Apr 2014 08:27 PM
A quick video I did:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=weBvxMdDuV0


A nice video rejected by loleris because it wasn't good enough I guess:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4xqDr5ST2b4

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Faave is not online. Faave
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06 Apr 2014 08:39 PM
first vid:
low fps but i'm guilty of that
but pretty good
8/10

second vid:
the vid should be a bit wider, why have black bars when that can be video space
can't judge trailers tho,
7.9/10

overall, 7.95/10
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LordDreamDagger is not online. LordDreamDagger
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06 Apr 2014 09:58 PM
State the flaws so I can improve next time ;)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLwr8iBR170

Dream Dagger Studios - A filming company to bring out entertainment and action! Here is a small channel trailer for an example. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLwr8iBR170
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Faave is not online. Faave
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06 Apr 2014 10:22 PM
0/10 scrub

Lol I'm jk
Great like it 9.5/10
But it does rub off as a bit showoffy
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Tentacools is not online. Tentacools
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06 Apr 2014 10:22 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mNpp8WPorio
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Faave is not online. Faave
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06 Apr 2014 10:26 PM
@tentacools

That scream was a bit Too obnoxious but good vid overall
8.8/10
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Tentacools is not online. Tentacools
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06 Apr 2014 10:27 PM
lol sorry for the scream
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EpikIllousion is not online. EpikIllousion
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06 Apr 2014 10:28 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=59grYypnCCo
from last year, but i just want some feedback
3rd place isnt enough
give me some pointers
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Tentacools is not online. Tentacools
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06 Apr 2014 10:30 PM
your video was glorious epik, i see no improvements needed
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iNickk is not online. iNickk
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06 Apr 2014 10:30 PM
I want to make one but I don't know what it should be about
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Faave is not online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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06 Apr 2014 10:34 PM
@epik
Definitely one of the better videos I've seen I can see you getting popular
Clever use of generic voice generatOrs
9.75/10
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Faave is not online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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06 Apr 2014 10:35 PM
@nick depends on what type of vids you wanna make
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routess is not online. routess
Joined: 03 May 2008
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06 Apr 2014 10:38 PM
I have two videos if you do not mind. (One voice acted, the other is not.)

First video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_zuoVcCZv3w

Second video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z6oWE-l_O6c

Everyone shall bow down.
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Faave is not online. Faave
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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06 Apr 2014 10:48 PM
Route,

First vid felt a bit clunky with loading but not bad overall
8/10
Second vid
Intro is a little too long
Lag in character movement towards middle
Good soundtrack
Good director
8.2/10

Overall it's a 8.1
Any submissions after this Will be scored tomorrow
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