Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 06:03 PM |
Link me your videos, and i'll give ye some feedback if you don't know who i am, then don't show me your video xd |
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thergomas
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| Joined: 16 Sep 2008 |
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| 06 Apr 2014 06:06 PM |
| ok here i just made this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egKacWizqJ8 |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 06:08 PM |
lol ironically i replied to ur post i'll just c/p
Takes a bit long to get to the point, but great director skills good editing, Beautiful FPS, much better than mine good choice of song, makes the battle seem more dramatic and epic. but the only bad part about it is it gets boring at times.
8.5/10
Good job, you have potential |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 06:12 PM |
| quick note that, me personally, is probably not gonna enter the bloxxys, i usually don't bother with these contests |
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| 06 Apr 2014 06:14 PM |
Some video that took me weeks to make
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8gBX6jotYcI |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 06:20 PM |
@roboticroby
Your intro-
A bit too long, should chop off some of the fat
The video-
can't go wrong with some kevin macleod you're lucky i don't judge squeakers, so i don't mind the high pitchiness HOLY CRAP, That noise shed made when he was jumping away was ANNOYING, never do that again, i know you were trying to be funny, but please it's not funny. really long outro, but a lot of ppl r guilty with that so i'll let it slide
7/10
not that good, but a 7/10 puts you at a C-, so you're still better than most of the crap out there |
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| 06 Apr 2014 06:43 PM |
I will absorb your constructive criticism and poop it out on my next video.
i'm only 11, honestly, I have a deeper voice than most of 'em
The outro, ever seen Phirefox, his intro is over a minute! (I think)
Thanks for saying my videos are better than most of the crap out there.
Thanks for the feedback. |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 06:55 PM |
| no problemo come back for moar |
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| 06 Apr 2014 07:00 PM |
I've been doing this for a while; I want to see what you have to say.
This is the 3rd part in a Let's Play series I'm in the middle of making on Adventure Forward by Explode1.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lH9ruMqDqnY
mathlete97 / PaTcHiZzEl7397 on Youtube |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 08:00 PM |
cool you're not a squeaker GLORIOUS music :) the outside gui (the x button, minimize, etc) is quite distracting, why not use fraps, it's the best! it doesn't get TOO boring, obviously it gets a bit at times, but all commentaries do that. not too bad overall,
8.5/10
if you want me to be in one, add me on skype @chuck.miner1 |
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| 06 Apr 2014 08:09 PM |
Thank you for the feedback!
Messed up the recording window on the episode; that's the reason for the GUI. Usually, it's not there. It's not there in the other parts of the Let's Play.
I will take you up on the offer. I love collaboration. I think (in most cases) it's better for everyone to collaborate. You will receive a contact request shortly after I post this.
Thank you again,
mathlete97 / PaTcHiZzEl7397 on Youtube |
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| 06 Apr 2014 08:27 PM |
A quick video I did:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=weBvxMdDuV0
A nice video rejected by loleris because it wasn't good enough I guess:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4xqDr5ST2b4
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 08:39 PM |
first vid: low fps but i'm guilty of that but pretty good 8/10
second vid: the vid should be a bit wider, why have black bars when that can be video space can't judge trailers tho, 7.9/10
overall, 7.95/10
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| 06 Apr 2014 09:58 PM |
State the flaws so I can improve next time ;) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLwr8iBR170
Dream Dagger Studios - A filming company to bring out entertainment and action! Here is a small channel trailer for an example. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLwr8iBR170 |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:22 PM |
0/10 scrub
Lol I'm jk Great like it 9.5/10 But it does rub off as a bit showoffy |
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:22 PM |
| https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mNpp8WPorio |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:26 PM |
@tentacools
That scream was a bit Too obnoxious but good vid overall 8.8/10 |
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:28 PM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=59grYypnCCo from last year, but i just want some feedback 3rd place isnt enough give me some pointers |
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:30 PM |
| your video was glorious epik, i see no improvements needed |
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iNickk
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| Joined: 15 Jul 2013 |
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:30 PM |
| I want to make one but I don't know what it should be about |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:34 PM |
@epik Definitely one of the better videos I've seen I can see you getting popular Clever use of generic voice generatOrs 9.75/10 |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:35 PM |
| @nick depends on what type of vids you wanna make |
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routess
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:38 PM |
I have two videos if you do not mind. (One voice acted, the other is not.)
First video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_zuoVcCZv3w
Second video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z6oWE-l_O6c
Everyone shall bow down. |
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Faave
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| 06 Apr 2014 10:48 PM |
Route,
First vid felt a bit clunky with loading but not bad overall 8/10 Second vid Intro is a little too long Lag in character movement towards middle Good soundtrack Good director 8.2/10
Overall it's a 8.1 Any submissions after this Will be scored tomorrow |
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