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madman1119 is not online. madman1119
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25 Jan 2014 09:48 AM
Part 2/#

I am a terrible writing give me a break.

As I am laying in the medical bay of Talus, flashing in and out of consciousness, the thought of my failure is crushing my skull like a large stone. All I can think about is the pale faced man that ordered my death. PraticeraiderX. During all of these thoughts, a few things struck me that were odd. Many of the members of RTR resembled many TRA officer in which I am close friends with. Thinking back to the battle in which we just had, it did seem like a few people were acting extremely sketchy.. like the death of legoexo..

Legoexo was one of the best high ranks I've known yet he fell so easily. I doubt it was a raider who shot him. He isn't the kind of man not to be able to spot a raider trying to ghost capture the terminal. So who fired that bullet? Was he still here? I fade back into consciousness. "Mad!" Sneaky runs over to me as I rub my head. "They got sandiamond" I sigh and lay back down as she reminds me of at least what I thought was a few hours. "How long have I been out" I asked with a grunt of pain. Sneaky replied very vaguely: "A long time". So it couldn't have been the few hours I thought it was. "Sneaky.." "How long have I been out" I ask in a more demanding voice. "Sir.." "You've been out for a week now" "I was sent here to kill you, but as I walked in you awoke" I tried to stand up but the pain in my chest kept forcing me down. "You shouldn't try and stand mad, you have a lot of damage to your chest and lower stomach. My thoughts rushing through my brain like a freight train without breaks. "If I've been out so long, what is sandi's condition?" "Where did they put legoexo" "Who fired that shot.." I ask sneaky to help me out of my bed. "Sir-" "I asked you to help me up" She walked over to the stand next to my bed and got me crutches and helped me out towards where sadmiles and fyritas were positioned.

"Madman!" The HI-Com in the room were surprised of my condition. "You honestly tried to kill me?" I asked jokingly "Considering we have many people that need bed in this place, and the fact you looked like you wouldn't wake up, I thought it would've been better.." Said 02deathpure. I stumble towards him placing my lower arm on my crutch and my hand on his shoulder: "Good thinking" "Next time, don't give up on me so quickly". The HI-Com were impressed with my endurance. "How long until my full recovery?" I asked Sadmiles who was currently leading the medical ward's supplies chains and charts. "Well, there is one way.." She turned to Fyritas, he nodded. "We have experimental elites armour, it ties into your brain and muscles allowing you to "Self repair" or "Regenerate" body parts." "It is still experimental, as I said before so it many not function to the highest quality." She said in a impressively HI-Com like voice in which she never used before around me or the others. I turned to sneaky, she nodded. I looked over to fyritas: "Lets do it."

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grammar = bad I know

tl;dr - I woke up got armour
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thorhayes is not online. thorhayes
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25 Jan 2014 09:50 AM
then the rest of the hicom throw apples at you because you're an elite

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madman1119 is not online. madman1119
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25 Jan 2014 09:52 AM
^
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nator17 is not online. nator17
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25 Jan 2014 09:55 AM
Link to Part 1 please?
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madman1119 is not online. madman1119
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25 Jan 2014 09:55 AM
Part 1: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=123898715
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Gigazic is not online. Gigazic
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25 Jan 2014 10:06 AM
What about Lead officers throwing apples >:3?
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USMCGhost00 is not online. USMCGhost00
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25 Jan 2014 10:08 AM
Can I be in ur story? :P
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thorhayes is not online. thorhayes
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25 Jan 2014 10:18 AM
Sure gig, you can get an apple and splat it in your face.
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Teow is not online. Teow
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25 Jan 2014 10:19 AM
ok

"Thou and I must have a frank discussion" -Anti Mage
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theknightoftime is not online. theknightoftime
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31 Mar 2014 08:56 PM
id surfing ftw

~ hello, theknight here, i wish to say i do not endorse dakimakuras/"hug pillows" in any way, thanks for your time. ~
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thebornceltic is not online. thebornceltic
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03 Oct 2014 02:47 PM
"bad grammar i know" You barely made any mistakes, love this story.
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LordPhantomized is not online. LordPhantomized
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03 Oct 2014 02:52 PM
Didn't know TRA has a story contest.

"The Blue Knight of C&G" -LordPhantomized
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ImperialValor is not online. ImperialValor
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03 Oct 2014 02:53 PM
"01-25-2014 07:48 AM"

They did have one.
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LordPhantomized is not online. LordPhantomized
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03 Oct 2014 02:55 PM
Good luck on the contest.

"The Blue Knight of C&G" -LordPhantomized
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