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| 31 Mar 2014 08:38 PM |
I wrote a story, about a few weeks ago. People commented on how my "grammar sucks" and how "I'm a troll." I actually wrote the story with my friend, and we actually thought it was good.
Well, guess what? I'm HOMESCHOOLED. Which for idiots, this means:
-I'm not expected to have good grammar.
-I'm not expected to know a lot about people, unless books count.
-I'm not expected to be a story writer (which apparently you have to be to write ANYTHING here. Guys, it's a kid website, not a publishing site or fanfiction, it's just a kid site).
-I'm not expected to take criticism, as I don't get bullied much so it really hurts.
Look guys, it is a KID SITE, if you want to "professionally" review a story, you might want to move over to a different website.
Remember when the whole forum was meant to be fun, well it's really turned out to be the opposite. It is a horrid experience, and I've been sending emails to ROBLOX to take down this part of the forum. Which, my friends and I all have, because their stories get criticism too.
Good day, loves. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:40 PM |
I think even homeschooled, you are expected to have even better grammar than usual, or at least on par, unless your mother doesn't teach you grammar.
Point 4 is redundant. You need criticism to get better. |
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PawzKat
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:41 PM |
| SwedishLemon is homeschooled. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:44 PM |
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Okay this is just plain insulting to me. I'm homeschooled and, if anything, I have half-decent stories and plots. |
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vamking12
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:47 PM |
| Swed put your golden foot of bebiness up her ass. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:48 PM |
| I'm nothing compared to Bebi, I don't know why people compare me to him. Bebi is awesome, I'm just kinda... average. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:48 PM |
^
Exactly, Swed is a great writer. You can't compare you grammarlacking purely on being 'homeschool. That's just rude. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:50 PM |
Well to me your closest thing to Bebi we have.
Tap in to his ranting powers of justice. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:53 PM |
[CONTINUED]
I knew I'd get hate on this post, but I'm glad I did, you b*tches really needed to hear that.
I'm not as old as you people, I'm not going to say my age, but I'll just say I haven't been to high school yet.
No, I'm not planning on being a writer when I'm older (as many of you would be happy about ._.), and I CAN handle criticism (unless you just HAVE to disagree).
But I am not talking about just my story, I'm talking about EVERYBODY (almost). My cousin cried because it before (and she's in college planning on being a writer). |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:53 PM |
| Yeah, Swed. You're Bebi Jr. Strike this lass with your godly ranting power. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:54 PM |
| Wow, I can't even complain now, just wow. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:55 PM |
Hate? 90% of the posts have no malicious intent [or at least not really malicious], and you used criticism wrong. Typically, criticism is disagreeing with how you did something. So, your goal is to act tough while actually saying nothing of real content?
Also, I think your cousin might not have the best career for a writer. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:56 PM |
I'm 13 and making better stories.
Swed is 13
Hydre is 11
Your point is? |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:56 PM |
"I'm not expected to have good grammar" - Yes, yes you are.
"I'm not expected to know a lot about people, unless books count" - Yes, yes you are.
"I'm not expected to be a story writer" -Part of writing a story is WRITING A STORY, and writing automatically makes you a writer, so actually, yes, yes you are.
"I'm not expected to take criticism, as I don't get bullied much so it really hurts" - Yes, yes you are. Too young? Get off the internet. Too immature? Get off the internet. Too sensitive? Get off the internet.
"Look guys, it is a KID SITE, if you want to "professionally" review a story, you might want to move over to a different website" - And yet you choose to go to the harshest, most mature parts of ROBLOX; the forums. Some of us are legal adults, or soon-to-be legal adults.
"Remember when the whole forum was meant to be fun, well it's really turned out to be the opposite" - The forum is fun; when you're not an idiot! :D
"It is a horrid experience, and I've been sending emails to ROBLOX to take down this part of the forum. Which, my friends and I all have, because their stories get criticism too" - RP forum has been around since 07, never gonna get shut down. Seven angry emails won't do anything, thousands of losers email ROBLOX everyday to ban someone who called them a noob. Also, in an actual situation, your college professor will criticize you, so will your future boss, and they won't show pity when you start crying that you were homeschooled and so you shouldn't be criticized.
Rant = Completed. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:58 PM |
Have you even read her story?
DICTIONARY DEFINION OF CRITICISM (for idiots)- the act of passing judgment as to the merits of anything. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 08:58 PM |
I'm fourteen.
You're being defensive, and overreacting over the wrong things.
And if you knew this post would get hate, they why did you post it intentionally? |
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| 31 Mar 2014 09:02 PM |
1. I am planning on being a doctor (which doesn't involve much criticism).
2. I wasn't crying, my cousin was.
3. I am currently in the process of making blog posts of an argument about the forum, and emailing them to ROBLOX.
4. Fine, I'm nine, your point is? |
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| 31 Mar 2014 09:02 PM |
I've often found that the 'correct' English dictionary often differs with how people interpret it.
I don't think anyone would agree with that definition, and we don't even know if that's correct. [and I'm too lazy to check.] |
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| 31 Mar 2014 09:02 PM |
Oh yeah, and if your cousin is in college and whining over criticism, she won't like it when the publishers start criticizing her books and refuse to publish them, EVER.
And if a miracle happens and she DOES get published, I'm sure she'll probably end her pathetic life after reading three bad reviews by some book critics.
Yay. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 09:03 PM |
| Even if I posted something not meant for hate, it would get hate anyways, no point in hoping if you just know. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 09:04 PM |
| It wasn't 3, it was way more then that. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 09:04 PM |
| Your gonna make a horrible doctor, if you even make it into college. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 09:04 PM |
BY THE WAY BEING A DOCTOR IS INCREDIBLY STRESSFUL AND ONE WRONG MOVE AND YOU LOSE YOUR EIGHT YEARS OF LIFE YOU SPENT ON GOING TO MED-SCHOOL AND COLLEGE!
Plus people will criticize your methods ALL the time. |
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| 31 Mar 2014 09:05 PM |
| CRIED. ONCE. A. LONG. TIME. AGO. WHAT. DO. YOU. NOT. UNDERSTAND. ABOUT. THAT???? |
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