loner778
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| 21 Mar 2014 02:54 PM |
The sands of time, everything has a price. So does your head.
You are all hunted down for entering the kings/queens palace and stealing a relic that causes sandstorms and a relic of your choice, it must be able to either shift your sorroundings or cause weathers.
Being blessed by the god RA, you went on a journey to get a band of mercenaries or friends to create a army so you could wage war against the sun titan.
Example:
Name: (Make names sound arabic or egyptian) Wosret.
Ability relic: Able to shift sands to create golems.
Bio: Once a king of a castle was caught triying to steal the relic for a war, now left with nothing.
Can you guys please make this grammarized and perfect for a ideal roleplay? Please? |
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soardlo
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| 21 Mar 2014 02:57 PM |
| I....I....I tried....but...I....it...I....-dies- |
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loner778
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| 21 Mar 2014 02:59 PM |
Well... Etleast it gave you cancer. :/
NOBODY CAN DEFEAT THIS MIGHTY BEAST OF UNGrammar! |
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| 21 Mar 2014 03:02 PM |
| I puked in my mouth, just a bit. |
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soardlo
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| 21 Mar 2014 03:06 PM |
~Eye starts twitching.~
Help me.... |
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| 21 Mar 2014 03:16 PM |
I... I'll do my best? ^_^'' I'm not quite sure what it's even supposed to read, truth be told... (EDIT: Mother of pearl! These are some terrifying run-on sentences.)
The Sands of Time Everything has a price, even your head.
You've been hunted down for entering the king's/queen's palace and stealing a relic that can cause sandstorms, along with another relic of your choice. (NOTE: It must be able to either manipulate your surroundings or influence varying weather patterns.) However, after a much needed blessing gifted to you by the sun god, Ra, you prepare to embark on a journey, one of utmost importance, to scavenge for mercenaries or even friends to create an army. War is a wager, and the dice must be rolled in opposition towards the "sun titan".
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CS Example:
[Name] (Preferably Arabic or Egyptian.): Wosret.
[Ability relic]: Able to shift sands to create golems.
[Bio]: Once a king with his very own manor, Wosret was caught trying to snatch the/a relic for his own purposes during war and is now left with nothing but the clothes on his back.
(Editor's note: Sorry if I misinterpreted some of what you were trying to say!) |
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vamking12
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