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| 21 Mar 2014 01:33 PM |
Wake up in half shot half blunt bed
Dragging myself I think i'm dead
Deep in the closet my weapon awates
How do I pass these mental gates?
hook
Addicted to cold harder murder for life
Shot two men, killed their wifes
Hot shot cold assanine strife
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meldo
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| 21 Mar 2014 01:47 PM |
>Wifes >not wives
THIS IS NOT THE PROPER PLURAL!
UNACCEPTABLE! |
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| 21 Mar 2014 01:50 PM |
8/10
Make it longer and I think it would be great. |
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ducky980
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| 21 Mar 2014 01:57 PM |
| TIP: Change the words a bit. |
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| 21 Mar 2014 02:19 PM |
Deep In The Remixes: Deep In The (Pablo Bluebell Remix) |
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| 21 Mar 2014 02:44 PM |
| He killed this rap though for real be honest. yall need to stop hating what that ".1/10" crap you lil B |
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ducky980
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| 22 Mar 2014 12:55 PM |
| ur a duck u dont know talent |
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