ItsMeta
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| 19 Mar 2014 01:53 AM |
Please check it out & subscribe ! :]
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*Ignoring rude comments, SO don't even bother posting them lol*
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| 19 Mar 2014 05:29 AM |
It's ok.
Sorry to have be overcritical but
Could be done better, I don't get in the very first scene the guy next to the car couldn't find the other guy.
First person ladder climb needs to be improved.
Should have used ozzypig's flamingo cutscene plugin for the 0:33 turn, but I understand if you didn't know.
Around 0:51 you could kinda see inside the gun.
0:58 The gun wasn't pointing the other guy, either he has bad accuracy or it was an accident.
The muzzle flash could have been improved with environmental effects like a tiny flash in the background.
"*Player "SubscribeIfYouLikeDisVid" has left the server" Didn't like the username but other then that, everything else was great.
87/100 Solid Rating.
-Lord Dream Dagger/Thereelwarman101
Dream Dagger Studios - A filming company to bring out entertainment and action! Here is a small channel trailer for an example. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLwr8iBR170 |
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supcute
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| 19 Mar 2014 08:55 AM |
reelwarman you are in no position to give critics |
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Storaged
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| 19 Mar 2014 08:59 AM |
Hi MisterObvious
Also, it's a great video Meta! I've been subscribed so I can't really gift you. |
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| 19 Mar 2014 03:36 PM |
| Really well made, make more! |
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ItsMeta
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| 19 Mar 2014 06:13 PM |
@LordDreamDagger, Thank you for the advice though ! I will pay attention to not making the same mistakes again.
Thanks everyone :) |
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| 19 Mar 2014 08:07 PM |
Yeah I love criticism like that it actually helps people, and he said it in a manner that was respectable.
Good Video :P
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honk108
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| 19 Mar 2014 08:42 PM |
| Just out of curiosity.... what editing program do you use? I have Sony Movie Studio Platinum 12.0, but I've yet to attempt a machinima..... |
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| 19 Mar 2014 11:44 PM |
Atleast you're smart to know to learn from the critics.
Others just think I'm hating.
Dream Dagger Studios - A filming company to bring out entertainment and action! Here is a small channel trailer for an example. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLwr8iBR170 |
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ItsMeta
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| 19 Mar 2014 11:49 PM |
@Honk. It's such a tragedy that the channel and video descriptions don't help anymore ); Anyways, I use Vegas Pro 11 !
@LordDream Eh.
Er mah gawd, it's misterobvious ! |
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| 19 Mar 2014 11:51 PM |
the video was so well made it didn't need criticism |
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ItsMeta
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| 20 Mar 2014 04:30 PM |
| Never mind xD I didnt notice it was a machinma, what do you use for the slow moving shots? |
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| 20 Mar 2014 04:52 PM |
| @King, you published yours today, and he published his five days ago. You have no right to accuse him of "stealing" your idea. |
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ItsMeta
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| 20 Mar 2014 08:20 PM |
| @King. What do you mean ? It's a freeze frame in studio :/ |
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| 20 Mar 2014 08:30 PM |
| What did you use to record? |
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Hacker225
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| 20 Mar 2014 08:45 PM |
"reelwarman you are in no position to give critics"
I think everyone has the right to give their own opinion on it. Especially when the opinion is very logical and not stupid about it. |
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ItsMeta
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SimonVIII
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