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| 18 Mar 2014 09:51 PM |
A clicking sound came from OTrainbowdashes rifle, smack the LMaDers brains splattered against the tree into a pink mush, the heat from the glowing sun above made the brains start to sizzle and bubble against the tree. OTrainowdash ran over with his rifle throwing a match at the gory scene, the LMaDers coat lit aflame and the corpse was drowned in flames.
Skanea ran out of the bushes with her machete in hand, she ran up towards OTrainbow dash and slice, OTrainbowdash looked behind only to see the split in half corpse of another LMaDer, Skanea was holding her machete just behind the gory corpse.
"God damnit you scared the rainbows out of me!" Complained OTRainbowdash.
"No thank you Skanea? No I owe you one, damnit you're a real wimp sometimes."
"Don't off me like that." Replied OTrainbowdash a sense of anger growing in his voice.
"I'll off you any time I want!"
"Oh hell no!"
from a rating of firetruck to potato
how was this story test |
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| 18 Mar 2014 09:52 PM |
Potato/firetruck.
~OT's voice of truth and opinion | Oliviajj1337 is my princess~ |
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| 18 Mar 2014 09:56 PM |
your grammar sucks
try reading that out loud |
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| 18 Mar 2014 09:57 PM |
Less language. I despise swear-filled stories. apple. |
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| 18 Mar 2014 09:57 PM |
i was rambling abit
didnt really have much to think about |
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