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| 17 Mar 2014 09:02 PM |
BETTER THAN FIRST
STILL NOT GOOD THO
http://www.roblox.com/GUNS-place?id=149333739
OPINIONS AND CRITIQUE PLS |
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:03 PM |
| the barrel and mag looks funny |
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:03 PM |
@santa
that's exactly what i said but i dont know how to fix it lol |
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chanlison
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HMAX12
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:08 PM |
look at a good gun
make your gun better |
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:13 PM |
| thanks for the feedback hmax |
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Pyroux
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:15 PM |
@pyro
no
this is my second gun ever
it's pretty bad, still tons of improvement to be made |
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z5151
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:21 PM |
you need to learn proportions, that's the issue.
find a side view of a gun, make it a really big decal, and then build it lining up with the decal.
it will teach you how to better proportionalize your builds. |
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:22 PM |
@z(numbers)
ty for useful feedback |
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:23 PM |
The magazine definitely is disproportionate to the magazine holder... thing. Bugger if I remember the technical term.
The barrel, though, is in the middle of the gun's front face. Put it near the top, like most modern guns have it. People won't think it looks weird. |
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| 17 Mar 2014 09:25 PM |
I was semi-basing it off the HK417 (google it for pics if you don't know it)
that's why the parts are so unproportional |
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