FL1PP3D
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| 14 Mar 2014 11:09 AM |
VERSE: BASED FLIPPED GOIN HAM EVERYONE KNOW THAT I'M THE MAN CALL ME MICHAEL JACKSON CAUSE I'M COUNTIN' UP RACKS THROWIN' STACKS UP ON THE STAGE, HO GET YOUR FACTS I'M SLAPPIN' UP THE CLUB CALL ME CODY SIMPSON SHOOTIN' UP YOUR HOUSE YOU CAN CALL ME AL CAPONE CALL ME RUSSIAN WITH 12 CHOPPAS AND 34 PHONES I GOT SWAG JUICE IN MY CUP I FEEL LIKE JUSTIN BIEBER ITS GETTIN' HOT IN HERE I THINK I GOT A FEVER SWAG
CHORUS (X10): SWAGGIN' LIKE OSAMA I HATE OBAMA |
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jessy1677
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| Joined: 08 Jul 2010 |
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| 14 Mar 2014 11:16 AM |
-10/10. Horrible. You have no rhyme scheme at all. Let me repeat NEGATIVE 10 out of 10. ---10/10. read doctor seus.. |
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FL1PP3D
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| 14 Mar 2014 11:17 AM |
i'm amazing you're nothing you're just jealous i have good rhyming unlike your songs you ho go back to the pole and dance for almighty based flipped ho |
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jessy1677
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| 14 Mar 2014 11:20 AM |
Naw thats your job. I could probably, why am i saying probably i spit better than you You rhyme like a basic 3rd grader who just swears alot. Yet again i suggest you read doctor Suess to boost your vocabulary.. HAVE a nice day ;D |
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FL1PP3D
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| 14 Mar 2014 11:27 AM |
Naw thats your job. >denies that its her job and puts it on me
I could probably, why am i saying probably i spit better than you >if i actually tried i'd be wasting my time
You rhyme like a basic 3rd grader who just swears alot. >you're too stupid to get based flipped
Yet again i suggest you read doctor Suess to boost your vocabulary..
HAVE a nice day ;D >no |
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Kurshak
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| Joined: 02 Aug 2009 |
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| 14 Mar 2014 11:49 AM |
| 9/11 best song ever, but you forgot to say "thanks obama" |
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FL1PP3D
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| 14 Mar 2014 11:54 AM |
| lol thanks kurshak and thanks obama |
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:04 PM |
Actually I agree with jessy. You can't have 10 choruses in a row for one thing. Like she said, your vocabulary lacks alot. All I see is a fifth grader's words. You also do not need to bring your personal issues online by saying that you hate our president; its basically irrelevant. I also say that your song is way too short. It could be for a reason yes ,but if your song was great; then we would want MORE not LESS, and I want to ask. What the beep is your chorus? Its obvious that your song is pretty bad, but this is only to help you. If I wanted to rate your song. I'd rate it 0/10, atrocious.
Quote: "If you want to insult me because of my words, then do it in a nice way. Just like I said all of this in the nicest way possible." |
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:21 PM |
Negatives: Their is no rhyme what so ever.
Obviously you just wrote this to get hate.
And i'm guessing 79 words was too much for you, so you just ended it.
Positives: None. |
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FL1PP3D
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:23 PM |
| shut up you white girl all you do is drink starbucks and wear tna and stare at men who cant even defend themselves aka punks so gdfo youre probably fat you little fool |
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:25 PM |
u r too good flipped. numberspam/10
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Kurshak
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:26 PM |
| he's osama bin swaggin were only allowed to put 9/11 |
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:27 PM |
Doesnt matter if shes BLACK, WHITE, PUPRLE, YELLOW, GOLD, SILVER, HEART GOLD, PLATINUM it doesnt change the fact that YOU CANT RAP XD |
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FL1PP3D
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:28 PM |
| and it doesnt change the fact that this is roblx so lol |
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snazzell
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| Joined: 13 Sep 2008 |
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:31 PM |
| omg WHAT IS WITH ALL THE HATERS???? just enjoy it people........ |
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FL1PP3D
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:34 PM |
| the haters are people who take ro music to seriously |
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:34 PM |
Im not a hater. I just hate people who make false claims. He claimed hes the best. This song was horrible.
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FL1PP3D
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:34 PM |
| i am the best, x10 better than you and those ugly "women" |
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snazzell
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:34 PM |
| Yeah because they are too socially disconnected to do anything with their life soooo. |
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:36 PM |
| all the haters r jealous because they can't rap like based flipped. |
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:40 PM |
| no based flipped is the god of all music |
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snazzell
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| 14 Mar 2014 12:41 PM |
>no based flipped is the god of all music
Actually it's a tie breaker between him, Yung Lean, and Lil B. |
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xabi
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